Renton the Rebel

Chapter 1

Captured

Okay, I just had this idea a couple days ago and haven't been able to shake it. So, this chapter will see if it's any good or not. Now a couple things before we start, there are a couple things to go over. First off this wil be Renton x a small harem consiting of Sabine, Maris Brood, Eureka, and possibly Anemone. (That's up to you guys.) Also, Ezra will not be in this story. Though Renton will get a blastersaber like Ezra's. Just with a different color. Now then... Let's kick it up!

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To say that Renton Thuston had been having a really bad couple of weeks would be a drastic understatment. On top of being abused by his long time hero for 20th time after saving his sorry ass for the 5th (and yes on the latter of those, I really did count) he then had his heart broken by Eureka who had just barley pulled through being incased in scubs. Then he ended up being taken in by a couple of Hollands old enimies and while he truly did care for the both them, he refused to be a part of a war he didn't believe in for any longer. So he left (before they found out about his father, incase you were wondering) in search of either piece or something worth fighting for.

'Damn, almost out.' Renton thought as he was looking through the food he had brought with him when he left the Swan before grabbing a protien bar from his pack and taking a bite. After doing so he felt a strange sensation causing him to look over to the left.

"What was that?" Renton asked himself in a low whisper before looking over to his ref board and lifting to the sorce of the feeling. After a few minutes of riding, he came up upon a cliff. As he walked over to the edge of the cliff, he saw men in white armor standing next to what seemed to be some kind of triangular ship.

"Remind be again why were're on this uncharted back water mudhole when we should be going to get more Wookie slaves to the spice mines of Kessel." One of the men asked another one who had an orange shoulder pad on his armor possibly showing him to be the commander of the group.

"Spice mines of Kessel?" Renton asked in a whisper as he continued to watch.

"We were ordered to investigate this world to see if it has any use to the Empire." The comander said just before a floating metal orb flew over several of the men before landing in the commaders hand. "We'll soon find out if that's the case." He said before signaling his troups to return to there ship.

Renton continued to watch them before he suddenly felt like here was somthing coming up behind him. He then quickly turned around to see one of the men aiming a rifal at him. The man then fired the rifalcausing a blue energy ring to come from it. Acting on instinked, Renton rolled out of the way of the shot before grabbing his ref board and slamming the front of it into the mans throat causing him to fall to his knees and grab his throat in pain.

Seeing an oprotunity Renton then jumped on to his board and began to lift out of there. His escape was short lived however as 2 of the men began chasing him on what seemed to be flying motorcycles and began shooting there guns at him. Renton this his best to get away and managed to dodge quite a few of the rings. However one of the rings managed to hit him in the back and knocked him off his board as he fell unconcious.

A few hours later, Renton woke up in a dull grey room which was obviosly ment to be some sort of prison cell. "Atention all hands..." A voice came out of a loud speeker. "Once we have captured the Incurgents and delivered them to the aproaching star destroyer along with our 'guest' from Scoral (What I will call Renton's planet and yes, I know that it was Earth in the show. But I'm changing it for the sake of this story.) we shall leave to join the slave convoy.

'I've got to find a way to get out here.' Renton thought before he began to get a feeling. Ulike the last time this feeling felt... warm. Almost as if a friend was coming.

Meanwhile 3 people and a small orange robot had broken on to the ship. 1 was a man wearing a yellow/green sweater grey pants and a dark green gauntlet and shoudler pad on his right arm with a bird like symbol on the shoulder. The second was a teenage girl in extreamly colorful spay painted pink armor with an orange version of the bird symbol on the left side of her breastplate. The last was large purple fured Bigfoot like creature. (That is the best way I can describe Zeb.)

"Alright, you rember the plan." The man said as he looked to the robot and the armored girl. "Spector 3 and Spector 5, you head to the control room. Spector 4, you're with me." He said as he and the large guy went of down a corridor.

A few minutes later, Spector 4 and the man arived at the ships cell block before the man stopped and closed his eyes.

"Kanan, what's wrong?" Spector 4 asked as the man turned to a door.

"I sence a strong presance in here." Kanon said as he went to the door and walked in to Renton's cell.

"Your walking right in to a trap!" Renton warned them before a cell on the other side of the hallway opened and 5 troopers began shooting at Kanon and Spector 4. Thanfully do to a combination of there skill and the troopers lack there of. Kanan and Spector 4 were able to take them down with minimul effort.

"Come on we gotta move." Kanan said as he and Spector 4 began to run. Seeing no better option, Renton fallowed close behind also managing to grab his board and pack from a table at the entance of the cell block.

The group contined to run before meeting up with Spector 3 and 5. "What happened?" Spector 5 asked.

"It was a trap!" Kanan told her as they aproached there entrance point ad Spectors 3, 4, and 5 went through . However, just before Kanan and Renton could reach it a man in a black uniform grabbed Renton. 'Oh no. The kid!' Kanan thought in a panic trying to think of a way to save Renton.

Renton was stuggling to get free as he noticed the man pointing a gun at Kanon. Renton could'nt explain it. But for some reason, even though they just me he felt connected to the man and couldn't just let him get shot. (Before anyone asks. It's because the force is telling him to trust Kanan.) Renton then let out a slight scream as a pulse came from his body and knocked the man in black down.

"Woah." Kanan said as he looked at Renton. 'The force is strong with him.' Kanan thought at he noticed the man in black starting to get up. "Kid, come on!" Kanon shouted as he lead Renton in to his ship before the door closed and they managed to make there escape. "So, kid..." Kanan began getting Renton's attention. "You want to tell me how you ended up there?"

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And there you go. I hope you liked it. Now, before I sighn off I have a question. I intend to give Renton a blaster before he gets his lightsaber and I want to know what to give him. The choises are DL-44 (Han's pistol), WESTAR-34 (Jango's pistol), a Briar Pistol (As used by Kyle Katarn), and DL-18. (No one really uses 1. It just looks really cool.) Please leave a vote in the reviews and until next time... Keep on keeping on.