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Chapter 5: Bear Attack!
"Wake up!"
Firestar moaned as his father jumped over him, pawing him in the face. "Whats going on?"
"I h-h-heard some rustling from behind those bushes over there!" Jake whimpered like a four year old. His knees were shaking frantically, with his nose twitching and his eyes going in different directions that probably weren't even possible to imagine."
The orange tabby cat stood up and stretched his back. His fur flat unlike Jake's.
"Are you sure it wasn't Tigerstar snoring?" Firestar asked, remembering how he had to wear headphones the night before when he and Tigerstar had to share a tent because Scourge had kicked out Firestar and Pinestar forced Tigerstar to share a tent..
Jake looked at Tigerstar. "No. He's sleeping like a little angel."
"More like a little piece of crap!" Firestar mumbled before following his father out towards the bushes.
As the two flame colored cats padded towards the bushes, the rustling sound picked up again. Firestar's eyes widened in shock before picking up two long sticks and tossing one to Jake, who horribly caught it. "Ladies first."
"Don't you mean fat cats first?"
"Don't you mean kittypets first?"
"We're both kitty pets!"
"How about rock paper scissors shoot?"
"Fine."
The two cats each held out a paw. Rock paper scissors shoot!
"Darn it!"
Rock paper scissors shoot!
"Darn it!"
Rock paper scissors shoot!
"Darn it"
The leaves started rustling again.
"Bear!" Firestar shrieked as he whacked the so-called bear on the head with his stick before barely picking up his father and throwing what he could at it.
The 'bear' leaped out at Firestar before growling to him; "Can I cat get some privacy while using the bathroom?!"
"Oh." Firestar grinned sheepishly; not noticing the look of terror spreading on Scourge's face. "Then I guess there is no bear."
"No," Scourge stammered. "The bear is right behind you!"
Firestar turned around as he saw the bear. Its giant claws that could break a cat's neck in a single swipe glimmered in the moonlight. Its teeth sharp enough to pierce bone.
The three cats looked at each other in awe and in shock.
"What do we do?" whispered Jake silently, with his tail puffed up and neck fur rising. "If we die, I would just like to say I loved Scourge more."
Scourge snickered "Ha!" while Firestar hissed at his father before returning his gaze to the bear.
Scourge's eyes lit up. "I have an idea. How about one of us distracts it. I'll bite it and then we run." Scourge tried to moving towards the bear only to get his eardrums destroyed as the bear roared while standing up on its hind legs to look bigger. "Eat Firestar he's fat" shrieked Scourge as he tried running away.
"Daddy! He called me the f-word AGAIN!"
"Not now Fireshart!" Jake called over the roaring of the bear. Jake dashed up a tree along with Scourge and Firestar, who only slipped and grasped onto the tree brach by a paw.
"Long live the king..." Scourge grinned as he slowly unsheathed his claws onto Firestar's paw.
Jake just glared at Scourge. "Scourge, don't feed your brother to the bear."
Scourge pouted before pulling up his brother.
"Sheesh, Fiery, you really do need to loose weight!"
"NOW IS NOT THE TIME TO DISCUSS MY DIETARY CHOICES." Firestar screeched as the bear roared and pawed at the tree.
All of a sudden, another louder growl sounded over the bushes, in the direction of the campsite. The bear stopped pawing at Jake and his children and cocked an ear, listening to the sound.
"Oh, great," Scourge rolled his eyes. "We're about to die, and we have to do it serenaded by the lovely sounds of Tigerstar the chainsaw-nose!"
"SNNNOOOORRRRTTTT" replied Tigerstar.
However, the bear seemed interested. With a low grunt, the tall animal backed away from the tree with the cats in it and lumbered towards the sound of the noise, back towards the tents with the sleeping Pinestar and Tigerstar...
"Do we have save them?" Asked Scourge selfishly.
Without waiting to scold Scourge, Jake bursted towards the camp. "I'm coming for you P'ster old pall!"
Firestar and Scourge looked at each other and shrugged.
"So are going to to do this?"
"I guess so."
The two brothers ran after their father. Scourge rushed to his tent and fumbled around in his back pack before pulling out his PawPhone and hit record.
"SNNOOORRRRRREEEEEE" The still asleep Tigerstar snored loudly and obnoxiously.
The bear lumbered through Tigerstar's tent and picked him up.
"Bad! Shoe! Get away from him!" The still half asleep Pinestar scolded.
The only response was the bear starting to lick Tigerstar, who surprisingly was still asleep.
Scourge, with a look of total shock on his face and his mouth hanging wide open, took a picture with his PawPhone.
"Tigerstar and bear, siting in a tree, g!" Sung Firestar.
The bear looked up from the now soggy Tigerstar. He growled and lumbered towards the four cats.
Right before he got to them though, a burning sent wafted through the air and Scourge stepped out from behind the bear with a lighter in his paw.
The bear roared as it rolled over, letting go of Tigerstar who finally awoke.
"Hunhuhuh?" Tigerstar snorted as he stood up to only to look down at his smoking tail and rushed into the water.
"How did you know how to get the lighter?" They all asked Scourge.
"well, um, uhh..."
The camp was safe, and only Tigerstar was hurt, because Scourge had 'accidentally caught it on fire, and all was for ever safe again...NOT!
Hey guys! I finished chapter four. Rate and Review please, because I may or may not be coming out with a short story next chapter based on Flamestripe and Honeypaw. I hope you liked it! :D
