Alrighty, well, here I am! After so many weeks of the OCs needed, I can finally create the real fanfiction! I'm so excited to begin; as this just happens to be my first one!
Because this is my first story, I welcome advice and constructed criticism with open arms. I definitely want to get better if I can :)
So now that I'm done with this little intro, onto the allegiances. This is copied from my OCs needed…
Allegiances
Thunderclan
Leader: Duststar- sandy brown tom with a ticked brown pelt
Deputy: Aspenfall- brown tabby she-cat with white belly, muzzle, and paws
Medicine Cat: Silverwing- gray tabby she-cat with piercing blue eyes
Warriors: (Toms and she-cats without kits)
Blackstripe- dark tabby tom with yellow eyes
Breezetail- milk white tom with light gray flecks and paws
Skysong-white she-cat with dark blue eyes and a bushy tail
Whitepetal- pure white she-cat with light blue eyes
Cherryleaf- dark brown tabby she-cat with green eyes
Sagecloud- light gray she-cat with blueish-gray slivers all over
Frozenclaw- pitch black tom with a white paw
Cloudspot- white she-cat with emerald green eyes
Treetail- sandy brown tom with dark brown tail
Brownpelt- light brown she-cat
Stormshade- sleek black she-cat with silver stripes and icy blue eyes
Sunstrike- light golden tom with green eyes
Thistletail- long legged golden tabby tom with amber eyes
Flameheart- large dark ginger tom with darker paws and amber eyes
Thrushtail- thick furred brown tom with light green eyes
Tigerlily- golden tabby she-cat with long fur
Apprentices: (In training to becomes warriors; must be 6 moons or older)
Berryleaf- creamy tom with deep green eyes
Duskpaw- dark tabby she-cat with a white chest
Sandpaw- light brown tom with sandy brown feet and green eyes
Brackenpaw- light brown tom with green eyes
Queens: (She-cat nursing or expecting kits)
Honeysong- light golden she-cat with white flecks and dark amber eyes (Mother of Blackstripe's kits: Lionkit; large dark golden tom with amber eyes, Snowkit; cloud-white she-cat with blue eyes, and Goldenkit; small tabby golden she-kit with a white underbelly)
Brightrose- Rose-cream tabby she-cat with light ginger stripes (Mother to Frozenclaw's kits: Nightkit; pitch black she-kit with white paws, Robinkit; Light ginger tom, and Lightkit; rose-cream tabby tom with white stripes)
Frostflower- beautiful cream she-cat with blue eyes (Mother of Thistletail's kits: Icekit; creamy white tom, and Lilykit; cream she-kit with amber eyes)
Rosemoon- lovely calico she-cat (expecting Duststar's kits)
Elders: (Former warriors, now retired)
Loudfire- tabby tom
Shadowclan
Leader: Blossomstar- lovely white she-cat with sparkling blue eyes
Deputy: Driftear- gray tom with small ears and hazel eyes
Medicine Cat: Dawnfur- mottled ginger and brown she-cat with yellow eyes
Warriors:
Flintclaw- dark gray tabby tom with reddish amber eyes
Brownfur- creamy brown tabby she-cat with dark brown eyes
Blisterclaw- yellow eyed she-cat with dark russet fur
Grayspots- spotted gray she-cat
Mapleleaf- brown she-cat with white paws and green eyes
Buzzardgaze- dark cream tom with bright yellow eyes
Fallowheart- light brown she-cat
Ravenfang- light gray tom with black tail
Flamefoot- bright ginger tabby tom with green eyes
Silvernose- gray tom with lighter splotches on paws and nose
Nightfrost- large back tom with dusty green eyes
Iceshadow- fluffy white tom with yellow-green eyes
Ashtail- creamy white she-cat with a dark muzzle and tail
Leopardblaze- unusually spotted tom
Apprentices:
Crowpaw- very black tom with small amber eyes
Darkpaw- dark gray she-cat with black ears and a brown tail
Queens:
Echosong- thick furred creamy she-cat; yellow eyes (Mother to Leopardblaze's kits: Jaykit; mottled gray tom, and Fuzzykit; cream and gold she-kit)
Mothflight- cream and white she-cat with blue eyes (Mother to Nightfrost's kits: Nightkit; black tom, and Thornkit; brown tabby tom)
Riverclan
Leader: Ripplestar- blue-gray tom with blue eyes
Deputy: Oakbreeze- mottled brown she-cat with white chest and bright yellow eyes
Medicine Cat: Stoneclaw- fluffy gray tom
Warriors:
Dovebrook- large white and gray she-cat
Carptail- ginger tom with brown eyes
Cloudshine- pure white she-cat with blue eyes
Willowleaf- light brown she-cat with green eyes
Pebblesplash- dark gray tabby tom with green eyes
Blueflower- dark blue-gray she-cat with green eyes
Streamtooth- light silver tabby tom
Blackstream- lean black she-cat with dark blue eyes
Twistedfang- dark gray tom with jutting gang at a slight angle
Spottedbelly- spotted tom
Slatefang- black she-cat with piercing amber eyes
Apprentices:
Springpaw- thick-furred white she-cat with light blue eyes
Troutpaw- dark silver tom
Barkpaw- gray and cream tom with dark blue eyes
Ripplepaw- light blue-grey she-cat
Queens:
Shadowear- creamy brown furred she-cat with black tipped ear (Expecting Slatefang's kits)
Lilynose- Light cream she-cat with a light gray nose (Mother of Streamtooth's kit: Silverkit; light silver tom with a light gray nose
Elders:
Lizardclaw- gray tom with bright amber eyes
Windclan
Leader: Hawkstar- brown tabby tom
Deputy: Swiftfoot- gray she-cat with orange paws and amber eyes
Medicine Cat: Foxleap- a cream tabby she-cat with white paws and brown eyes
Warriors:
Shallowdawn- soft furred she-cat with light blue eyes
Eagleheart- huge gray-brown she-cat with sharp yellow eyes
Breezeflight- dark grey, bright green eyed she-cat
Falcontalon- dark brown tabby tom
Mousenose- light gray tom with pink nose
Silverfoot- silver tabby tom with amber eyes and one white foot
Longfang- dark cream tabby she-cat with gray stripes and long fangs
Breezeheart- black tom with green eyes
Poppytruth- bright orange tabby she-cat with yellow eyes
Larkgaze- short furred silver tabby tom, nearly blind
Rabbittail- brown tom with blue eyes
Ashstripe- Small gray tabby she-cat with amber eyes
Apprentices:
Whitepaw- light silver tom dappled with white spots
Thornpaw- thick furred golden brown tom with green eyes
Blackpaw- black she-cat dappled with ginger and golden spots
Cherrypaw- russet tom with soft hazel eyes
Queens:
Birdtail- light cream she-cat with brown and white tail (Mother to Falcontalon's kits: Hawkkit; dark brown tom with white paws, and Berrykit; Light cream tabby she-cat with dark brown stripes)
Sweetfeather- pinkish tabby she-cat, green eyes (Mother of Rabbittail's kits: Barkkit; brown tom with green eyes, and Tinykit; very small pinkish tabby she-cat with blue eyes)
Elders:
Leafbreeze- light brown tabby she-cat with dark brown stripes
Cats outside of clans
Samson- Large light golden tabby tom kit with hazel eyes
Delilah- Gray she-kit with yellow eyes with occasional amber patches
Zing- blue loner tom with a yellow belly
King- Black tom
Heather- golden-orange tabby she-cat
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A chilled breeze blew softly into the hollow of Thunderclan's camp as an aura of nervousness was being washed across the cats sitting outside, multiple pairs of glowing eyes peering anxiously towards the nursery, where their previous deputy was now laying, huffing and yelping in agony.
The beloved queen was just beginning to start her kitting, and every cat in the clan knew that with their parents, these kits would be a most promising bunch. They all sat in silence as the last bit of sunlight was being swallowed up by the golden horizon ahead, and suddenly a loud yowl erupted from the nursery, which sent many shifting uncomfortably. There was a brief pause, the cats still and wary. "I do hope she's alright," meowed a new warrior, Stormshade, as her black pelt prickled with unease. A white and gray tom nodded his agreement; "We don't need many more kits than we already have, but the kits of Rosemoon and Duststar are bound to be something extraordinary."
Another wail of pain came from the den, and a black tom looked around, a small glint of humor in his eyes. "If kitting hurts this much," He murmured, loud enough for everyone to hear. "Then I am glad Brightrose did it for me." The Rose-cream she-cat shook her head with disapproval, but amusement was shining in her bright eyes.
"Brightrose?" A small tom mewed to his mother, looking up. "Is Rosemoon getting hurt in there?"
"No, Robinkit," Brightrose purred. "Her kits are only arriving now. You won't be the youngest in the nursery anymore!"
Robinkit beamed, and one of Frostflower's kits, Lilykit, tumbled past Robinkit. "Where will the kits come from?" She asked with confusion.
"I heard they were in her belly," Robinkit whispered to the she-kit, then whispered the same phrase again louder than before, as if hoping the whole clan would notice how smart he was. Lilykit's head cocked. "Did she eat them up?"
Frostflower opened her mouth, about answer her kit's question when a hiss of pain came from the nursery, and then a loud huff of exhaustion. Duststar stood up immediately and came pounding over to the den. "Is she done?"
The little medicine cat, Silverwing, poked her furry head out of the nursery and nodded slowly, a bittersweet look in her eyes. "Yes, your mate has kitted," she mewed softly. "Two toms and a she-kit."
Duststar peered in through the den's threshold past Silverwing's head, catching a few glimpses of his mate and kits, then looked back at the medicine cat. "I'd like to see them, Sivlerwing."
The medicine cat shook her head slowly, her eyes closed. "I'm afraid you should wait a little before you come inside."
Duststar huffed rather arrogantly and puffed out his chest. "Apologies, but, I don't want to wait to see my new family. As your leader, I demand you let me see my kits now."
Silverwing's face furrowed up at the order. "Alright, if you insist," she sighed. "But I warn you, Duststar, you may not like what you see."
The brown leader instantly took on a concerned expression. "Let me see them," He meowed grimly, his furs nervously on end. Silverwing nodded curtly, and stepped aside to let Duststar in.
As the large sandy-brown tom stepped inside, he saw his mate and three kits laying near a corner. Aside from the very small puddle of blood beside her, Rosemoon looked absolutely fine. Her eyes, besides being full of exhaustion, held both grief and worry inside of them. When he looked down towards his mate's belly, Duststar noticed that only one of the kits-a slick calico she-kit-was alive and suckling. The other two toms remained still and silent.
"Are they…?"
Duststar didn't need to finish, for his queen was nodding sadly. "I'm sorry, Duststar," she mewed gloomily, looking up. Rosemoon shifted in her nest, brightening a little. "At least we still have one. And she's much better looking than those two toms, anyway." The tiny she-kit seemed to notice the mention of herself, and wriggled around with a strong mewl.
"Yes, she is a delightful one, isn't she?" Duststar purred halfheartedly. He did still want sons, but this daughter may have been enough to fill that gap. "Have you come up with a name for her?"
Rosemoon shook her head. "Not yet. She's too special for a name to come up just like that! You can help me think about it, so we can name her before her eyes open up."
"That seems fair," The leader meowed, and instantly started thinking. "Do you like Spottedkit?"
Rosemoon let her head fall onto a mossy heap. "Its fine, but I don't think it fits her perfectly." She commented, glancing down towards the kit who had just finished her suckling. "Do you think Flowerkit would suit her?"
"Too vague," Duststar countered. "We need something that really brings out her beauty. The name we choose will stick with her for her entire life."
"Then…" The queen paused. "How about Amberkit?"
"Amberkit?"
"Yes," Rosemoon purred, slowly curling her tail around her tiny she-kit, who was now sleeping with peaceful sighs. "Her amber spots are absolutely gorgeous, and she'll almost certainly take on our amber eyes."
Duststar gave a joyful mrrow, brushing muzzles with his mate. "It's perfect." He said, soon giving the newly named Amberkit a gentle lick between the ears. She mewled softly in response, giving a gentle bat with her tiny paws. Both cats were so lost in the joy of one kit, they hardly noticed that Silverwing was now moving the others to be buried outside the nursery. It seemed with a daughter so wonderful, not much more was needed. After moments of blissful silence, Duststar meowed softly; "I must be going, and you need your rest. Make sure to eat plenty, and take every herb Silverwing gives you!"
Rosemoon sighed with exasperation. "Just because I've kitted doesn't mean I'm stupid!" She protested. "But goodnight, dear." The queen gave a warm nod, and watched as Duststar hesitantly left the den, certainly not wanting to leave his family, but knowing that they definitely needed their rest.
Rosemoon yawned after her mate left, suddenly aware again of how tired she was. She curled up tightly around Amberkit, and let her eyes close. With joy, she fell fast asleep, letting the tiny breathes of her newborn kit lull her down. Though, as she slept, words were echoing quietly in her mind. Good will envy better, and better will envy best. None will rest until they undo the goodness of the best.
Hey, a prophecy! Well, sort of… its more supposed to be a warning or like a message. Something of that sort at least. Is it too poetic? If you all think it is, just tell me, and I might as well fix it up.
Well, that's where I'm going to end it for now. My cat keeps trying to catch the cursor, so it's getting hard to type.
Please review and tell me what you think! I will answer everyone :)
~Star
