The Hated Prodigy

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"Well it is finally time for the exam" Naruto stretched. "So how are you guys feeling about this?"

"Anko said it was in room 301" Yukari ignored Naruto's question.

Katsumi raised an eyebrow "Cold... and calculative" she stated in a whisper. 'Yukari is different from before, she is not giving Naruto the time of day or making chit chat'.

"Fine everyone just ignore me then" Naruto huffed to himself. "No really just ignore me..." he spoke with heavy sarcasm "seriously... hn"

Yukari turned around to Naruto with only her eyes glistening past her high collar clothing "you don't need an answer to your question, we trained day and night for this, we should feel confident with high self esteem". She shrugged "maybe a little tired as well but not much else"

"I feel nothing out of the ordinary, that's because the exam seems less of a worry than missions we have already done, also there is slight muscle ache from sensei but nothing too bad" Katsumi analysed. "We should go in now, being late is not highly recommended".

"Yeah I would guess that as well" Yukari began to make her way to the room with Naruto and Katsumi tailing behind her.

"Come on let us through" Lei spoke in her unnaturally loud voice before she was pushed aside rather easily. "We came here for the chunin exams".

"Heh" a boy who looked around 13 with black hair and a thin white band around his face smirked cockily. "Don't worry we are actually helping you out here, you will get hurt if you take these exams, you might even die in the exam".

"Look if you can't even get past us, then you should just quit on trying to become chunin" the second boy with a bandanna headband spoke.

Tenten bent down to help Lei up "please le us through we are supposed to go in there"

"No can do, stop trying to act tough by trying to enter these exams" the second one stated.

"Wow that's harsh" a random genin spoke up

"Harsh... no do you want to know what's harsh?" Yukari moved past the crowd. "My brain trying to comprehend all of you trying to go into a third floor room through a second floor door". Yukari sighed "you could of at least changed the other signs as well, rookie mistake".

"So you saw through us did you" the first boy smirked. "well now you have to deal with this..." the boy began to go into a taijutsu stance but felt a cold object against his neck.

Yukari narrowed her eyes as she held her kodachi under his chin "now, now don't start a fight unless you know you can win".

"Y-yeah sure, I will remember that" the boy gulped nervously as Yukari removed her blade away from his neck. 'What the hell has Anko been teaching her team, speed like that is very taxing on the body of a young genin... no she has the body of a chunin, it looks like that was her normal speed, damn it Anko did you keep them behind so you have an OP team in the exams'.

"Come on Lei, Tenten you can stop with your fake injuries now" Neji had narrowed eyes. He then turned to Yukari "Y-Y um... Yukari..." Neji's sharp expression turned mushy as his face turned bright pink with embarrassment. "P-please b-b-b-be... pleased to meet you" he finshed quickly with a shaky hand going for a hand shake. Yukari's eyebrows twitched in anger and feminine fury as Neji's eyes rotated on the view of her bust to her thighs and nether regions.

"The longer you stare the more painful it will be when I cut everything off" Yukari gave a death glare as killing intent brought almost everyone to the ground. Yukari grabbed Neji's face with her hand and tightened her grip.

"Hn what's wrong are you on your period little whore" a silence echoed throughout the corridor as Yukari turned around to the speaker everyone parted so Sasuke was in clear view with his team behind him. "Don't look at me with those eyes, I know you want to suck me too but I don't go for sluts but maybe if you shake your ass enough, I might let you bare young Uchihas"

Yukari laughed "Okay sasuke I will" in speeds clearly above genin, Yukari closed the distance between them carrying Neji like a rag doll and slammed her boot into Sasuke's chest pinning him against the floor. "You seem like you want a blow job first, well I have the right equipment for the job" she shook Neji in the air. "Enjoy" Yukari grabbed the helm of Sasuke's shorts and threw Neji's head in then took out some Ninja wire and wrapped in around Sasuke's waist, keeping Neji there. "If anyone releases them, expect me to say hello".

"That was a bit much don't you think?" Naruto had cold sweat running down his back.

"I wouldn't say anything" Katsumi whispered to Naruto.

Yukari huffed with her hands on her hips "no I think I was perfectly reasonable, why are you going to defend them or somethin'... hm"

Naruto shook his head quickly "it's just when I accidentally touched you and you never went to such extremes".

"Do you really think so little of me" Yukari gave a serious look. "I may scar others mentally or physically but I won't do that to my friends... while I might give you a slap for looking at parts of me in a certain way or touching selected areas" Yukari sighed. "Look the point is you are slow on the... feelings side, so you looking at areas or touching me will be accidental and nothing more".

"But..." Naruto started but Yukari put her finger on his lips.

"Don't give me a reason to do that to you" she pointed to the mess of Neji and Sasuke making Naruto have a cold shiver. "Aww don't worry little Naru" Yukari captured Naruto in a headlock. "I would never hurt you, your so cute when your nervous" she tightened her headlock to pull Naruto with her while unintentionally giving her back a rest by resting her bosom on top of his head. "Come on Katsumi we have an exam to complete" Katsumi nodded following silently as everyone else just stared in disbelief while some just left in the opposite direction of the exam room.

"Yosh wait for us you three" Lei grabbed Neji's leg and pulled his unconscious body away from Sasuke.

"Sometimes I wonder if I am the only normal one in the group" Tenten muttered to herself as she dragged her feet behind her team.

"Um... Sasuke are you alright?" Sakura bent down to help him up while Sai just stood and smiled.

Sasuke gritted his teeth in wild fury "I'm fine" he replied sharply. 'That bitch... she is learning directly under that self righteous prick Yin, he taught her to be that powerful'. Sasuke push sakura off him as he stood up 'although I hate to admit it, the power Yin offered would give me a great benefit as a Uchiha elite I will benefit even more than her and be able to take care of him'.

(Exam room)

"Come on are you going to let go of me anytime soon" Naruto struggled to remove himself from Yukari's iron grip.

"Fine" Yukari released Naruto allowing him to jump for joy at the taste of freedom.

"I won't jump for joy just yet" Naruto blinked as he felt a weight land on his head then another heavier weight jumped on his back before two slender arms wrapped around his head trapping him in another headlock, this one more painful than the last.

"Amaya... get off me it hurts" Naruto strained out.

Amaya relaxed her headlock and spoke quietly into his ear "it is what you deserve after you saw me... having fun". Steam rose from the top of Amaya's head "You didn't tell anyone right?" Naruto shook his head quickly, Amaya smiled softly using her position on his back to press her body against Naruto's back with little resistance. "That's good, I wouldn't want others to find out I was masterbating hard over you" she spoke huskily into his ear, loud enough for only him to hear.

Naruto shivered at her voice as he felt her body grind on his in the most forward way possible, like a true Inuzuka."Wait you were doing that over me?" Naruto questioned.

Amaya stopped grinding against him in shock "you never knew..." She growled quietly then returned to grinding "I guess that won't matter now but do me a favour".

"What is it?" Naruto asked less worried as Yukari stopped giving them a strange menacing look and began chatting with Choma and Shika.

"I want you to watch me" Naruto twisted his head to look at the cat lover and gave her a look asking her to elaborate. "I want you to watch me touch myself, I want you to see everything I do, everywhere I touch, my smell, absolutely everything". She wiggled in embarrassment and in the rush "you don't have to do anything but watch if you want but if you are feeling adventurous, you could lend me a hand"

"That's a bit much isn't it, what are you a open pervert?"

Amaya hummed in agreement "only to you..." she bit his ear sensually and hopped off his back. "See you around" she licked her lips leaving Naruto dumbfounded while his eyes were locked on to the sway of her hips as she walked.

"Yo Naruto" Kiba grinned while Akamaru gave a yip as a hello. "Have you seen a ghost or something, you look a bit pale".

"I think I have just been part of foreshadowing of my future" Naruto sighed "I am dead basically".

Kiba shrugged "you are not making any sense but I guess you are having bad luck lately"

"Let's not forget, you seem to have bad luck as well" Naruto reminded Kiba.

Kiba growled "Yeah that bastard Yang came in on my sister and then she has been all bitchy lately... well she was bitchy before but now it is on a whole new level and it's pissing me off".

"I get y-" Naruto started.

"ALRIGHT MAGGOTS" a shout echoed through the exam room gaining the attention of every team inside as they looked in the direction where the sound came from. A moment later a puff of smoke appeared revealing Ibiki and four invigilators, two on both sides of Ibiki. "Listen up brats I am going to say this once and only once, I am the rules of the chunin exams, if anyone would like to question this rule go ahead but be ready to walk out the door a genin for the rest of your life". Ibiki strutted around the room "now while I may not be taking the exam on due to bias reasons of having a team in the exam myself, your lovely examiner will explain the details of the first test however I will give you one warning do not break the rules to suit your needs or you will regret it, now without further ado prepare yourselves, as you shall now start you exam".

Chapter end

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