And here it is the first chapter of the official rewrite for the 'Bloodfeud' series. Now this time around i will be adding in more plot details and twists, add new characters as well as new chapters and a more original back story for Bloodfeud/Drake. The core of the story will remain however and it will still be the same character you know and love. Anyway I hope you enjoy and as always: flames, praise and advice are all accepted.

For every bright light, there is a dark shadow.

Obi-Wan Kenobi noticed his wrist communicator flashing as he was talking to Anakin. He activated it, the figure before him dodging blaster shots and swinging his lightsaber in defensive motions. "General Kenobi?!" the man said in a panicked tone. "Yes Master Barrek?" Obi-Wan asked.

"Need immediate evac from Planet Hypori! Our forces are totally destroyed! Not many of us left!" Barrek said as he dodged left and right on the small hologram.

"There's some new Sith general! He's unstoppable! You must hurry, General Bloodfeud is hunting us! GWAAAAH!" he yelled as the hologram went dark

. "Master Barrek?! Come in Master Barrek!Master Barrek are you there!?" Kenobi started yelling in alarm. When he gained no reply he and Anakin shared a look of worry. This could not be good.

Hypori

Kenobi's communication was cut off as a large armored boot smashed the communicator.

The droids continued firing at the downed Republic assault ships in an effort to wipe out the surviving Jedi. A pale, clawed hand raised up into the air, and the droids ceased fire.

Inside the remains of their starship, the six surviving Jedi were trying to catch their breath. Ki-Adi-Mundi, Shaak Ti, Aayla Secura, K'Kruhk, Tarr Seirr, and Sha'a Gi were the only ones left, and they weren't sure they would get out of there alive.

"He is unstoppable," K'Kruhk panted, his lightsaber in his hand. The others nodded in agreement, their breaths ragged and out of sync. It had been a hard battle thus far and it was taking it's toll on their bodies. And recent events took an equal toll on their minds

"We've never before been outmaneuvered by droids. His strategy is flawless." noted Shaak-Ti in regards to the new general.

"We're doomed," Gi said in a depressed tone.

"Enough of that talk! Focus, we are Jedi!" Ki-Adi-Mundi said in an encouraging tone. Everyone nodded their heads in approval. But then Bloodfeud made his presence known, reinstating the jedi's fear.

"JEDI SCUM," his voice reverberated through the air. His voice was smooth yet commanding and had something within it that struck fear in many people. All the Jedi immediately jumped to attention, heading for all the openings to keep an eye out for the new Sith Lord.

"YOU ARE SURROUNDED, YOUR ARMY IS NO MORE! GIVE IN TO YOUR FATE AND I SHALL GRANT YOU A QUICK DEATH, RESIST AND SUFFER. EITHER WAY PREPARE TO BECOME ONE WITH THE FORCE." Bloodfeud announced. Then everyone got at attention, for they knew that this Sith Lord was powerful. For a few seconds everything was dead silent. Then they heard it. Growling.

It was a chilling sound, shaking them to the bone. The Animalistic ,deep tone made it hard to believe that the sounds were actually coming from a person. It was not unlike a predator giving warning to its helpless prey only second before it's final strike. The growling seemed to echo throughout the remains of the ship.

"That noise..." Shaak Ti said, fear in her voice, a feeling that seemed to resonate with most of her fellow jedi all too well.

"He's coming to fight us, alone," Ki-Adi-Mundi said in a strangely calm tone. 'This could be our chance. Six jedi vs one sith, even one this formidable can't defeat us all.'

Unfortunately Mundi's train of thought was derailed rather quickly by the young padawan next to him. Gi had been the first to crack, and he activated his lightsaber and ran outside, screaming a battle cry.

"NO!" Ki-Adi-Mundi yelled, but it was too late. The padawan ran out into the open, only to be hit with red Force Lightning. He cried in pain until a dark form fell from above and landed behind him. Bloodfeud grabbed both the padawan's arms and pulled. Blood sprayed from the poor padawan as his arms were both torn off, before falling to the dirt and succumbing to his horrendous wounds moments later.

For the first time, Ki-Adi-Mundi got a good look at Lord Bloodfeud. He was humanoid, standing at six feet, one inch in height. He wore almost all black with a red sash and loin cloth at his waist, as well as a red neck scarf. He wore a bare metal chest guard as well matching, form fitting pauldron that protected his shoulders. There were two metal bands going across his stomach with a third going up the middle and connecting with the other two where they intersected before disappearing under his chest guard. On his arms he wore metal vambraces and on his legs he had black trousers tucked into heavily armored knee high boots. Completing his appearance was a black cape, complete with a gray interior and black hood.

Bloodfeud slowly walked towards them until K'kruhk attacked him furiously. Bloodfeud merely leaned and shifted his body away from each slash and stab moving with enough ease and skill to almost resemble a dancer. A deadly one. Bloodfeud suddenly swirled around K'kruhk, pushed his hand hand forward, just before the jedi felt a tremendous force smash into him sending him flying. After temporarily dealing with K'kruhk, the sith charged. He ran faster than any of the jedi had seen anyone do so before and aimed straight for Tarr Seirr .

Seirr sensed his opening and sliced with his blade causing the sith to have lean back, nearly forming a 90 degree angle with his back in order to duck under. Now behind him, Bloodfeud kicked his leg out and swept Seirr's feet from under him. Aayla, Shaak-TI and Mundi rushed to the aid of their comrade, and Bloodfeud was ready, raising his hand into the air, before smashing them down.

"Look out!" called Aayla as bit and pieces of the 'ceiling' of the destroyed cruiser began to fall towards them. As the three scrambled to dodge the incoming debris, Bloodfeud turn back just in time to catch a strike Sierr by his wrist and using his free hand to wrap around the jedi's neck. Sierr was forced to look into the mostly shadow faced of the sith lord. Eye of black scleras and blue irises stared back at him, staring into his very soul.

"Dinner time." chuckled the sith before opening his mouth revealing that his teeth were sharp and pointed, made for tearing flesh, with, what were suppose to be the canines looking more like fangs. He suddenly bit down, causing Tarr Sierr to cry out in surprise and pain. Bloodfeud relished in the taste of copper as the crimson fluids entered his mouth like a flood from the gaping wound created by his bite. He greedily began slurping down as much blood as he could, already feeling the jedi recover and turn to him. And he could tell they didn't like what they saw.

"What-what is wrong with this-this… creature." spat Shaak-Ti at the sight of Bloodfeud's action.. He, not it was no sith lord, it was just a foul beast. One that they must put down.

K'kruhk was the first to act on this belief, charging Bloodfeud with a fierce battle cry. Bloodfeud cut his actions short, and used the hand grasping Sierr's still activated lightsaber and blocked K'kruhk's swing before kicking him away. He then twist Sierr's arm, causing him to drop his lightsaber before throwing the woozy jedi into a wall of debris with several protruding pieces, impaling Sierr in several places and killing him.

Bloodfeud suddenly turned and, using his vambraces, blocked a strike from each side courtesy of Aayla Secura and Shaak-Ti. The two were shocked that his vambraces held up to their lightsaber, which in turned earn a chuckle from the sith.

"Sorry sweethearts," he began in an irritatingly amused tone, "Mandalorian Iron, is a lovely thing. Wouldn't you agree?"

The two jedi jumped back from the sith, landing next Mundi.

"What's wrong, you don't wanna play anymore? And we were just-" Bloodfeud was cut short abruptly when he was put back on the defensive by K'kruhk. In an instant the other remaining jedi closed in on the sith lord. slashing and stabbing at the brutal sith. Bloodfeud block and dodged, flipped past each jedi, moving until he was outside their ranks. Once he was clear, Bloodfeud straightened his body and threw out his arms, to the side.

The Jedi were soon hit by a Bloodfeud's massive force repulse, scattering their ranks once more and Bloodfeud wasted no time taking advantage of this. Using his speed to to his advantage, Bloodfeud charged K'kruhk, plunging his claw into the soft flesh of his stomach before stepping, and delivering a powerful blow to the back of the hunched over jedi's skull. the sharp 'crack' that resounded through the ship was enough to make Shaak Ti gasp. Aayla grit her death before charging the sith.

Bloodfeud blocked several of her swings before flipping over her and swinging with his claws, forcing her to duck. She then tried her luck again, with several precise slashed that manage to back up the sith before stabbing. Bloodfeud twirled around the last attack, putting himself behind her, giving him an opening, and seeing this prompted the other two remaining jedi to charge to aid the Twi'lek before bloodfeud could land a fatal blow. Seizing the opportunity, Bloodfeud grabbed her head tentacles and pulled on them, bringing the jedi with them, The sith then pivots and slams her in the nearest jedi, being Shaak-Ti knocking out both the Twi'lek and Togruta.

Cracking his neck, Bloodfeud began to advance on the two for the final blow, before being attack by the final jedi left standing. Blocking with his right vambrace Bloodfeud spared the Jedi a glance.

"That impatient? Fine then, you can die first." he said turning to swipe at Mundi who jumped back just in time to avoid his strike. The sith lord and the jedi master circled each other slowly, before stopping.

"Any last words?" asked Bloodfeud, cracking his neck. Mundi merely glared at him, "Guess that's a no then."

And then they clashed, and yet Mundi knew he had no chance at victory.

okay first chapter of the remake is officially up! Woo Hoo! I hope you enjoyed it and as i said there will be more chapters, new characters and much more plot details. Until next time, buh bye!

p.s. please review!