A/N: Yes, I know a lot of people were pissed when I discontinued the story. Unfortunately, even all the rage and hate from the fandom will not get me to continue this (although, if I find myself getting interested again, I might do a rewrite, but it is unlikely), but I thought it was pretty shitty of me to just leave you guys hanging and not even offer a summary of what was going to happen after chapter 35.

Keep in mind that this was a story I started when I was 15, and a story I didn't really plan out too well. Everything was all over the place, and eventually writing it became dull, and the chapters I pushed out didn't seem that great (or what 15-year-old me considered great at that time). There are a lot of things I wish I could have done differently, so I'll be including a few of these points in the "summary" as well.

Without further ado, here, beginning with the changes.


Goku and Chi Chi should have interacted a little more and decide that they don't share the love and passion as they once did, and agreed on a mutual break-up prior to the tournament; Goten would have still lived with Chi Chi while Goku took up residence in his grandpa's old house again. Why? Because I really do not condone cheating and included that aspect solely because I was not creative enough to think about another alternative, and thought cheating was "edgy". Blagh. Chi Chi might be a hated character in the fandom, but I should have respected her character a little more.

More romantic interactions between Goku and Caulifla, other than sex, though I won't specify what because I'm too far gone from the fandom to properly imagine any realistic interaction with these characters anymore. But maybe they will disclose their pasts to each other sooner rather than later?

Dampering down on the unnecessary OCs. This was a major complaint, and I can see where I went wrong. I love OCs to death, but I shouldn't have made so many actually relevant to the story. This is a lesson I'm still learning, because I'm doing a similar thing in the story that I'm currently working on (Naruto has more leeway, though). I'll work on it. The only OC I would have kept mostly as it is would probably be Chaya, simply because I made her important to Caulifla, and therefore the plot.

Keeping Freeza as a more neutral villain minding his own business, like in the series, rather than sending him back to HFIL; I had an arc planned for him, but I can no longer remember what it is about. Hah.

Kafara will have a more scientifically-minded personality, rather than being a power-playing megalomaniac, but still enjoys pulling strings from the shadows. She still seeks power, but it is more for her own personal gain rather than a wish for universal dominance, and, after hearing of the Super Saiyan God and the tournament (for plot convenience, the tournament was broadcasted, somehow; I think Universe 2 did that but I can't recall). She wants to turn Caulifla into a SSJG so she can absorb her power, killing Caulifla should it occur. The reason why Kafara is unwilling to test it out on herself is because she knows the power would destroy her own body. Caulifla can contain it as well as damper it to the point where Kafara is able to absorb it via ingestion of her blood. This was something that was going to be put in the original, but I never made it to that point.

After Chapter 35:

After Chaya switches allegiances to family, she informs Goku of Caulifla's whereabouts. Kafara is notified of Chaya's betrayal, and sends Kale to stop them. Kale easily overpowers Chaya to the point where she is very wounded, and engages with Goku in an epic battle. Goku attempts to remind Kale of who she really is but to no avail; she is lost in the darkness of her own mind.

The fight destabilizes the ship, and it's bloody-fucking-chaos everywhere as people try to escape from the battle. The kerfuffle is noticed by the Sadala police people, and Cabba and a squad are interrupted from finding out the truth behind Raidaishi's death and sent to the ship to investigate. Renso is freed in the pandemonium, and discovers Chaya's wounded form. The duel between Goku and Kale has naturally moved to a different area. Big booms and stuff. Kafara is heading to Niifa's lab, where the final stages of the Caulifla God Chi insertion are happening.

Chaya and Renso reconcile, Chaya revealing that she must be his sister, as she is certain from her the glimpses into her own repressed memories that Caulifla is her sister. There reuniting moment has to be brief, however, when Kafara breaks into Niifa's lab, having a showdown with the scientists.

Caulifla is practically screaming in agony as her body struggles to accept the God Chi, alternating between her base, super saiyan, super saiyan two etc. forms, until she reaches the red god form. Niifa refuses to have Kafara touch Caulifla until her body has accepted the chi, but Kafara is impatient, and kills them all (except Niifa, who she only mortally wounds) as punishment.

As she is about to suck Caulifla's blood out, Chaya appears, having been summoned by the fluctuation of Caulifla's chi. She takes on Kafara, despite her heavy wounds, and actually puts up a decent fight before Caulifla awakens, her body having fully accepted the God Chi. Recognizing Chaya as her sister, she launches herself into battle, feeling light and strained at the same time from the trauma her body has been through, and rewards the experiments have reaped. Kafara retreats into the darkness, while Caulifla and Chaya are finally reunited. They have a brief moment of relief before Caulifla urges her to retreat with Renso. After a brief argument, she begrudgingly agrees, leaving the battlefield.

Somewhere in the falling-apart ship, Goku and Kale are still fighting, Kale appearing to have the upper hand. But then Caulifla joins the battle in her new super saiyan god form (not blue). She and Goku tagteam against Kale, and try to have Kale remember who she once was. Kale is being beaten at this point, but the roots of the seeds that Kafara planted run deep.

Outside the ship, Chaya is sensing imminent danger, already on edge from the battle that has now broken the ship into a pile of floating ruins in the sky because of something anti-gravity device still intact or something, remnant of those sky islands you see on fantasy forums. The biggest piece of the ship is where Goku, Caulifla, and Kale are fighting it out. Caulifla has managed to remain unharmed thanks to sheer luck and timing, while Goku is bearing some injuries. They are on the verge of forcing Kale out of her state of mind, and the girl is slowly changing back.

Then Kale sees Cabba's horrified expression in the distance as the Sadala police arrive to take things back into control.

Finally, Kale returns to her normal forms, falling into Goku's arms. Caulifla looks over her, pleased with tears in her eyes, and Kale tearfully murmurs her regrets before passing out. Cabba, down below, starts toward them to fetch Kale, when he notices Kafara skulking in the shadows of the semi-opened-up chamber floating in the sky. He shouts out a warning, zooming toward them but is overtaken by Chaya, who noticed before him. Kafara has managed to time-skip with Hit's ability, launching herself at Caulifla's's exhausted, kneeling form. The clawed hand that should have pierced Caulifla's stomach is taken by Chaya, destroying the majority of her internal organs. A senzu bean will no be effective when she cannot swallow.

Chaya's (barely able to talk, but the message gets across somehow because plot convenience) dying words are to never underestimate the bonds of a family; it is something never to be trifled with. She only wishes that she could have had more time with her family.

Caulifla's mind snaps into a calm state. In her eerily serene grief, she unlocks super saiyan blue, and fights Kafara, the woman who has controlled most of her life and taken everything from her. Goku watches from the sidelines, understanding that this is something Caulifla needs to resolve herself. Internally, he laments the death of Chaya briefly, not knowing that Champa's death has left the Universe 6 dragon balls unusable. Universe 7's dragon balls are not powerful enough to interfere with the workings of another universe, while the super dragon balls are inactive for the next century for plot convenience. It may be a cockroach's lifespan, but there might be a hella old cockroach out there. Basically, Chaya is dead for good. She isn't coming back.

Caulifla brutalizes Kafara before killing her, taking her revenge finally.

Kale, who is now in Cabba's arms, begins to stir, while Caulifla falls to her knees in front of Chaya's dead body, noticing with no small amount of bitterness it was the womb where Kafara first impaled her, the power of the strike turning most of her organs into mush while she was at it. How poetic.

There is a timeskip here.

A scene where Sadala is rebuilding, Kafara's machinations exposed. Cabba gets a solemn press conference, in which he openly cries for the wrongdoings. Sadala is in mourning.

There is a scene of Cabba, Caulifla, and Kale leaving flowers at Chaya's fresh grave. Chaya has gotten the burial of a noblesaiyan. In fact, I'll even put it up. Again, keep in mind that I was still 15 when I wrote this scene, intending to put it in in a later chapter that never happened. This was written before I killed Champa off.


Deleted/extra scene

Along with her comrades, Caulifla trudged up the hillside. Cabba and Kale lingered behind her, the latter holding a bouquet of Planet Sadala's national flower: the Gemalia. Purple-white petals drifted to the ground as Kale shuffled the florets in her arms from side to side. They reached the hilltop just as the sun began to set, dusk descending upon them.

Caulifla stared impassively at the single sword that marked their graves before squatting down to touch her forehead to the cold blade, her raven bangs curtaining her face. "Hello, again."

Cabba and Kale stood in silence as they watched Caulifla. The evening breeze scattered the fallen Gemalia petals, sending them into a gentle whirlwind of colour.

"The demon that killed you is dead," Caulifla declared to the blade. "My comrades and I have defeated her. She is no more, nothing but space dust." She lifted her head slightly. "You have been avenged." With help…

The atmosphere chilled, courtesy of a particularly strong wind, and Cabba wrapped an arm around Kale to keep her warm. The girl's arms trembled, more Gemalia petals fluttering to the ground.

"Talk about Renso," Cabba was muttering, unsure if Caulifla could hear him or not. "Tell them about Renso and… and Chaya too." Talk about how brave she was.

"Renso wronged me," Caulifla went on. "But… I've forgiven him." Her voice became strained. "The past is behind us. And, Mother… We found her. She lived that night. They butchered you; tore her out of your womb, but she still lived. They named her Chaya, 'the child of no one'." And the sister I never knew. Please be proud of her. She gritted her teeth in anger and wrapped her hand around the edge of the sword. Tiny droplets of blood landed in the earth.

Cabba felt a tremor run up his arm; Kale's shoulders were trembling with each sob. He pressed himself against her and she calmed slightly at his warmth.

"Chaya is dead," Caulifla said plainly, "I failed to protect her." She lowered her body even further and didn't stop until her head touched the floor in a pitiful bow. "I'm sorry. Forgive me." Tears mingled with blood in the dirt. "Forgive me…! Oh god – please forgive me…!"

Kale observed her 'sis' with wide, tearful eyes. Never before had Caulifla's protégée seen the older woman exhibit such a display of weakness. For as long as Kale had known her, Caulifla had always kept herself cool and composed. As a leader, it was a necessity.

"She slaughtered her!" Caulifla's voice increased in volume. "SHE SLAUGHTERED HER LIKE A PIG! EVEN AFTER EVERYTHING SHE'D DONE FOR HER THAT DEMON STILL KILLED HER –" She cut herself off, her chest heaving. "Chaya is dead. Chaya is dead."

"Caulifla, that's enough," Cabba started, wanting to nip the source of Kale's distress at the bud. "W-we can still wish her back."

"No, we can't," Caulifla ground out, "because Universe 7's dragon balls do not have the power to interfere with the happenings of other universes." She laughed harshly. "Of course, there are the super dragon balls… But the God of Destruction has hold over them. There is no way that fatass will ever let some mortal use them for something so," she spat out the word, "trivial."

"But we fought for Universe 6. Surely that is enough for Lord Champa to relent."

"Our participation in that god forsaken tournament means nothing to Champa. So what if fought for the survival of Universe 6? We still lost and were erased in case you forgot!" Caulifla turned around, her eyes hollow with despair. "Chaya is dead, Cabba. And she's never coming back."

Kale was silent as she watched Caulifla walk away from the grave of her mother and father. She watched as Caulifla descended the hillside. She watched as Caulifla retraced her steps down the winding pathway. Then she moved forward, nudging Cabba to the side. Like Caulifla had done before, Kale knelt in front of the sword, now slick wet crimson. With quivering arms, she laid the Gemalia bouquet upon the earth.

As he stood behind her, Cabba barely heard her whisper, "I'm sorry."

"None of this was your fault," Cabba pointed out gently. "You're not to blame."

"That's where you're wrong, Cabba. I am. It is my fault; if Chaya didn't take that for me… I'd be dead right now and she'd still be alive. Caulifla would be happy."

With a sigh, Cabba, took her by the arm and led her down the hill. She did not protest. They walked the trail in silence, meadows turning into forest and foliage. On the horizon, they could just make out the local bazaar, still busy and bustling at this hour.


After that, Cabba, Caulifla, and Kale would have all reconciled with each other and Goku. Caulifla and Goku get back together after some heartfelt stuff, discussion of grief, etc. She returns to Universe 7 with him, while Kale and Cabba stay behind in Universe 6, promising to visit.

Kale is afraid what will happen if Caulifla leaves her, but Caulifla tells her that she has a lot of growing up to do on her own. She can no longer be so dependent on Caulifla about everything, and accepts that. She starts her journey into a new life by joining the police force. Corruption from Frost's former empire has been weeded out thanks to Caulifla and Goku's new statuses as heroes of Sadala. She will have to do a lot to earn back the trust of the people, but she believes that everything will be okay, knowing that she has the support of Cabba and his family.

Before Caulifla leaves, she goes to her old gang. She even bows to them, thanking them for all the good years they had given her. The gangsters are moved, and some even comically cry into their arms as Caulifla smirks.

Then they are gone to Universe 7, where things work themselves out. In the final scene of the final chapter, Caulifla reveals to the audience that she is pregnant, standing outside on the cliffside with her hands folded comfortably on her still-flat stomach. Then she returns to where Goku is sleeping, resolving to tell him later. She smiles as she falls asleep.

Family is important to her, and she will do her best to look after their new child, who is bound to be powerful.

Then the epilogue.

Saiyan kids. Just... saiyan kids. Happily ever after as it can get. Firstborn is a female named Chaya, after her sister, and the second (and last) child is a son. Name undecided.


A/N: And that's it. I guess I'll see you in oblivion.