Before I start this, I don't know if any of you would read this. I am currently reading the light novels which is what it'll be based around. I will use an OC instead of Saito because I don't want to accidentally make him OOC. I will be using the novel version as my basis of this fanfiction, just so you know. With that out of the way, let's start chapter one!

(What you are about to read is an, hopefully, better version of this first chapter. Enjoy!)

Chapter 1: Portal To Halkeginia

"See ya guys later." He says walking out the door of his parents house. He is getting ready to leave for a walk. The boy has enjoyed this since a young age. He is now in his second year of highschool at the age of sixteen. He is wearing a black jacket with a black T-shirt under it. His pants are just a regular pair of black pants and shoes.

His mother passes by him, but stops as she catches sight of what her son is wearing. "Must you go out looking like some rebel?" She asks jokingly. "Your black hair is bad enough already. If it wasn't for your blue eyes you would be taking after your father completely."

The only thing she gets is a deadpan stare. "I just don't feel like wearing bright colors today." He responds shrugging.

She smiles warming anyone who can see it, in this case, her son. "Do you even own any bright colored clothes?" She wonders out loud. "Well you be careful out there and be back as soon as possible." She tells him.

With a nod, the boy walks out the door contemplating on where to walk to this time. After a minute of thinking, he decides that a walk into the shopping district will be good for today. He starts for the district at a slow pace taking out his new phone. His eyes shift to look at the phone catching sight of a notification, but just puts it back in his pocket.

"Why do I keep the stupid thing if I don't even have anyone's number?" He sighs. "Oh well. Doesn't hurt having it." He says to himself. The walk continues on until he stops. Those blue eyes of his latches on to some kind of mirror looking thing. It is a little ways off the ground. He proceeds to walk in front of it. "What is this?" He mutters looking around to see everybody ignoring it.

He walks around the thing confirming that it is floating. He then tries to poke it with a finger only for his finger to go through. He pulls his hand back immediately. He checks his hand finding nothing different. The mirror shimmers and stops after a second.

He straightens up frowning. "Is this some kind of trick?" He wonders out loud.

"Move it kid." A middle aged man orders bumping into him. The next thing the teen knows is being pushed into the portal.

Halkeginia: Tristain Academy

At the end of her incantation, Louise Françoise Le Blanc de La Vallière causes the third explosion of that same period begging in her mind that a incredible familiar will show. 'Please Brimier, let me have this one thing! Please give me a strong familiar!' Everyone is already bracing themselves and are just waiting for the chance to laugh at the failier known as the Zero.

Mr. Colbert squints his eyes noticing a figure in the center of where the explosion was. The figure is sitting up it seems. As the smoke subsides, he finally realizes there is a human boy there looking confused. And finally it clears all the way showing that the boy is wearing all black.

"What is this!?" Louise cries out in shock.

"Louise the Zero summoned a commoner! How typical of the Zero!" A kid mocks making everybody laugh except the teacher and Louise.

"What are they laughing at?" He wonders under his breath looking around. "Where am I?"

Louise turns to Mr. Colbert quickly. "Please let me try again!"

The older mage shakes his head. "Sorry, but you can only do the ritual once. That is the rules."

"Come on! Please!" She continues to beg only getting another no.

Meanwhile, the boy shakily stands up catching the attention of the crowd of students. He looks to his right to find a giant castle. His eyes widen in awe at the huge building. His eyes narrow realizing something.

"This is not something I could find just anywhere." He blinks and everything is still the same. "Could that doorway have been a portal somewhere?"

"Hey commoner!" Louise calls to him, but he either doesn't hear her or is ignoring her. A tick mark forms on her forehead in irritation.

"The Zero can't even get the attention of her own familiar!" Another kid laughs along with everyone else. This only reddens the face of the pinkish blond girl.

The boy turns around to look at the guy who just said this and locks his eyes on some playboy looking blond kid. "What are you talking about blondy?" He asks with a raised eyebrow. The blond boy tries to retort, but is cut off. "You know what? Nevermind, you don't look too smart." He says turning towards Louise as the blond fumes at the commoner's blatent insult towards him.

The two lock eyes. "Stay still commoner." She orders sternly.

He crosses his arms and tilts his head. "Why do I have to stay still?" He asks carefully since he doesn't know who she is and what she'll do. The blond guy is nothing except a playboy that can't do anything. At least, that's what he assumes.

Everyone just stares on ready to jab at Louise's pride at the slightest response of her or the familiar that seems to be a commoner. "Because I told you to!" She states as if it is the most obvious thing ever.

He chuckles a little bit at the poor girl. Everyone starts to think he is going to refuse. However, he stands there for a few seconds staring at her. "I'll give you one minute and don't try anything stupid."

Another tick mark threaten to pop on her forehead. She calms herself down thinking of ways to punish him. "My name is Louise Françoise Le Blanc de La Vallière. Pentagon of the five elemental powers; bless this humble being, and make him my familiar." She chants clearly for all to hear. She then walks up to him like some kind of noble and stops in front of him. Him being taller than her, she gestures for him to lower his head. He rolls his eyes crouching a bit lower.

She grabs his head and kisses his lips causing his eyes to widen. He pulls away after a couple seconds looking freaked out. "What the hell!? Why did you kiss me?!" He questions quickly. A burning pain flairs in his right and left hand that forces him to his knees.

"Your lucky. Not every commoner gets to be a mage's familiar." She tells him with a frown. "The rune will be finished in a few seconds, so shut up."

He grits his teeth in pain trying to stop screaming in pain. He is not going to like this girl very much, he can already tell. The rune finally finished showing a set of runes and the other rune depicting a pistol. He makes a confused face once he catches sight of a rune on one hand and another on his other hand.

Mr. Colbert walks over to the boy that is getting back up. "May I see the back of your hands please?" The boy glares at the older man, but holds his hands up anyway. Colbert frowns just a bit at the runes. 'I have never seen anything like these before. What are they?' Colbert then backs up once he finished his inspection. He turns to the class. "Class is finished, you all can head to your next class."

The class starts to fly up, but not without a have at Louise. "Have fun with your useless commoner Louise the Zero." The class laughs then takes off.

The boy watches as the teens fly away and thinks one thing. "Am I at Hogwarts or something?" He mutters this under his breath. He proceeds to shake his head and look at the girl. "First off, where am I? Don't worry about your name because I can already guess it is Louise."

"A familiar should never talk to their master like that!" She growls out at him. She then puts her hands on her hips. "You're obviously at Tristain Academy."

"Doesn't really answer anything since I have no idea where this academy is either." He says under his breath. A sigh escapes his lips. "Where is this academy?"

"In Tristain, duh." She is really not happy right now.

"Where is Tristain?"

"You ask too many questions, but it is located in Halkeginia." She explains.

He puts a hand on his chin in a thinking pose. "I imagine that since I never heard of this place, I am no longer in Japan." He mutters looking over to the wide field. "And no sign of regular normal technological things either. I can safely assume that it was a portal that got me hers."

"What are you muttering about?" Louise demands.

"My name is Yuudai." He introduces with a respectful bow.

She smirks a little bit. "At least you have some manners."

He straightens up. "You said something about a familiar, so I am guessing you brought me here somehow?"

A nod confirms Yuudai's question. "The bottom line is you are now my familiar."

"I guess that is fine until I find a way home."

Louise sighs. "You can't go back. Once you're summoned, you can't be sent back."

Silence ensues her statement. Louise starts to figet after a minute of awkward silence. He turns and looks at the wall. "This is a dream. If I run into this wall I will surely wake up."

"What are you doing?" Louise asks about to not tell.

"Considering this is a dream, I am going to be honest. This place is unreal. You also seem like a brat that not many can stand. Having said this, bye!" Yuudai rants sprinting towards the wall with his head lowered.

"You better hope that kills you!" Louise yells furious.

His head hits the wall hard with a loud thud. Yuudai then screams in pain saying "Ow!" constantly. After a few minutes, he looks around still in the same place. He touches his head immediately regretting it as pain shoots through his head. As the pain resides again, he slowly sits on the grass. "So I am not dreaming." He sighs and lays on his back until he notices something strange in the sky. "There is two moons?!"

Louise walks over to him and kicks him in the side eliciting a yelp of pain from the human familiar. "Let's get a move on familiar." Louise orders. Yuudai grumbles and gets up. "Your punishment for all of what you said is no dinner."

Yuudai rolls his eyes. "Whatever Blanc."

Louise tilts her head in confusion. "Blanc?"

He just rubs the back of his neck while releasing a yawn. "Look Blanc, I am tired and you are no doubt any different. Let's just skip whatever is going on today and sleep until tomorrow. How does that sound?"

"You don't make the decisions here! And you will sleep when I tell you to!" She shouts.

Yuudai crosses his arms. "What's your plan of action then?"

Her eyes twitches a bit. "First is dinner then we will go to my room. Not too difficult for you, is it?" She asks sarcastically.

"Just let me go to the room, I can't eat dinner anyway."

"You're so useless!" She yells looking frustrated.

"Says the one that summoned a human, me, compared to what others summoned. I seen them and I am impressed with them, but you summoned me. So don't go calling me useless until you fix your uselessness." He retorts.

Her hair casts a shadow over her face making her look intimidating, but Yuudai refuses to back away. "No food for a week you mouthy dog!"

"Then I don't need to go to your stupid dining hall!" He snaps. Yuudai takes a deep breath and breaths out. "Sorry, it's been a long day already." Yuudai apologizes calming down somewhat.

She puffs her cheeks. "Since you apologized, I will let you eat only eat dinner for the rest of your punishment."

Yuudai shrugs with a content look on his face. "Thanks Blanc." Louise nods and continues to walk to the dining hall with her new familiar in tow. "She might have the potential to be such a caring girl." He mutters happily. He then notices the arrogant walk of hers. "Maybe not…it'll be an adventure nonetheless."

End

And I finished the start of this story (And the update of the first chapter)! How do you like it? I hope so!

And now for some notes. If you want early information on the Yuudai's rune on his left hand then you'll have to PM me about it because it is not an actual gun he gets. Similar, but it works differently. I don't want to spoil the rune for people by putting it here because some people hate spoilers.

Next up is Louise's nickname. Blanc. I don't know why nobody used this part of her name before. If some has then I haven't read it. But I think that this nickname would be approved by her since it is something that is in her name and not her first or last.

I don't want to continue this unless I know people will read this, so here is to hoping! BTW, please don't flame this story, just criticize if you see something you think could make it better since I don't have a beta reader.

Without anything else in my mind, thanks for reading, favoriting, following, reviewing and have a great day/night/morning!