Update!
So as many of you may have guessed, Im going to be dumping this story and re-writing it. As I scan through my own work, I find myself either cringing or pointing out flaws that cause me to loose any muse I obtain.
Case in Point; The intro chapter to this fanfiction may as well have been ripped from a video game and I introduce a character, that in all honesty I probably won't bring up for another 30-40 chapters. (that being around the Vytal Tournament)
Furthermore; The Fic's base component, that being "lets add blacklight to Jaune and see what happens" seems a tad… Boring? I'm not talking in scope of powers (that he'll eventually get to) but more in personality. I've recently watched the "Venom" movie and the relationship between Eddie Brock and Venom changed what (in my mind) was an awful, terrible, shoe-horned in villain to an actual comic book protagonist that I rooted for and cheered for.
So in essence, I hope to have the first chapter out by January 31st. At which point, you'll get an update probably in march because I'll be throwing a million hours into KH3.
Sorry to those who didn't mind the Fic as it stands, I just couldn't look at it with any sort of pride or accomplishment. I'll also be going hilariously off rails at points with the plot (including the intro to the new fic) because most readers already know what's going to happen in the plot. If I keep the plot the same, how does the Pairing happen if its not Arkos? If I keep the plot the same, How do I introduce certain set-pieces etc.?
Im currently thinking a Polyamorous relationship with two partners for Jaune, I could never break up Team Sloth (I'm far too weak an individual). Yang is pretty much Bumblebee or Baked Alaska, which in turn means Blake is Either Bumblebee or Blacksun, Weiss… I don't like Weiss. But she'll probably end up with Neptune.
If you guys have suggestions on how I can improve anything, PLEASE leave a review, I'll be checking periodically throughout the month to see if I can fix or make my writing better.
Cheers!
Syndragosa