The Mojave Wasteland, Fiend's territory, 7:25 pm

Courier Six, a man with few enemies, because they were all dead. The ruler of New Vegas, Robert House's killer, Caesar's assassin, General Oliver's murderer.

I think you get the idea, you don't mess with the Courier,so either these Fiends didn't get the memo or they're just that stupid.

There were like 20, it wasn't enough, Six had fought worse, much worse, from the legendary deathclaw to the Monster of The East, Legate Lanius.

Six was currently picking them off one by one with the Survivalist's Rifle. 'Man I'm gonna need a drink after this'

One of them had a minigun. 'Where did he get that?' Didn't matter, as soon as he got a clear shot he put a bullet through his head.

One of them came running at him with a machete, but he soon recieved a katana to the face, the others took this oppurtunity to open fire on Six, who used the dead Fiend as a shield while drawing the seqouia and activating V.A.T.S, he targeted the remaining five's heads and took them out.

"Welp, another day another pile of corpses, since my work here is done I'm gonna head to the Sink for a drink and a nap"

Six materialized the Transportalponder, he was going to pull the trigger when another Fiend ran out with a laser rifle and fired at him, fortunately he was a horrible shot, unfortunately he hit the Transportalponder instead, causing it to explode.

When the smoke cleared Six was gone.

Six woke up looking at the moon,the broken moon 'Wait,what ?' he sat up quickly "The f*k happened to the moon ?"

He was in some sort of forest, a snowy, intact forest. "Where the h*l am I ?" He looked over to see the Transportalponder laying on the ground, sparking and broken.

"Oh s*t, no no no" he ran over and picked it up, he examined it, the circuitry was completely fried. 'I bet I could fix it with the right tools, I just need to find them'

Six looked at his Pip-Boy map.

"No Rob-Co Sattelites Detected, Signal Lost"

"What, that's not possible, is it?" he asked no one in particular "D*mn it, I'm flying blind here, wait, what was that?" Six heard a noise, it sounded like growling.

Six unslung the Survivalist's Rifle from his back, then something came out of the brush, it looked like a big, furry Deathclaw although it seemed more canine in nature, it was also covered in white,bone-like armor.

"Umm, good dog" Six said.

That seemed to tick it off, because it started running at him, Six fired the Survivalist's rifle but it didn't go through the armor.

He drew the Seqouia and put a round through it's head, this one went through, the thing fell down, then slowly started to evaporate afterwards 'Huh, that's weird'

'I better move before more of those show up, guess I'll head North.'

10 Minutes Later

Six walked on for a while, until he heard more howling and like the genius he is he ran towards it.

What he found was a figure in white fighting a bunch of those wolf things in the middle of a large clearing, they looked like they were losing so he decided to lend a hand, ran in, drawing A Light Shining In The Darkness and opening fire.

The creatures's necks weren't armored so he unsheathed his katana and started chopping them up while still firing Light with his other hand.

He took them out then ran over to the figure, they were lying on the ground in a pool of blood, it was a woman, she was in bad shape, her legs were gone, one of her arms were gone, she was covered in scratches and blood, and half her face was gone.

"Ok, hold on ma'am I got you"

"N-no, forget m-me" she pointed over at something "Her name is Ruby, protect her, pl-please"

"Hey, hey hold on" It was too late, she died, Six sat there for a minute, then got up and walked where she pointed

There was a basket with a baby in it, wrapped in some piece of red fabric.

"Who would bring a baby out here?"

'I should bury that woman, but more of those things might show up, and I need to protect this baby.

"Ruby right?" he asked "Well come on Ruby let's go"

So first chapter of the rewrite,definetly better in my opinion, what do you all think?