Ok, I'm reposting some of the chapters cause they needed a little fixing up, like paragraph length, things like that. But nothing new.
The first five chapters of this story is pretty crappy cause I didn't really start trying til after that, ok, so sorry about that. But after that it's really good, to some of you people at least. Hope you all like it! ^_~
Disclaimer: I DO NOT own Kingdom Hearts or anything related to the game because if I did I would probably get sued a lot, lol.
Claimer: I DO now the character Falina, and the plot.
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Sora was slowly walking along the beach that morning thinking it was going to be another boring day, and trying to find a way to make it more interesting. It wasn't going to be a boring day at all though. There was going to be an unexpected surprise.
The sky had a few dark clouds in it from the previous days rain. The wind was blowing somewhat, making it slightly colder than usual on Destiny Islands. Instead of his usual red body suit, Sora wore black pants and a t-shirt. He still wore his small black and white jacket though.
Sora was more lonely than usual today because Riku, being the quiet serious guy he is, wanted to be alone today for some reason. And Kairi said that "she was tired of hanging around us two lazy bums" and was off talking with Selphie. Tidus and Wakka were training as usual, by fighting each other no doubt. Sora didn't mind though, he figured he could use some alone time.
Sora looked out at the sea, letting the breeze brush past him. He sighed and continued walking. He looked up, and saw a few yards in the distance what looked to be some large dead animal. But he thought that very unusual, and went to check it out.
As he neared he noticed that that it was indeed not an animal, nor dead for that matter. It was a girl, who seemed to just be unconcious. She was wearing navy blue shorts that went to the middle of her thighs, and a shirt with a white terra cloth jacket over it. He noticed she had on a silver necklace, and on it was a silver celtic cross. Another thing he noticed was that she a few scratches and bruises here and there on her arms and legs. There was one slightly larger scratch on her right cheek.
"Man she must have had a rough time gettin here." He thought aloud. That thought made him wonder how she got here and where she came from, but he could ask her later. Right now he needed to wake her up. He got down on his knees and tried shaking her shoulders and calling to her to wake up.
She groaned after a few seconds and her eyes slowly opened and blinked a couple of times to adjust. The first thing Sora thought when she opened her eyes was that they were a beautiful green. They looked like tiny orbs each containing a forest. She slowly looked at her surroundings while wondering where the heck she was and what happened. She then looked up at Sora.
"Who are you?" She asked still puzzled.
"My name is Sora. I live here. I found you unconcious and woke you up."
"Well, where am I ?" She asked as she sat up.
"You're on Destiny Islands." He informed her. She slowly looked down at the sand trying to remember if she had ever heard of this place, but she hadn't.
"What happened.....?" She whispered to no one in particular. He answered anyway.
"I don't know, I just found you lying here.... Where did you come from anyways?" He asked. She took a moment to think.
"I...I don't know. I can't remember anything. I guess I must have hit my head coming here or something."
"Yeah I guess so." He had a concerned look on his face. She looked at the sand trying to remember anything possible, but to no avail.
"Maybe your memory will come back to you over time." He said trying to comfort her.
"Yeah, maybe. Hopefully it will." She said.
"Until that happens, you can stay with me at my house. It's the least I can do. Besides, you don't really know anyone else on the Island yet." He said, his voice becoming more cheerful. She smiled up at him.
"Thank you. I really appreciate it, seeing as, like you said, I don't know anyone else and my memory being gone." He smiled back at her. She smiled too, though she still wasn't sure if she could trust him or not, being that she just met him. She figured she hadn't much of a choice though.
"It's no problem. Besides, I've been getting lonely at my house all alone." She stared up at him.
"Alone? Don't you have any parents?" She asked. He frowned, and slowly began to answer.
"....No. I never knew my father, and my mother died a year ago..." She frowned and had a sorrowful look on her face.
"I'm sorry....I probably shouldn't have asked." She said looking away.
"No, it's ok, don't worry about it. We're kinda in the same boat anyway since you apparently don't remember you parents." He said, trying to brighten the mood. She looked back at him, smiled, and then nodded. He finally stood up.
"Come on and I'll introduce you to my friends." He said with a smile.
"Ok, sure." She smiled and said. She tried to stand up, but the soreness and stiffness from the few bruises made it hard. Sora noticed this and held out his hand to help her. She grabbed onto it and he slowly pulled her up. After moving around a bit, she could stand and walk fine.
"Thanks." She said.
"Sure, besides letting you stay with me it was also the least I could do." He said with a small grin. They then began walking to the small island with the bent Paopu tree on it. Sora figured that's where Riku was, since he almost always is.
"Oh, I forgot to ask. What's your name anyway?" He asked, looking at her. She turned to him and smiled.
"Oh that's right, you told me your name but I didn't tell you mine. It's Falina. That's the only thing I can remember."
"Falina..." He repeated. 'That's an unusual, but pretty name', he thought.
"Well that's a pretty name, I've never heard it but it's pretty."
"Thank you." She said with a smile in her face."Sora's a pretty cool name too." She added.
"Oh thanks. It means sky, but the funny thing is that my friends name means ground." He said, letting out a small laugh. She smiled and also let out a little laugh.
"I don't know what my name means, but not like it really matters. So what is your friends name?" She asked.
"It's Riku. That's who we're going to see now." He said still walking with Falina beside him.
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Author's Notes: As I said earlier, this story starts out crappy, but it gets better so keep reading...and reviewing of course, lol. Flames are accepted but not liked, heh heh. ~*~Sky~*~
The first five chapters of this story is pretty crappy cause I didn't really start trying til after that, ok, so sorry about that. But after that it's really good, to some of you people at least. Hope you all like it! ^_~
Disclaimer: I DO NOT own Kingdom Hearts or anything related to the game because if I did I would probably get sued a lot, lol.
Claimer: I DO now the character Falina, and the plot.
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Sora was slowly walking along the beach that morning thinking it was going to be another boring day, and trying to find a way to make it more interesting. It wasn't going to be a boring day at all though. There was going to be an unexpected surprise.
The sky had a few dark clouds in it from the previous days rain. The wind was blowing somewhat, making it slightly colder than usual on Destiny Islands. Instead of his usual red body suit, Sora wore black pants and a t-shirt. He still wore his small black and white jacket though.
Sora was more lonely than usual today because Riku, being the quiet serious guy he is, wanted to be alone today for some reason. And Kairi said that "she was tired of hanging around us two lazy bums" and was off talking with Selphie. Tidus and Wakka were training as usual, by fighting each other no doubt. Sora didn't mind though, he figured he could use some alone time.
Sora looked out at the sea, letting the breeze brush past him. He sighed and continued walking. He looked up, and saw a few yards in the distance what looked to be some large dead animal. But he thought that very unusual, and went to check it out.
As he neared he noticed that that it was indeed not an animal, nor dead for that matter. It was a girl, who seemed to just be unconcious. She was wearing navy blue shorts that went to the middle of her thighs, and a shirt with a white terra cloth jacket over it. He noticed she had on a silver necklace, and on it was a silver celtic cross. Another thing he noticed was that she a few scratches and bruises here and there on her arms and legs. There was one slightly larger scratch on her right cheek.
"Man she must have had a rough time gettin here." He thought aloud. That thought made him wonder how she got here and where she came from, but he could ask her later. Right now he needed to wake her up. He got down on his knees and tried shaking her shoulders and calling to her to wake up.
She groaned after a few seconds and her eyes slowly opened and blinked a couple of times to adjust. The first thing Sora thought when she opened her eyes was that they were a beautiful green. They looked like tiny orbs each containing a forest. She slowly looked at her surroundings while wondering where the heck she was and what happened. She then looked up at Sora.
"Who are you?" She asked still puzzled.
"My name is Sora. I live here. I found you unconcious and woke you up."
"Well, where am I ?" She asked as she sat up.
"You're on Destiny Islands." He informed her. She slowly looked down at the sand trying to remember if she had ever heard of this place, but she hadn't.
"What happened.....?" She whispered to no one in particular. He answered anyway.
"I don't know, I just found you lying here.... Where did you come from anyways?" He asked. She took a moment to think.
"I...I don't know. I can't remember anything. I guess I must have hit my head coming here or something."
"Yeah I guess so." He had a concerned look on his face. She looked at the sand trying to remember anything possible, but to no avail.
"Maybe your memory will come back to you over time." He said trying to comfort her.
"Yeah, maybe. Hopefully it will." She said.
"Until that happens, you can stay with me at my house. It's the least I can do. Besides, you don't really know anyone else on the Island yet." He said, his voice becoming more cheerful. She smiled up at him.
"Thank you. I really appreciate it, seeing as, like you said, I don't know anyone else and my memory being gone." He smiled back at her. She smiled too, though she still wasn't sure if she could trust him or not, being that she just met him. She figured she hadn't much of a choice though.
"It's no problem. Besides, I've been getting lonely at my house all alone." She stared up at him.
"Alone? Don't you have any parents?" She asked. He frowned, and slowly began to answer.
"....No. I never knew my father, and my mother died a year ago..." She frowned and had a sorrowful look on her face.
"I'm sorry....I probably shouldn't have asked." She said looking away.
"No, it's ok, don't worry about it. We're kinda in the same boat anyway since you apparently don't remember you parents." He said, trying to brighten the mood. She looked back at him, smiled, and then nodded. He finally stood up.
"Come on and I'll introduce you to my friends." He said with a smile.
"Ok, sure." She smiled and said. She tried to stand up, but the soreness and stiffness from the few bruises made it hard. Sora noticed this and held out his hand to help her. She grabbed onto it and he slowly pulled her up. After moving around a bit, she could stand and walk fine.
"Thanks." She said.
"Sure, besides letting you stay with me it was also the least I could do." He said with a small grin. They then began walking to the small island with the bent Paopu tree on it. Sora figured that's where Riku was, since he almost always is.
"Oh, I forgot to ask. What's your name anyway?" He asked, looking at her. She turned to him and smiled.
"Oh that's right, you told me your name but I didn't tell you mine. It's Falina. That's the only thing I can remember."
"Falina..." He repeated. 'That's an unusual, but pretty name', he thought.
"Well that's a pretty name, I've never heard it but it's pretty."
"Thank you." She said with a smile in her face."Sora's a pretty cool name too." She added.
"Oh thanks. It means sky, but the funny thing is that my friends name means ground." He said, letting out a small laugh. She smiled and also let out a little laugh.
"I don't know what my name means, but not like it really matters. So what is your friends name?" She asked.
"It's Riku. That's who we're going to see now." He said still walking with Falina beside him.
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Author's Notes: As I said earlier, this story starts out crappy, but it gets better so keep reading...and reviewing of course, lol. Flames are accepted but not liked, heh heh. ~*~Sky~*~