Okay, this is a quick update to any and all people who are interested in this story I have adopted. Because of multiple people pointing it out and showing their annoyance with it and my own personal annoyance with some bits and pieces here and there, I am doing a full rewrite of this story!

Okay not really. All I am going to do is go through each chapter already posted and fix grammer, tenses, some scenes that could flow better, a bit of the fight scenes to make it make more sense to Naruto's power scalling and the like.

It may take some time but what are you gonna do. In the end it will make the story that much more readable. And give me time to story board and find me a beta.

Speaking of which. I will be messaging registered beta's on the site looking for one but! If there is a beta reading this at the moment, PM me! I will be happy to speak to you and see if you would be a good fit!

Other than that, if you have any questions or concerns either drop a review or PM me directly! I will almost always answer anything I can so feel free to strike up a conversation.

Edit: Okay due to multiple PM's from various people and I believe a couple reviews I want to clear something up. I will not be speaking about any spoilers in this edit, simply what I am changing and why, as well as what I have been up to.

Firstly I want to make it clear that this story is very old, and has been abandoned by it's original author, which is why I adopted it. There is no left over notes or story boarding from it's original creator and I myself have to come up with plot from scratch. I have Ideas and the like but I have already learned from a lot of failed story ideas that going into a story with absolutely no idea on what one is going to be doing for at least most of the plot will only lead to an abandoned story. And this story has already been abandoned once, I do not want it to be abandoned again.

For the one reviewer who went under an anonymous reviewer so I cannot directly PM I will say in my defense that I have already rewritten the first 2 chapters and updated them already.

I am undergoing this rewrite for three main reasons.

1. I have to draw up a completely original plot mostly free from canon in order to properly accomodate the circumstances already set in this story.

2. Fix numerous issues with the power scaling. For example, Naruto managed to beat a root anbu highly trained since early ages to be a perfect killing machine but lacked the skills or tactics to even scratch Kushina who was not fighting seriously. Not that he should have beat her at this point, it is simply that he would have stood a chance. And fix the romantic plot between him and Hinata as her characterization is completely off and rather difficult to read in general.

3. I have another story of my own I am also working on story boarding for as well as cowriting for another author, so my work on this sight is split, this is not a complaint but rather the fact that coming up with ideas on the fly while doing other works is not easy.

I have always made sure that people that are reading my works are informed within reason of exactly what I am doing and why and I sincerely apologise for the short update that I posted without much notice and I take full responsibility for the PM's and reviews that I recieved. They are no ones fault but my own. I have to beta readers that I am currently working with to fix such issues throughout the story and make it as good as it can possibly be and I ask that everyone please be patient while I work out exactly where I want to take the story.

~Eto