UPDATE: chapter one has been fixed up. please go give it a look

UPDATE: chapter two is almost done. if anyone is willing to be a beta reader please let me know. I really need one.

UPDATE 19JAN2020: chapter two is fixed up and out!

UPDATE 02FEB2020: chapter three is fixed up!

alright everyone.

I've heard ALOT of constructive criticism about the story so I'm going to fix it. I'm going through all the previous chapters. fixing grammar. improving pacing. and increasing length. making the story better. increasing flow. improving personalities

I will be working really hard to fix the story and make it something more fun to read.

it is going to take some time so don't expect an update anytime soon. I'm going to be putting my all into this.

now as always.

thank you for reading

and if you would like the story please message me or just start writing with it. all I really want is to read it.