Um Help?
This is my first fic so please review, but be nice. Flames and advice are welcome. Like I said before this is my first fic so if this isn't the best piece don't blame my I'm trying my best! Any way now that that's settled read on.
Oh yeah, I almost forgot in my fic Gohan and Videl are both 13 years old and are going out. Trunks and Goten are 3 and 2. Gohan didn't stop training after cell either so he is still the strongest Z - fighter. He doesn't go super sayian, he uses a different transformation, which is not for me to tell you yet, but it has the same amount of power as Mystic in the Buu saga. That's about it, now you can read. _____________________________________________________________________
"Talking" 'Thinking' ************* Scene change ************* [Time change] (Me sounding important)
Um Help
Chapter One- Who are you?
" Gohan, pst, Gohan" A small voice could be heard from the sleeping form of Son Gohan.
It was two years after the cell games were completed and in the Son house, a certain two year old had been given the task of waking up his brother. " Huh? Who said what now?", Gohan said half asleep without opening his eyes. " Yay, your awake mum said it's time to wake up," Goten replied cheerfully. ' How on earth can he be so cheerful at this time in the morning, it's too early to get up yet. I know I'll just pretend to still be asleep, he he he, he won't no the difference' "Gohan?.......Gohan?...................GOHAN!!!" , Goten yelled.
Gohan then jumped a mile then landed back on his bed in a heap. "Yay,Yay,Yay, now let's EAT," Goten announced full of enthusiasm, as he attempted to skip out his and his brothers room. His two year old legs though didn't quite agree so he fell straight on his face. He lay on the floor for a moment taking everything in then about five seconds later burst into tears. Gohan who had watched the whole scene got up of his bed and walked over to his brother. "It's ok Goten, you'll be okay, it's just a little scratch," He comforted as he picked up Goten and walked to the kitchen in his boxers. "OK,*sniffle* Gohan*sniffle* if you say so," Goten managed to say through tears and sniffles. " That's better, now what do you say we eat," Gohan said as he placed Goten on his chair. "Yeah," Replied Goten.
"So, you did decide to wake up this morning Gohan," Chi - Chi, their mother teased.
Chi - Chi like many other mothers cooked cleaned and looked after her two baby boys. Unlike many other mothers, Chi - Chi was the founder of the legendary Frying Pan of Evil doings, and was in current posession of one. Gohan therefore decided it would be best to play innocent rather than arguing with her about waking him up. " Of course, Mum," Gohan replied with fake enthusiasm, Chi -Chi apparently missed this. " Good, because I'm going shopping with Bulma and you are going to babysit Trunks and your brother, at Capsule Corp, for the afternoon," Chi - Chi announced "Yay, Trunks,Yay," Goten cheered "But, Mum, I can't I'm going out with Videl this afternoon!" Gohan countered " Well that's too bad, your going too Capsule Corps and that's final," Chi - Chi replied getting louder as she spoke.
It wasn't the yelling that scared Gohan, although it did hurt his ears, it was the fact that as she spoke the Frying Pan of Evil doings was swinging all over the place. So one again, instead of countering he decided to make a compromise. " Then can I at least bring Videl with me to keep me company? It gets lonely at Capsule Corps all by yourself you know?" Gohan compromised
Chi - Chi took a couple of seconds to think this over then agreed. She thought it was a good idea, I mean what if her biggest baby boy got lost. She had gotten lost once it hadn't been fun that was for sure, especially because her saviour had been none other than the prince of sayians himself. " Great, I'll call her now," Gohan stated " Oh no you won't, you'll eat first, but not before you put some clothes on, I won't have you sitting at the breakfast table half naked," She announced.
A large sweatdrop appeared on Gohan's face, he had completely forgotten he was only wearing his boxers. He ran straight to him and Gotens room, and was out within seconds wearing his purple gi that he had received from piccolo. Gohan loved his gi he didn't understand how his brother could wear a gi with a long-sleeved under shirt, his gi however didn't have an under shirt and the gi itself didn't have any sleeves.
" Much better, now eat," Chi - Chi stated Many plates and few seconds later both sons were finished and Gohan was on the phone calling his girlfriend. * Ring * * Ring* * Ring*
" Hello, Satan Videl speaking," Answered Videl " Hey Vid, I't just me," Gohan replied " Gohan, hi, what's happened in the last 12 hours that you've called to tell me.......wait you haven't called to back out of our date have you?" She Questioned " No I haven't, well not exactly," Gohan said " What do you mean 'not exactly'" Videl asked " Well i'm not backing out, it's just that my mum's making me baby-sit Goten and Trunks at Capsule Corp so," Gohan replied before he was interrupted " Oh, ok I understand, so I'll see you tomorrow then," Videl said with obvious disappointment. " Actually Vid, I wanted to see if you could come to Capsule Corp with me and Goten," Gohan asked " Oh ok, that sounds great, what time?" Videl replied " 11:00Am," He answered. " Alright see you then bye," She said " K, Bye Vid," Gohan said as he hung up the phone
[ Three Hours Later ]
It was 10:30am and the three members of the Son family were half way to Capsule Corp. Chi - Chi flying on nimbus and Gohan carrying Goten as he flew using ki. Goten seemed quite contempt flying this high in the sky. He himself was too young to fly and his mother wouldn't let him fly with Gohan unless they needed to go somewhere important. Shopping of course was important enough and Chi - Chi didn't want to waste any time that could be used shopping on flying. So Goten was enjoying the flight while he could, he was giggling and laughing as Gohan did loops and twirls despite his mothers worried cries.
They arrived at Capsule Corp at 11:05am and were just in time to see Videl walk up to the front door. So they all walked up together and Gohan knocked on the door, with slight difficulty, due to the fact he was still carrying Goten. " Gohan! Goten!" Trunks shouted as he managed to open the door, being the strong and super intelligent three - year old he was. " Yay, Trunks, Yay," Goten cheered
Trunks let the familiar four in the house and told Chi - Chi where to find Bulma. They both came around the corner seconds later, purses in hand, and said their goodbyes as they left.
The kids then walked over to the couch and Gohan but both Goten and Trunks, who he picked up as they came in, down. He then sat down and got comfortable. Videl deciding that she wanted to be comfortable too walked over and made herself a seat on Gohan's lap. Gohan's tail, which had grown back shortly after he met Videl, according to Vegeta it was something to do with mates and sayian puberty or something, made it's way around Videl's waist and all three of them were in a comfortable position. " Hey. Goten, Trunks, why don't you set up the Playstation on this T.V. and we'll have a tournament," Gohan suggested " Yeah " Both answered in unison as they ran off to get the station. " That sounds like fun, and you know what Gohan?" Videl asked. " What Vid?" He answered " I'm gonna kick your ass!" Videl replied confidently. That was what Gohan loved about Videl her attitude and how she could be so cool and confident one minute and delicate and fragile the next. " We'll just see about that," He said as the youngest two came in with the playstation.
[ Ten minutes later ]
" Ha, I win. Whose the best now?" Videl Announced as she did her victory dance. Well she tried but the moment she stood up she was pulled back down by Gohan's stubborn tail, that refused to let go, not that she cared. " Whatever, I say we go find a better game to play," Gohan said. He then looked at Goten and Trunks who were versing each other at need for speed. He cracked up laughing when he saw that they were looking at the game over screen and they seemed to think the game was still playing. Being only two and three they both had no idea how or what they were playing but they didn't care if Gohan and Videl could do it so could they! " Come on, were going to get a different game," Videl said as she walked over a picked up Goten. Gohan followed suit and picked up Trunks then followed Videl down the hallway. " So what game do you want to get," Videl asked as she walked next to Gohan. " Um...How about Mortal Combat?" He replied " Your on,"Videl confirmed " Um...Vid?" Gohan asked " Yeah?" She asked a little worried at the tone of his voice " Well, it's just, do you know where we are?" He asked back " Um yeah, of course.............Um we go down here," Videl directed
They went down the stairs only to find they were in one of Bulma's labs. They both put down the toddlers they were holding and turned to face each other. " It's a good thing you knew where we were going or we might have gotten lost," Gohan said sarcastically. " Yeah, well, I didn't see you do any better," Videl countered.
The argument went on like this for several more minutes. " Well have you got any ideas genius?" Videl asked " Actually, yes," Gohan replied as he leaned down and kissed her lightly on the lips. The he kissed her again this time however they kissed fully, and Gohan's tail found it's way around Videl's waist.
Suddenly they heard a large number of gasps and ' who are they?' and ' Oh my God, where did they come from' and even a ' They came to kill us they're evil'.
They were in a world of their own however and didn't stop kissing. They didn't care. All of a sudden Gohan felt a tuck on his gi pants, so he broke the kiss and looked down to see Goten. " What is it Goten? I'm kind of busy," Gohan asked annoyed but he softened as he saw the look his brother was giving him. " Well, It's just that Trunks was pushing buttons and now we are in a room with lotsa people looking at us, but sorry I bothered you just go back to what you were doing," Goten announced shyly. " Huh?" Gohan said as he looked up. It was then that both him and Videl's eyes widened in shock. All the other people who had at first kept quiet decided to speak up. " Hi, I'm Goku, who are you and if you don't mind me asking what are you doing at our get together?" One man asked
End of Chapter!
Sorry to leave at a bit of a cliff-hanger, not much though. So how do you like it, please review, I need feedback. If I get some reviews then I'll write up my next chapter.
Over and Out
This is my first fic so please review, but be nice. Flames and advice are welcome. Like I said before this is my first fic so if this isn't the best piece don't blame my I'm trying my best! Any way now that that's settled read on.
Oh yeah, I almost forgot in my fic Gohan and Videl are both 13 years old and are going out. Trunks and Goten are 3 and 2. Gohan didn't stop training after cell either so he is still the strongest Z - fighter. He doesn't go super sayian, he uses a different transformation, which is not for me to tell you yet, but it has the same amount of power as Mystic in the Buu saga. That's about it, now you can read. _____________________________________________________________________
"Talking" 'Thinking' ************* Scene change ************* [Time change] (Me sounding important)
Um Help
Chapter One- Who are you?
" Gohan, pst, Gohan" A small voice could be heard from the sleeping form of Son Gohan.
It was two years after the cell games were completed and in the Son house, a certain two year old had been given the task of waking up his brother. " Huh? Who said what now?", Gohan said half asleep without opening his eyes. " Yay, your awake mum said it's time to wake up," Goten replied cheerfully. ' How on earth can he be so cheerful at this time in the morning, it's too early to get up yet. I know I'll just pretend to still be asleep, he he he, he won't no the difference' "Gohan?.......Gohan?...................GOHAN!!!" , Goten yelled.
Gohan then jumped a mile then landed back on his bed in a heap. "Yay,Yay,Yay, now let's EAT," Goten announced full of enthusiasm, as he attempted to skip out his and his brothers room. His two year old legs though didn't quite agree so he fell straight on his face. He lay on the floor for a moment taking everything in then about five seconds later burst into tears. Gohan who had watched the whole scene got up of his bed and walked over to his brother. "It's ok Goten, you'll be okay, it's just a little scratch," He comforted as he picked up Goten and walked to the kitchen in his boxers. "OK,*sniffle* Gohan*sniffle* if you say so," Goten managed to say through tears and sniffles. " That's better, now what do you say we eat," Gohan said as he placed Goten on his chair. "Yeah," Replied Goten.
"So, you did decide to wake up this morning Gohan," Chi - Chi, their mother teased.
Chi - Chi like many other mothers cooked cleaned and looked after her two baby boys. Unlike many other mothers, Chi - Chi was the founder of the legendary Frying Pan of Evil doings, and was in current posession of one. Gohan therefore decided it would be best to play innocent rather than arguing with her about waking him up. " Of course, Mum," Gohan replied with fake enthusiasm, Chi -Chi apparently missed this. " Good, because I'm going shopping with Bulma and you are going to babysit Trunks and your brother, at Capsule Corp, for the afternoon," Chi - Chi announced "Yay, Trunks,Yay," Goten cheered "But, Mum, I can't I'm going out with Videl this afternoon!" Gohan countered " Well that's too bad, your going too Capsule Corps and that's final," Chi - Chi replied getting louder as she spoke.
It wasn't the yelling that scared Gohan, although it did hurt his ears, it was the fact that as she spoke the Frying Pan of Evil doings was swinging all over the place. So one again, instead of countering he decided to make a compromise. " Then can I at least bring Videl with me to keep me company? It gets lonely at Capsule Corps all by yourself you know?" Gohan compromised
Chi - Chi took a couple of seconds to think this over then agreed. She thought it was a good idea, I mean what if her biggest baby boy got lost. She had gotten lost once it hadn't been fun that was for sure, especially because her saviour had been none other than the prince of sayians himself. " Great, I'll call her now," Gohan stated " Oh no you won't, you'll eat first, but not before you put some clothes on, I won't have you sitting at the breakfast table half naked," She announced.
A large sweatdrop appeared on Gohan's face, he had completely forgotten he was only wearing his boxers. He ran straight to him and Gotens room, and was out within seconds wearing his purple gi that he had received from piccolo. Gohan loved his gi he didn't understand how his brother could wear a gi with a long-sleeved under shirt, his gi however didn't have an under shirt and the gi itself didn't have any sleeves.
" Much better, now eat," Chi - Chi stated Many plates and few seconds later both sons were finished and Gohan was on the phone calling his girlfriend. * Ring * * Ring* * Ring*
" Hello, Satan Videl speaking," Answered Videl " Hey Vid, I't just me," Gohan replied " Gohan, hi, what's happened in the last 12 hours that you've called to tell me.......wait you haven't called to back out of our date have you?" She Questioned " No I haven't, well not exactly," Gohan said " What do you mean 'not exactly'" Videl asked " Well i'm not backing out, it's just that my mum's making me baby-sit Goten and Trunks at Capsule Corp so," Gohan replied before he was interrupted " Oh, ok I understand, so I'll see you tomorrow then," Videl said with obvious disappointment. " Actually Vid, I wanted to see if you could come to Capsule Corp with me and Goten," Gohan asked " Oh ok, that sounds great, what time?" Videl replied " 11:00Am," He answered. " Alright see you then bye," She said " K, Bye Vid," Gohan said as he hung up the phone
[ Three Hours Later ]
It was 10:30am and the three members of the Son family were half way to Capsule Corp. Chi - Chi flying on nimbus and Gohan carrying Goten as he flew using ki. Goten seemed quite contempt flying this high in the sky. He himself was too young to fly and his mother wouldn't let him fly with Gohan unless they needed to go somewhere important. Shopping of course was important enough and Chi - Chi didn't want to waste any time that could be used shopping on flying. So Goten was enjoying the flight while he could, he was giggling and laughing as Gohan did loops and twirls despite his mothers worried cries.
They arrived at Capsule Corp at 11:05am and were just in time to see Videl walk up to the front door. So they all walked up together and Gohan knocked on the door, with slight difficulty, due to the fact he was still carrying Goten. " Gohan! Goten!" Trunks shouted as he managed to open the door, being the strong and super intelligent three - year old he was. " Yay, Trunks, Yay," Goten cheered
Trunks let the familiar four in the house and told Chi - Chi where to find Bulma. They both came around the corner seconds later, purses in hand, and said their goodbyes as they left.
The kids then walked over to the couch and Gohan but both Goten and Trunks, who he picked up as they came in, down. He then sat down and got comfortable. Videl deciding that she wanted to be comfortable too walked over and made herself a seat on Gohan's lap. Gohan's tail, which had grown back shortly after he met Videl, according to Vegeta it was something to do with mates and sayian puberty or something, made it's way around Videl's waist and all three of them were in a comfortable position. " Hey. Goten, Trunks, why don't you set up the Playstation on this T.V. and we'll have a tournament," Gohan suggested " Yeah " Both answered in unison as they ran off to get the station. " That sounds like fun, and you know what Gohan?" Videl asked. " What Vid?" He answered " I'm gonna kick your ass!" Videl replied confidently. That was what Gohan loved about Videl her attitude and how she could be so cool and confident one minute and delicate and fragile the next. " We'll just see about that," He said as the youngest two came in with the playstation.
[ Ten minutes later ]
" Ha, I win. Whose the best now?" Videl Announced as she did her victory dance. Well she tried but the moment she stood up she was pulled back down by Gohan's stubborn tail, that refused to let go, not that she cared. " Whatever, I say we go find a better game to play," Gohan said. He then looked at Goten and Trunks who were versing each other at need for speed. He cracked up laughing when he saw that they were looking at the game over screen and they seemed to think the game was still playing. Being only two and three they both had no idea how or what they were playing but they didn't care if Gohan and Videl could do it so could they! " Come on, were going to get a different game," Videl said as she walked over a picked up Goten. Gohan followed suit and picked up Trunks then followed Videl down the hallway. " So what game do you want to get," Videl asked as she walked next to Gohan. " Um...How about Mortal Combat?" He replied " Your on,"Videl confirmed " Um...Vid?" Gohan asked " Yeah?" She asked a little worried at the tone of his voice " Well, it's just, do you know where we are?" He asked back " Um yeah, of course.............Um we go down here," Videl directed
They went down the stairs only to find they were in one of Bulma's labs. They both put down the toddlers they were holding and turned to face each other. " It's a good thing you knew where we were going or we might have gotten lost," Gohan said sarcastically. " Yeah, well, I didn't see you do any better," Videl countered.
The argument went on like this for several more minutes. " Well have you got any ideas genius?" Videl asked " Actually, yes," Gohan replied as he leaned down and kissed her lightly on the lips. The he kissed her again this time however they kissed fully, and Gohan's tail found it's way around Videl's waist.
Suddenly they heard a large number of gasps and ' who are they?' and ' Oh my God, where did they come from' and even a ' They came to kill us they're evil'.
They were in a world of their own however and didn't stop kissing. They didn't care. All of a sudden Gohan felt a tuck on his gi pants, so he broke the kiss and looked down to see Goten. " What is it Goten? I'm kind of busy," Gohan asked annoyed but he softened as he saw the look his brother was giving him. " Well, It's just that Trunks was pushing buttons and now we are in a room with lotsa people looking at us, but sorry I bothered you just go back to what you were doing," Goten announced shyly. " Huh?" Gohan said as he looked up. It was then that both him and Videl's eyes widened in shock. All the other people who had at first kept quiet decided to speak up. " Hi, I'm Goku, who are you and if you don't mind me asking what are you doing at our get together?" One man asked
End of Chapter!
Sorry to leave at a bit of a cliff-hanger, not much though. So how do you like it, please review, I need feedback. If I get some reviews then I'll write up my next chapter.
Over and Out