THIS IS MY FIRST FIC FOR ANGELIC LAYER!!! So if you would be nice enough to review or give me pointers. Oh yeah, I've only read the manga version.

Disclaimer: I wouldn't be writing fics now would I?


"THE WINNER OF THE ANGELIC FIGHT IS SUZUKI AMI!"

The spectators roared and cheered. The losing deus angrily got out of her seat and stomped off. She left her angel there and wasn't going back for it if it wasn't for the other deus.

"You forgot your angel!" The girl stomped back and grabbed the angel off the layer and continued her way out of the arena. The girl slowed down to a calmer pace when she had left the building. She sat down on a bench in a nearby park.

"Stupid angel..." she muttered. The girl gazed at her angel. The angel was rather beaten up. The clothes teared and the hair completely in a messy state.

"Stupid, stupid angel!" she shouted, " You just had to lose, didn't you! We were supposed to win that tournament! You're a worthless pile of nothing, got that! You're such a wimp, not being able to stand up to a loser like that!" The deus got up and walked down the paths. She came to a trashcan. She hesitantly held the angel over the opening. Her hand trembled a bit. She reconsidered and drew back her hand.

Instead of throwing the angel in the trashcan, the girl ran up a hill and threw the angel with all her might. It soared in an arc and landed, caught in a bush.

'Good,' the girl thought, ' No one will be able to find her.' The girl turned and walked back down the hill, leaving the angel.

Behind a tree, Madoka Fujisawa saw it all.


Just a prologue. The regular chapters should be longer. So what didya think? Please review and remember that it's my first Angelic Layer fic.

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