These are revised versions of the same chapters, with (hopefully) the formatting fixed.
Author's Note: This isn't
my first fanfiction, but it is my first one based on, not only Pirates of the Caribbean but movies in general. I definitely want
any reviews you can give me, just...please be nice!
I know this is short, but there is definitely more coming soon (as long as I
don't get attacked by writers' block again!), that is if anyone actually wants
more, so please let me know!
CHAPTER 1 – Hard Day's Night
The Black Pearl swayed gently in
the harbor with the rise and fall of the sea, lulling it's
two lonely occupants into a deep sleep. They had pulled into Tortuga
at some ungodly hour with Jack slumped over his wheel, half asleep. For two
straight days, Jack had been forced to stay awake to fulfill his duties as
captain. One problem seemed to follow another: A storm hits, fights break out
among the crew, a naval ship chases them getting far too close for comfort.
Every time Jack got a chance to stagger over toward his cabin, something else
demanded his attention. Night turned into day and back again without Jack so
much as catching a glimpse of his pillow.
When he finally docked in Tortuga
in the middle of the night, he was more than happy to let his crew go
gallivanting about the town while he collapsed in his bed. There would still be
plenty of rum and women to be had when he woke up. Only Will remained on the
ship with him, not being overly fond of rum and stubbornly refusing to glance
at a woman who was not Elizabeth.
So it was that our good pirate
captain was alone and defenseless on this particular night. He slept the sleep
of the dead, never moving, barely breathing, completely oblivious to the loud
snores coming from Will's general direction; even more unaware of the creaking
of footsteps on rotting wood or the slow squeak of the door being inched open.
The only thing that could phase this sleeping beauty was the feel of cold steel
against his throat.