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Error in the last chapter, MusicDreamer and wyldcat pointed it out to me: I said Jawa's but I meant Tusken Raiders lol
A/N: This chapter takes place many years in the future, it is set during The Phantom Menace and I think you can guess which part…
I have discovered the line! So it is included here here comes the last chapter of 'Vision's of the Future'
Chapter 12, The End
The doors opened. A figure wearing a dark cloak stood there. The dark side pulsed around him. He looked up at them and sneered at the Jedi.
"We'll handle this." Qui-Gon said. Padme Amidala and her security took the long way around and left the two Jedi to face the menace.
The Sith Lord, Darth Maul, took off his hood to reveal his small horns, yellow eyes, and his heavily tattooed face.
All three removed their cloaks. Ready to fight.
Obi-Wan Kenobi leapt into the air and fought Darth Maul from the behind while his Master Qui Gon Jinn took the front. They followed him as he continues moving backwards, leading them deeper into the buildings core. Obi Wan was kicked harshly. The force of it threw him from the platform. He fell down two levels and only just managed to hold on to the platform of the second.
Obi-Wan soon regained his balance and used the force to propel him up to where his Master and the Sith fought. He ran after them as they entered the ray walls. Just as he was catching up they began to close. He was forced to stay where he was, and watch.
His master knelt down and meditated while Maul paced impatiently. The difference between the Jedi and Sith made apparent. Qui Gon looked to the force, he found his calm, he would use it to help him. While his opponent seemed hell bent on murder.
Qui Gon had felt an odd sense of déjà vu ever since the fight had began. Words from a long forgotten memory of the past circled around in is brain. A plea for forgiveness from someone he loved dearly. A voice, Obi-Wan's voice. But not the Obi-Wan that stood so close to him. No, the Obi-Wan of the future.
"I'm sorry! I couldn't get to you in time. The Sith killed you! It should have been me! I'm sorry! Forgive me please!"
Everything made sense, as much as a memory like that could. He would die tonight. He knew it, he was going to die at the hand of this Sith.
But that wouldn't stop him, He would fight as he would any other opponent. He had to be careful. He could not let it trouble him. He was not afraid of death. Not anymore.
He just hoped Obi-Wan would be all right. After seeing the elder version of his padawan break down so long ago it was evident he had bottled up his feelings.
Everything happens for a reason. Each story must end. And this was his final chapter.
Obi was anxious to help his master. He felt a ripple in the force warning him. He ignited his lightsaber and Qui Gon and Maul did the same. Kenobi sprinted toward his Master.
The fight picked up where it left off. Qui Gon instantly began fighting as well as before. Obi Wan could not believe the injustice of it all as the red ray wall closed once again leaving him left behind to watch as Qui Gon was hit in the face. The impact distracted him and Maul went for the fatal plunge. Qui Gon fell in a heap on the ground.
Ob Wan could hear a heart breaking scream. A shout of 'No!' It took a moment to register it was his own voice. His own anger filled voice. It bubbled up inside of him. Pure rage. White hot. Revenge.
"No," he said to himself, quieter than before. He could not feel the anger, the hate. It led to the dark side and he would not allow himself to do that. He could not. He took a deep breath. He let it out into the force. He did not look for comfort, he merely searched for strength to beat this Sith.
He waited anxiously. The doors opened, and he began to fight. He jumped and avoided each hit. The one end of Mauls' saber fizzled out and they were even. Obi-Wan felt the dark side hit him backwards into the hole. He held onto a ledge as his lightsaber was kicked over the side. He watched, as much as he could, as it fell into the abyss, where he was headed next if Maul had his way.
He hung on for dear life. He could feel the dark side pulse off of his opponent. For a moment he was intimidated but didn't let that daunt him, he fought and fought. He had to. For his master.
He saw Qui Gons lightsabre next to his body. He looked at it and then at Maul he reached out for the forced and at the same time he leaped into the air and grabbed the lightsaber, he struck out at Maul and raced to his master. Not waiting to see as the Sith lord, torn in two, fall into the pit.
Qui-Gon looked up at Obi-Wan, his beloved Padawan. He didn't have much time, he had to tell him so many things. To tell him how much he loved him, to tell him not to turn into the old Jedi knight that he had met so long ago.
"Its too late," he choked out
"No." Obi-Wan replied
"Obi-Wan, promise me you'll train the boy."
"Yes, Master." Qui-Gon put a hand to Obi-Wan's face.
"He is the chosen one… he will bring balance…train him!"
And with that Qui-Gon died in his apprentice's arms.
The flames manipulated Obi-Wans eyes, he could almost see Qui-Gons mouth moving. He wanted to stop the fires. To save his master. But his Master was gone.
But Obi-Wan had an odd feeling that they would meet again, someday…
The End
That's it! Corny ending but I liked it. Thank you to each and every one of you who reviewed each one is treasured. Thank you for reading though, review or not I loved writing this and I've decided, instead of letting the twisted Obi stories I think up distract me in Maths lessons, I'm going to write them down, write them in full, then post them so watch this space…
Review Replies
starryfaerie: Well now it is the end I'm afraid. I'd have to watch A New Hope again lol, but it's a good idea, and you never know thanks again lol
I really wanted to get them all on dvd, especially episode 1 but I realised there would probably be a box set soI didn't lol. My dad can't understand why I have the box set of all of the normal length LOTR's, fotr and ttt in extended editions and why I need the extended rotk lol, I told him about the star wars box set and he looked like he was going to faint!
master kaym: Well that wasn't but this is, thanks again! And thank you for liking it :)
MusicDreamer: Lol I realised once I saw your review. Checked my top trump cards and realised; I'd mixed up the Jawas (which end up selling C3PO and R2D2 to Luke) and the Tusken Raiders, thank you for letting me know and I'm glad you liked the chapter
wyldcat: Thanks lol yup another chapter, well there isn't now...and thankyou for pointing it out about the Jawas lol, I noticed after posting S
Kenobi-girl1: Ahh interesting lol
Miss Telcontar: glad to know I made ya think lol :)
Emmithar: And your chapter was superb as usual! Well there isn't muchleft lol, I've finished! Wow...sounds weird...finished...
In a way Qui Gon's always there, and now Luke's there, so in a way, it's been a while since he was alone lol
Oh god, I know! I've got pretty much everyone except my sister and my dad. And I've got £10 odd left...not good...annoying thing is; people I don't like are getting me presents and I asked them politely not to because I couldn't afford theirs and they were like "oh don't worry we don't give to recieve" ya suree they don't, I think I can afford a lil box of chocolates...
Worse thing about Christmas is the buying for other people, you're so busy and it's just one day...but can't complain about the gifts, and the tree, and the food...
Lol after writing this I've had enough of 'Time' lol. After reading that thing about Jude Watson I found out there's a book called 'Vision of the future' #is embaressed# I didn't know...
Untilnext timeHolmes!
Thank you so much to everyone who reviewed! And thank you to anyone else who read my story!
More stories on the way, so watch this space!
May The Force Be With You
--Mellaithwen, 6:10pm on the 9th December 2004
(and then edited at 08:13am on the 8th of May 2005)