1Ok, this is what's happening. I reread this story. Realized how bad it is. Mary-Sue characters, no plot etc. SO I'm going to delete this and then, if I can think of a way to do it good, rewrite it. This story was originally made when I was 12 years old, so that could be one of the reasons. SO yes, I'm definitely thinking of writing a story with the same general idea.

Just thought I should let you all know

Georgia