Chapter 1: Creation

The light in the cave flickered slightly, a red beast paced back and forth his horns glistened from the faint light in the cave. This red beast was none other then the prince of darkness Satan. Satan glared at the man in his mirror. "How dare you mock me Ranma Saotome!" Satan was angry at this young martial artist, because no matter how hard he tried to bring him into the darkness, Ranma wouldn't let him." I'll get my revenge just you wait and see!" Satan slams open a small cabinet and tosses things around, until he finds a small vase with black liquid inside. "Ahahahaha I've found it!" slams down the cauldron and begins brewing his stew.

Meanwhile at the Tendo dojo ranma is practicing in the dojo, Akane sits and watches as ranma works out. "Ranma don't you think that's enough for one day?" Ranma turns to akane, "It's never enough." "Ranma you idiot.." As ranma turned back, and invisible hand plucks some of his hair from his head Ranma screams, "Ahhh why'd you do that for akane!" Akane looks at ranma confused "Huh?" Ranma looks at her. "You pulled my hair just now!" Akane starts to get angry. "I did not! Why would I want to I have my own!" Ranma rolls his eyes at her. "Like you've got any left." "Who's fault do you think that was you jerk!" Akane slams ranma with her hammer, straight into the koi pond , a pissed off girl ranma pops up "So damn uncute!" Akane storms off in rage. "Damn I'll never understand that girl." Ranma looks down at her chest, and frowns, as she's not paying attention Satan's hand plucks some of her hair. "Ahhhh! Jeez how sneaky can you be akane!"

Satan chuckles with glee as he holds a black hair and a red hair in his hands, "Yes these will do just fine." runs over to his brew and drops the red hair in first, deciding that the black hair is worthless, he tosses it aside. "I've got a surprise for you ranma saotome!" The brew starts bubbling uncontrollably, and changes from sea green to a dark black, Satan rubs his hands together pleased with his work Out of the brew a hand shoots up from the black liquid. Satan grabs the hand and pulls a naked female version of ranma out of the pot. chuckles to himself "Now we must prepare you my dear." He scoops the naked red headed girl up into his gigantic claws and tiptoes down a dark passage way.

Down in the dark laboratory, Satan reads off a dark magic spell book, little sprints of red lights can be seen dancing in front of the female. "Now my evil one awaken, and do as I command you to do."

The red lights zap into the girl, making her light up with a red glow around her. The girl slowly opens her blue eyes. Satan smiles at the girl. "Hello Onna". the girl faints. " She's as girlie as they come. Ah well now to the good part, he yanks a red gem necklace off his desk, and puts it around the girls neck. "Now have fun." chuckles to himself. "If ranma won't come to my side, I'll just have my own evil doer!"

Onna opens her eyes slowly. "Did I actually sleep that long?" looks at the clock on her shelf. "Oh no I'm late for school!" jumps out of bed and grabs her black sailor girl school uniform and forces it on, while brushing her teeth and then brushing her hair out. A woman with black hair down to her hips looks in from the door, "Late again I see."

Onna looks over to the woman. "Oh come on it's not that late Alley."

Alley folds her hands across her chest "Yes it is."

Onna looks at the clock again. "Yeah I guess your right." grabs a piece of toast and rushes out of the house and jumps on her bicycle. Alley peers through the window, and watches as onna rides off. "Good." The woman walks over to the black curtains and pushes them apart to reveal a gold trimmed mirror. "Master I'm here to report." Satan's image appears in the mirror. "That's good, keep watching her for me." Alley peels off the human mask, and stares at herself in the mirror and instead of the woman with nice black hair, and green eyes, there's a she devil with black hair and emerald eyes, "Don't worry I'm sure the girl, won't disappoint you."

Meanwhile onna jumps off the bike and chains it to the bike rack. " I hate coming here." she starts walking up to the large school building slowly. A girl passes by with another girl chatting on and on about the new cross necklace she had gotten. Onna glares at the girl and her cross mutters softly, "There's no need to brag about something holy." Onna walks past the two girls into the school. Later on the girl with the cross walks into the girl's bathroom to wash her hands, Onna follows her through the shadows silently. The girl starts to wash her hands, and hum to herself, Onna comes up behind and yanks the cross necklace so that it's choking the girl. "You see where this gets you!" The girl coughed and slowly stopped breathing, and slumped down onto the floor. Onna walks out of the bathroom and back to class, as If nothing had happened.

Satan and alley sit on the black velvet couch, toasting to there victory. "Alley you and I have done such a good job with her so far." Alley now in her true form. "Satan we could think of her as our child." Satan smiles at the she devil. "Now alley my dear, that is a great idea, If any of the humans she hangs around with asks about her parents, we shall answer that question for them." "No wonder they call you the prince of darkness." She kisses him and stops suddenly "But wait, if she ever meets up with Ranma Saotome!" Satan puts his palm over alley's mouth "Yes I know she looks identical to ranma's girl side, but that makes it so very interesting."

At the school the police are investigating the murder, students huddle around the crime scene, hoping to catch a glimpse, a police man walks up to red headed girl and asks her if she knew anything. "No sir I'm sorry I don't know I thing, and I must say it's such a tragedy." Police man rubs his head. " Sorry to have bothered you." he walks off towards another student. Onna walks out of the school, and unlocks her bike and heads back home. The red gemstone glimmers as the sunlight hits it.

Alley has her eyes closed. "I can sense our dear one coming home." her tail sways back and forth. Satan sensed it as well. "I'll be going then, and put your human disguise back on, you might frighten her if she she's you like that." "Yes master." Alley puts back on her mask, with a flick of her finger her body changes to a human one, and the mask melts onto her red face, becoming real.

Onna jumps off her bike, and wheels it into the garage, and runs up to the front door.

Alley opens the door. " Hello dear, how was school?"

Onna drops her book bag down onto the couch. "It was alright I guess."

"Why are you home so early dear?"

"Early dismissal, I'm tired so I'm going to take a nap." walks off to her room.

Onna wakes up an hour later half awake and looks around and see's red light coming from the other room. Alley as a she devil. "Yes master.. I understand.. I think she's awake.." turns back and closes the curtain really fast. "Had a good nap dear?" Onna rubs her eyes at what she thought she had seen. "More or less." walks off into the kitchen.

"How was school?"

"I hated it."

"Meet anyone new today?" Alley gets all hopeful.

Onna shrugs. "No not really."

Alley quiet and thinking to herself ( "drats.. maybe tomorrow..")

Onna runs out the door with a poptart in her mouth and hops on her bike and rides off to school really fast, and chains up her bike and skids inside to her classroom right when the bell rings. A black haired girl greets her as she skids in, "Hey girl you made it just in time."

"I guess I did huh." Onna takes a seat and puts her head down.

"Hey I'm ivory sanchez , and you?"

" I'm onna satomi.."

Ivory gave out a slight laugh. "I can see your exhausted from running here, so we'll talk later."

Later at lunch time, ivory spots onna and waves her hand around, so she can see her. "Hey onna over here." Onna walks over and sits down. Ivory decides to start the conversation. "So did you know were going to visit Furikan High school tomorrow? You know that school with a lot of martial artists and stuff."

"No I didn't." onna sips her drink and listens to ivory go on about it.

"Yeah the ever famous ranma saotome is at furikan high."

Onna's red gem necklace glows lightly beneath her shirt. "Ranma Saotome…."

"Yeah you sorta look like him you know, it'd be neat if we met up with him huh." starts to eat her lunch.

Authors notes: There I hope your happy reviewer, I changed it.. jeez everything is illegal. I liked my script style..

I do not own Ranma ½ or any of it's characters, the great and powerful Rumiko Takahashi does, and Kitty, Shogukan, and Viz video and anyone else I forgot.