Hey! I'm a first time writer so plz review and tell me what's good and what's not.

I'm starting in Oddworld cuz it's easy to do. Then ill go to the big stuff. This is to start me off.

Oh and this is before Oddworld: Stranger's Wrath, but after Oddworld: Munch's Oddysee. Just so u know. Hope u like it!

"Hey, where's my Moolah!" yells Stranger.

"Right here Stranger," says the Clakker in a scared, worried voice. I don't have time for this.

"I need to get to New Yolk City soon, do u got a cart?" asked Stranger.

"Yea, but it will cast ya," said the Clakker.

"Of course it always does, how much for the cart," said Stranger.

"500 Moolah," the Clakker said.

"What!" yells Stranger.

"I just got that much!" The Clakker looks at the Stranger and is scared out of all of his wits. (Which the ones who have Oddworld: Strangers Wrath knows that's not a lot.)

"I'm sorry Stranger, I can't lower the price any lower.

" Oh my god! Fine, I'll pay it." Stranger slaps the Moolah on the table and grunts at the clerk. The clerk started shaking in fear knowing he was in trouble.

"You're lucky I'm in a good mood." The clerk clams down and is now relaxed from his little mistake. "Where's the cart?" asked Stranger nicely.

"Just outside of town." said the clerk.

"Where's your General Store anyway?" asked Stranger.

"Right next to this store actually." Said the clerk knowing that Stranger would be leaving now. Man he sure did talk a lot. Of course Buzzarton was a little while from New Yolk City. So he was going to get ammo for target practice. He walks out of the Bounty store and walks around the corner and for some reason everyone is watching his every move. "Weird."

Says Stranger. Everyone quiets down and walks off and does there usually junk just standing and looking at the ground. Idiots. Says the Stranger in his head. He enters the General Store and goes to the clerk. "Hey, get me some Bolamites and some Thudslugs." Said Stranger.

"Ok, but can u pay for it?" asked the clerk surprised to see him here.

"Of course I can. Here." Said Stranger wondering why everyone is acting up weird right now. "What's going on in this town?" asked Stranger.

"Oh, well, it has been a long time since we had a visitor." Said the Clakker clerk looking at Stranger in a weird, worried way. "So that is why everyone's looking at me funny." Said Stranger now not as worried as before. "When will the cart leave?" asked the Stranger.

"Well, it should be leaving soon." said the Clakker.

"I should be leaving then." said the Stranger, running to the door pushing it wide open.

"Have a nice day." Said the clerk. Man, I hope I don't miss that cart. I need to get there soon. If I do. I have to walk all that way. Stranger running as fast as he could. (Which was pretty fast cuz he ran like 30-40 miles per hour.) Where's that cart? Its not here! Why is the happening! I just got done talking about hoping I wasn't going to be late. Stranger looks around with all his rage and final noticing that it was behind him. Oh, there it is. When walking up to the cart Stranger notice a strange beeping noise. "Oh, Shi…" The cart explodes with a violent quake.

"Darn it boys. Guess we have to try again." Said one of the Outlaws Stranger was looking for. "Well, guess I have to get rid of you guys first!" Yelled Stranger in a furious attack against the Outlaws.