I'm new at writing fics… Ok well I'm the one who thought of the plot while my friend, neon kun writes the story. I'm not good at writing and this is a revised chapter. The real chapter one was really not that good, those who reviewed said so and I decided to let neon write and alter my story.
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Summary: Sasuke found Sakura lying unconscious under a cherry blossom tree. He's taking a liking to her and decides to bring her home only to find out that his brother is interested in her as well… (sasuxsaku), (itaxsaku)
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Note: Sasuke isn't that much of a loner here; his revenge thingy is not included so he's basically a cheerful person. BUT not that much, since I will still try make him in character in some ways. He's not gonna be like an idiot smiling all the time, shudders (I can't even bring myself to imagine him like that… sweatdrops) so don't worry that much. Ok what I mean is that he's going to lighten up a bit. (wonder if I should've just said that in the first place… hmm…)
-neon kun
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LOVE THAT BLOSSOMS
Disclaimer: I don't own Naruto
Chapter 1 " First meeting to the Second"
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A woman with pink locks, big eyes resembling emeralds is a kunoichi, a medic nin and the student of the 5th Hokage Tsunade. She goes by name, meaning Cherry Blossoms, Sakura.
She recently went missing during a mission. And strangely enough, not only did she went missing but her parents as well.
"It's been three months and still no sign of her…" Tsunade said sighing, massaging her temples,
Sakura is like a daughter to Tsunade. After her disappearance Tsunade never felt at ease worrying. But she is the Godaime. She shouldn't--- no, she wouldn't let her emotions stop her from giving rational decisions. After all she is still a ninja.
Little that she knows that Sakura will be found at long last…
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7:00 am.
Sasuke awoke from the sound of his alarm clock.
He slowly opened his eyes, sleepiness still struggling to take over… he yawned and reflexes took over, he quickly covered his mouth. He moved to sit on his futon. He stretched his arms, eyes still droopy. He stands fidgety; it seems his drowsiness is slowly winning.
He began his daily routines, starting with his hygiene. He went to the bathroom and started to plug the sink and filled it with water. He scoops a handful of water and splattered it on his face. He shakes his head a little. His plan seems to have gone well as his sleepiness starts to fade. After that he proceeded to take a bath. After a while he went out fully freshened up. He went downstairs to eat breakfast. After eating breakfast, he decided to go for a walk. The day is pleasant; the sun shines brightly high up in the sky and the breeze brushing through his skin... It feels nice. He walked pass tree by tree and into a lake surrounded by cherry blossoms.
This is where he first saw her. A woman with long pick locks, eyes full of determination, and has fair complexion. He always sees her here training. And from what he can make out, she's a kunoichi. It wasn't long before his hypothesis was proved to be right. She is a medic nin and trained by the best.
FLASHBACK
Sasuke went for a stroll at the park. He just suddenly had an urge to do so. It was already evening and soon he would be searched by his big brother.
He went near the lake and saw beautiful cherry blossom trees. But his attention was on only one thing. Usually many people would look around amazed and dazzled by the glorious sight, he would've done so too but something caught his eye. It was a girl, a pretty girl to be exact. A girl with pink hair. She was kicking nonstop a tree bark. Sweat can be seen on her pale face.
"She seems to be in the same age as I am" thought Sasuke.
He silently continued to watch her practice forgetting the time in the process.
Sasuke never liked girls that much apart from his family members,
"They are too annoying" he would reason.
But for some reason he couldn't keep his eyes off her, like she would disappear the moment he does. His thoughts were broken as the pink-haired lady stops her training and went nearer to the lake. He watched her as she gracefully sits down on the ground, staring on the passive lake.
While she's deep in thoughts, Sasuke stood there staring at her. He was hesitant to come closer to her. Once again, his thoughts broken as someone came into the area. A blond woman. Someone he knows, not personally though. It's safe to say she is known in and out of Konoha. She, the fifth Hokage, also known as Tsunade the Slug Hime.
"Sakura… " the blond called out.
"Hai… Tsunade sama...?" her soft voice responded.
"Come now you must get some rest..."
"Hai.." she replied smiling.
He watched their retreating forms until someone holds his shoulder. He quickly turned to see the person and found out it was his brother. Damn! He forgot the time. Seeing his brother, he doesn't need his older brother to explain. He knew exactly. He strode home. Itachi, his brother ignored him and shifted his gaze to the person his brother sacrificed time just to watch. And he left the place smirking.
Since then, Sasuke's interest in the pick haired kunoichi rose. He kept coming back to this place hoping to see her again, as he did until she went on a mission, a mission she never came back.
END OF FLASHBACK
He stared at the still passive lake. Even though he knew she went missing, he continued to come hoping to see her. Many days passed and how he longed to see her once more.
"What happened…? he said sighing.
"Sasuke" his attention was called. He turns to see the person, though he's very much aware who the person is.
"Itachi niisan..." he acknowledged.
"You have to go. You still have a mission to do" he informed.
"Oh yeah, thanks. See you" with that he left in a fast pace. He didn't exactly hate his brother, but he doesn't exactly love him either, Love is too extreme to use. He doesn't know why. It's just a complicated relationship between brothers.
"This tree" he turns to see a big cherry blossom tree saw an image of a certain pinked haired kunoichi training relentlessly.
"They make me remember her" he thought to himself.
"My little Cherry Blossom" he smirked.He said as if it was a natural doing of his. Then again, maybe it is.
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Ok so how's the revision? Tell me through a review. Tell me your insights… Is it better? And what's your opinion about the plot and everything about the story?
Once more this revision was written by neon kun. She has altered my simple story into this.
Oh and I'd like to steal this moment to tell you about this story neon kun made… it's entitled, "Amidst Everything" and "The Idiot I love" both SasuSaku pairing.