I'm finally writing something instead of reading other peoples stuff…YAY… its about time too…

Since this is my first fanfic…. please R&R to tell me if the chapters are too short.

Well here goes..

Manic's Ultimate Adventure

By the Kitsune Warrior.

Disclaimer. I do not own sonic and co. they are owned by SEGA. But I do own Orbin.
Authors note: whenever you see this: that means there is a change of scene.
Chapter 1 "lets find us a new planet"

"Well Orbin, it looks like he's not here." Said Manic looking at a small glowing white orb, which was floating gently beside him. "I guess we'll just look somewhere else huh?"

The orb didn't respond, it just floated there, in front of him.

Manic stared at the orb, and said "hmm.. Some help you are" he stood there and thought for a moment. "I'm sure we've searched this whole planet. I don't think there is anywhere else to go.".

He looked at his floating orb, and asked

"

"Have we been everywhere on this planet yet, Orbin"

To this question, the orb started to fly around in a crazy manner.

"I guess we have. Hmm… where are we going to go look this time, hey Orbin?"

The white orb floated slowly around to the back of Manic and started to bounce on his backpack that he was wearing.

"Yeah, your right Orbin, lets get off this planet and search for him on a different one"

Manic took off his backpack, opened it and pulled out a small, steel box. The box had just one button on it. Manic held it in his palm and pushed the button with his free hand.

The small box began to emit a small, almost inaudible humming noise from inside it. The box then opened, and revealed a small holographic screen.

"Ok Orbin, lets find us a new planet"

Manic pressed a button on the holographic screen and said to the machine

"List all unvisited planets"

The screen displayed 'processing data' and within moments a small list of planet names appeared.

Behind a large boulder, three suspicious creatures were spying on Manic and Orbin.

"Hey guys, he's stopped." Said the first spy, who was a wolf, he had sharp teeth, and carried a large rifle with a large scope attached to the top of it.

"No…really" replied a harsh voice in a sarcastic tone, "what is this Fang? a state the obvious contest?"

The wolf ignored the reply from behind him.

"I can get him from here, it's an easy shot" he said proudly as he rested the rifle on the top of the boulder, accidentally knocking over a few pebbles resting on top of it.

The pebbles rolled down the boulder, making clunking noises all the way down.

The clunking startled Manic "huh?" the green hedgehog had a look of slight confusion on his face.

He looked at the boulder and seen small pebbles roll down the giant boulder.

"Something's there" Manic thought to himself.

He quietly crept over to the boulder, and jumped over it in one great leap, turned around and saw,

"Hmm… nothing, must have been my imagination, hey Orbin?" Manic said to his orb that was still floating gently beside him.

"Well… lets pick a planet already" manic said to himself as he looked at the now unfolded box that displayed a list of 3 planets.

"Hmm… where should we go Orbin, there are 3 planets we can choose from.

Manic studied the list carefully. "Well he wouldn't be here" manic said to his orb while pointing to a small blue planet, which then displayed more info on the planet he was pointing to.

"Aquaria… I know from experience that he hates water, and this planet is nothing but underwater cities, so that rules that one out."

Manic looked at the second planet "this one is one giant metropolis, he'll have no room to run around here"

Manic looked at the final planet "this one on the other hand, is has cities, water, and plenty of space to run around this place would be perfect for him"

"That's it Orbin were going to…. Umm… what's the name of the planet anyways?"

Manic looked at his screen, looked at Orbin, and said proudly to him

"That's it Orbin, were going to…Earth!"

The small floating orb started to fly fast around Manic.

"Ok… here we go again, Orbin"

Manic faced his holographic screen, "open warp hole! Destination…Earth!"

The holographic screen glowed brightly. And then fired a strange floating black hole in front of itself. The hole then expanded, big enough to let Manic walk through.

"Ready Orbin, here we go," he yelled happily as he sprinted directly towards the black hole.

Manic hit the hole at full speed. Then disappeared into the depths of the blackness.

"Well then Bark, are gunna go after him and go through that thing or what, it's only gunna last a few more minutes, and then the hole will close and we'll be trapped here forever" enquired a small green duck.

To that, a large, mean looking, polar bear replied, with a hint of annoyance in his voice "of course we are going to follow him Bean, you think that I'm stupid enough not, to follow him?"

Fang butted in "well actually I…"

"JUST SHUT UP AND GET THROUGH THE HOLE! BOTH OF YOU…GO!" Bark blared with the intensity of a truck's air horn.

Fang and Bean took off at full speed, towards the hole that was slowly closing.

"I can see why his parents named him Bark, huh Bean." said Fang with a happy tone as he headed towards the hole.

"Yeah, tell me about it, that bears crazy, why do we even work for him anyways?" said Bean in reply.

"Well first of all he…"

"STOP YAPPIN' AND GET IN THE HOLE DAMMIT!" yelled Bark as he caught up.

"Yes Sir!" cried Fang and Bean in unison.

The 3 spies ran into the black hole and disappeared into the blackness chasing after Manic and Orbin.

Author's Notes:

YAY! I finally did my very first chapter for my very first fanfic. IM SO EXCITED IM GOING TO KEEP GOING, ANOTHER CHAPTER, YAY.

Oh. By the way, if you were wondering why Fang was happy when he got yelled at, its because he likes to tease Bark and make him angry.

PLEASE R&R. I WANT TO KNOW HOW GOOD I AM AT WRITING FANFICS. If there is anything wrong with it, please tell me. It can only make me better.