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Summary: Lorelai met Luke in a hospital waiting room. She was sixteen and looking for a way out of the life her parents had made for her, Luke just might be her ticket.
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Once upon a November night
Chapter one: baby boys and little girls
An eighteen-year-old Luke Danes walked out of his sister Liz's hospital room. Three days ago she had a baby, three days ago he had become an uncle. To him that seamed like a lot of responsibility. His dad Will was sick and wouldn't be able to take care of little Jess, Liz would be no good for him, she was only seventeen and barley knew how to take care of himself. To Luke that only left him to watch over the little boy, and that was a lot of responsibility.
He wondered around the halls and eventually walled into the waiting room. He found a chair, sat down, and closed his eyes. Five minutes later he heard someone ask.
"Is this seat taken?"
"No" Luke answered with out even opening his eyes. He felt the person sit down beside him. Luke opened his eyes and saw a very pregnant, but very beautiful girl sitting there. She can't be older then sixteen. "So are you here alone?" Luke asked the girl.
She looked up from the forms she was filling out. The question obviously caught her off guard. "Oh um, yeah." She said hesitantly then quickly returned back to filling out the papers.
"My name's Luke." Luke said.
"Lorelai." She replied back. "So we obviously know why I'm here, but why are you here?"
"My sister just had a baby." He told her.
"That's- ow!" she winced in pain which caused her to mess up what she was writing.
"Are you okay?" Luke asked concerned.
"Yeah, I'm fine, I think."
"Here let me help you with that." Luke said as he grabbed the forms and pen that she was holding.
"Oh you don't have to, I'm fine." Lorelai tried to convince him.
"No, it's okay, I don't mind."
"Well, thanks." Lorelai replied weakly.
"So phone number?" Lorelai answered the questions and Luke filled out the forms. Once he had finished he returned it to the front desk.
About ten minutes later a nurse came over to them.
"Are you Lorelai Gilmore?" she asked.
"Yeah, that's me."
"Please follow me, I'll take you to your room."
"Oh, okay." Lorelai replied a bit sad that she was going to have to leave Luke, he was great company for her.
"Well, I um, I better." Luke said pointing down the hall.
"Oh yeah, yeah you probably should." Lorelai said also pointing down the hall.
"Okay well, how bout I come visit you latter?" Luke suggested.
"That- that would be nice." Yes! She screamed on the inside.
"So um what room?" Luke asked.
"228." The nurse said.
"Okay good, good I'll a I'll see you later then." Luke said.
"Yeah, I'll see you later."
Luke turned and walked back down the hall he had come from.
"Are you ready now?" the nurse asked impatiently.
"Oh um yeah, room 228 right?"
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Luke walked into his sister's room. After he closed the door he turned around and saw his dad put one finger up to his lips to signal that Luke should be quiet.
"Your sister's a sleep." He said nodding in Liz's direction.
"Oh." Luke said as he took the seat next to his father.
"So where have you been?" Will asked.
"Just walking around." Luke answered.
"Oh."
"Yeah."
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A few hours had passed and both Liz and Will where a sleep. Luke thought it would be the perfect time to go and visit Lorelai, and see how she was doing.
228. That was her room number. 228 that number was burned into his mind. He didn't know what it was, there was just something about her.
Luke walked through the halls until he came to the right room. He knocked lightly on the door.
"Come in." he heard an agitated Lorelai call.
Luke slowly opened the door and walked into the room. "Hey."
"Oh hey Luke." Lorelai said with a hint of a smile.
Luke looked down and saw her still pregnant belly. "Still know baby?" Luke asked.
"No! God this kid is killing me!"
Luke chuckled. "Hang in there."
"I'm trying." Lorelai said. "So how's your sister doing?"
"Oh she's doing good, she's sleeping right now."
"Lucky her."
"Hey don't worry, this will all be over soon."
"Yeah, that's what the nurse said three hours ago!" she complained.
"Hey where is the nurse anyway?"
"Oh, uh she left after I started throwing ice chips at her."
"Right."
Just then the doctor came in. "Okay Miss Gilmore." He said taking a seat on the stool. "Lets see how far along you are. Well it looks like your 10 cm, it's time to have your baby."
"Oh well I better go." Luke said starting to leave.
"No Luke please stay." She hadn't known him long, it had only been a few hours actually. But there was just something about him, something about them, they just seamed to click.
"Um, okay." Luke said hesitantly, then walked back over to Lorelai.
"Okay Lorelai," the doctor said. "I'm going to need you to push on the count of three. Ready? One, two," Lorelai grabbed Luke's hand. "three." The doctor finished, and Lorelai pushed, she screamed in pain before falling back onto the pillows.
"Lorelai I'm going to need you to hold the next push for 10 seconds." He looked at Lorelai. "Can you do that?"
"I don't think I can." she almost cried. "It hurts too much!"
"Hey," Luke said squeezing her hand. "You can do this, okay? Just think a few more pushes and you'll have your brand new baby, okay?" Lorelai nodded her head and tightened her grip on Luke's hand.
"Okay push Lorelai." And she did. "One, two, three, four, five, six, seven, eight, nine, ten."
"Ugh!" Lorelai yelled as she collapsed once more on two the pillows.
"Your doing great I can see the head, just two more good pushes. Okay and push."
Lorelai healed Luke's hand tight, so grateful that he was there.
"Okay Lorelai just one more big Push." Lorelai was breathing heavily and screaming the whole time, until she heard the crises of her daughter.
"Congratulations," the doctor said. "You have a new healthy beautiful baby girl." Lorelai had the biggest smile on her face. She's here she's finally here! "Well dad, do you want to cut the cord?"
"Oh I'm not-" Luke tried to explain.
"Luke go a head, it's fine." Lorelai told him, and he obeyed. After she was all cleaned up the nurse put her down in Lorelai's arms, then left the three alone. "Oh my god! She's so small, and so adorable."
"She is." Luke agreed. "So what's her name?"
"I don't know. Non of the names I picked out seams to fit her."
"God, she looks just like you."
"Yeah?"
"Yeah."
"Maybe I should name her Lorelai then."
"I thought that was your name." Luke joked.
"Well guys always name there kids after them self, like Ricky and little Ricky, or-"
Lorelai started to ramble, but Luke cut her off.
"So this is little Lorelai?"
"No, just Lorelai, Rory for short."
"That seams to fit her perfectly."
"Hey Luke?"
"Yeah?"
"Do you want to hold her?"
"Can I?"
Lorelai laughed. "Of course." She handed Rory over to Luke.
Just then the hospital room door swung open. "Lorelai Victoria Gilmore! There you are! You don't just leave a not that says 'Mom, Dad I'm in labor and have gone to the hospital! You tell us, and let us take you to the hospital!" she stopped to catch her breath. For the first time she seamed to realize that Luke was standing there, and holding whom she assumed was her new granddaughter. "Who the hell are you?" Emily demanded.
TBC. . . if you want.
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