This is my first real story on I'm not writing this to be a literary masterpeice just to scratch a mental itch really
so yeah
The name nyana is pronounced na-yan-ah almost like diana and the race miyanin is pronounced mee-yawneen
disclaimer i do not own any of the characters or places from lord of the rings anything not from lord of the rings is mine or borrowed with permission from a friend
'Why would he do that , I thought we were happy'. She thought to herself lying in a bed of soft grasses salty tears leaking from her eyes,and blood leaking from her in streams. She knew her heart and body were breaking, soon to give in to the sweet endless time that was death. She thought endlessly of what had happend adon name flashed through her mind as she drifted away, with the stars as her only witnesses.
3rd person
"Let life return to you little one" a voice of tinkling bells spoke ,fluttering across space. A heart started to beat, pushing blood through a woman's small body. Air rushed in a out of her lungs as bodily fuctions returned to normal .
2nd person
"You may awaken little one" vieled eyes fluttered open warm light surrounding her wrapping her in a tight blanket of safety. The woman awoke in a great hall of silver and gold with white marble floors and large open teraces along the walls, the splashing of waterfalls could be heard in the distance. A tall woman was seated next to her with large silver star lined eyes and long snow colored hair "Do not be shy, speak and be heard young one". The woman spoke softly,a hand smoothing over the smaller womans cheek "Hello" the smaller woman voice was small and scratchy and afraid "do you not recognize me little one ?" the small woman shook her head her eyes filled with doubt " I am Varda Queen of the Valar do you know who you are. the silver woman asked.
1st person
My eyes widened as I thought of her question...
I don't know who I am.
Panic coarsed though me and tears clogged my throat as I whispered out "no".
I looked up towards Varda her eyes wise and beautiful , calming me she spoke " you my child are Nyana princess of the Miyanin , the lost sisters of the elves
Lil cliffy but anyway, how did ya find it ?. Please Review