A/N: hey everyone Kira here. I wrote this little bit for a poetry class and figured that i'd see how everyone liked it here. So please comment!
oh and I dont own avatar... though i would like to borrow Zuko hehe
It was noon when the flag was raised
Before the battle began to rage.
Five youths have waited for this day
And now they stand alone
The one with flame running through his veins
Watched and waited to start this game
Sneaking through the enemy's terrain
To light the first match
The woman who was not a girl
Since the war had changed her world
Fought like raging rivers that hurled
Her anger upon her enemy
The warrior who was now a man
Had put together this very plan
To infiltrate the enemy's land
At it's darkest dawn
The one was solid as the earth
Understood this battle's worth
Cried out when she felt blood first
And fell into this battle
The leader of this motley crew
Watched as his own anger grew
Called upon all he knew
To rid this world of evil
The five fought for many days
And knew what each of them must pay
To win this battle in any way
To save this world's people
The five finally became four
Only to loose one more
For her death had shook him to the core
And he left after the battle
The three that stayed
Had many parts to play
To renovate the world they saved
And finally bring it peace
The world will remember the way
The warriors fought to save
The land that laid
Under the flag that noon
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