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"Brother, help me please!" Alphonse screamed. A mysterious creature was carrying him in pieces down an ally in Central.

It was strange; no one has ever hated Alphonse for anything; he was always the gentle type of person.

The creature had attacked Al at night -completely off guard- using some kind of alchemy he managed to make Al's arms and legs fall off, before Ed had woken up from the ruckus the creature had created.

"Come back here you bastard!!" Ed screamed after him. Whoever he was chasing was really fast, faster than anyone he had seen. The creature turned sharply down another ally, causing Ed to slip on the wet ground right into a pile of garbage.

"Damn! I can't believe that thing got away," Ed said as he flung garbage off of himself. "Oh man, where did that thing go? He better not do anything to Alphonse or I swear I'll kill him."

Ed began to walk down the ally where the creature had gone, and he noticed it was a dead end. "Either that thing went through the wall, or that thing can jump really high." He looked to his left and the wall was still solid, but when he looked to his right he noticed a huge hole in the wall. "Well….I guess that explains it." Now he felt like and idiot, but regardless he went through the hole.

He followed the monsters path of the rubble it had left behind. He could tell the creature had used some type of alchemy of course, because nothing could just blow through a wall like that.

Eventually the path of rubble ended, but Ed decided to follow his instincts and go wherever they took him. They ended up leading him to what looked like a vacant house. But he went inside anyways.

Ed kicked the door down making dust fly into the air. "Looks like no ones cleaned this place in forever." Ed remarked. A flash of light suddenly greeted him. He tried to look up, but the light was too strong.

"Who are you?" Ed screamed."

"Well, well if it isn't Edward Elric the Full Metal Alchemist." A voice taunted.

"Who are you?!" He screamed again looking up his eyes finally adjusting to the light.

He looked over to his side and saw Alphonse in the corner of the room. He gasped; Al had been broken into pieces. "No...Alphonse!!

End Chapter 1