Daring And Bold Never Looked So Innocent-- Naruto, You've Got One More Shot To Do Right And It's Tonight So Don't Mess Up!


(Tighter)(Harder) (Smarter)(Hinata)

Hold on a little Tighter, Fight a Harder Naruto be a little Smarter and don't let go of Hinata


El:: (Sighs) I don't know what the hell I was Thinking when I wrote this! but I wanted this to turn out good, sorry for the long wait...but I still am not satisfied here... Augh, hope you enjoy it!! I don't like it...

This was inspired by the song Exceptional from Jojo, check out the lyrics at the bottom well the whole story was... I don't own them nor do I own Naruto...


Previously on::::::Do Not Judge Hyuga Hinata By Her Stutter

But something in her told her to let him, told her to rid herself of the pain and rejection she felt, She was about to lean up to meet his lips when...

"HINATA-CHAN!!"

Do Not Judge Hyuga Hinata By Her Stutter

Listen This Time!

"HINATA-CHAN!!"

Hinata's head snapped back away from Shino and she turned to where that familiar voice had come -it can't be- from in the stage set up thing in the restaurant– Naruto! and she nearly jumped up and ran for him in joy. But then again...what did Naruto really want?

"DON"T STOP! DON"T DO IT!"

Why was he here...why had he called to her? And not do what?

Shino helped her stand up straight and they looked at Naruto. Everyone in the whole resturant had turned quiet and Sasuke, Sakura, Ino, and Shikamaru sweat dropped. Hey! Naruto was taking here desperate masures, he was tired of never being able to ask her and this was plan C! He had to land it, he us Uzumaki Naruto after all!

Well, if you're going to try and get the attention of a good girl gone bad, MAKE IT LOUD AND CLEAR!!! right? Naruto grinned. "HINATA-CHAN! I'VE BEEN MEANING TO ASK YOU SOMETHING FOR QUIET A WHILE NOW!" Damn he was loud...anyway Hinata blushed, she wasn't liking how all are looking at her either.

Hinata nearly bolted out of there as she felt the spot light on her. Saw the bright light beat down on her, pointing her out. She was stopped by Shino though. "Let go!" she hissed at him.

"Stay! This might be what you want, just listen to what he has to say!" he snapped at her, and she looked back at Naruto with determination. Naruto was just there seeing if she was listening, his vibrant blue eyes so vividly on her. It was just so...surreal...

"Hey Naruto! I don't know what you mean and" Hinata yelled as she put her hands by her mouth to make her sound a bit louder. "Well I have some– " he cut her off, no not this time!

"LISTEN THIS TIME TO ME HINATA-CHAN! LISTEN TO WHAT I HAVE TO SAY AND SHUT Up! JUST LISTEN CLOSELY" He snapped. He'd heard what she's done but he doesn't care! She will be his by the end of this conversation thing they were currently having! awkward... but the best shot he's got!

"HYUGA HINATA! WILL YOU PLEASE GO OUT WITH ME!" Naruto was sympathetic this time, he was speaking the words from his heart and they were true and he was finally getting the chanse to speak them. He was not about to let the aportunity pass him by."I DON'T KNOW WHAT IS UP WITH YOU BUT I WANT YOU TO KNOW THAT YOU MEAN THE WORLD TO ME, YOU'RE BEAUTIFUL, BUT I BET YOU DON'T KNOW. I BET YOU FEEL LIKE YOU'RE NOT GOOD ENOUGH AND WISH TO BE MORE, OR SOMEONE ELSE, SOMETIMES YOU CAN'T SEE YOUR SELF, BUT I CAN SEE JUST WHO YOU ARE, YOU'RE AN

INCREDIBLE PERSON, YOU DON'T NEED TO CHANGE FOR NOBODY, WHEN WILL YOU BELIEVE THAT YOU ARE AN AMAZING GIRL? YOU DON'T NEED TO PROVE IT. I KNOW AND YOUR FRIENDS KNOW IT TO" Hinata smiled.

Naruto actually took the time to considered her and he asked her out! Hinata forgot about the people around her as she stared up at that blong Idiot she loves so much.

"Naruto" she whispered.

"He's awaiting your answer" said Shino startling her a bit then she nodded at him. Shino was right, why back up on what she really wants, this is what she wants and she wants Uzumaki Naruto.

"I know, but I don't, I mean...this is ...im..." Shino smiled at her. He' s a true friend.

"Just say what's inside you're heart" he said and she nodded and stepped forward murmuring a thanks to him. Her friend and teammate. True friends are rare...

"Hinata-chan, I NEVER FELT SO HAPPY THAN WHEN IM WITH YOU AND, I WON'T JUMP AT IT JUST YET, BUT I WANT TO GET TO KNOW YOU MORE, PLEASE GO OUT WITH ME AND BE MY GIRLFRIEND." Hinata's heart was pounding hard in her chest and she her eyes were wide. ...his girlfriend... she never had to do nothing to get him. He liked her, all on his own...now she wondered what would have really happened if she had taken him and tied him up somewhere...

All eyes on were in her, but she felt like it was just her and Naruto there as the light's dimmed. Everyone was waiting for her answer.

Tears started to stream down her cheeks, they were tears of happiness.

"Naruto-kun!" she yelled as loud as she could and he could hear her "I accept your date!" she yelled and Naruto grinned like a fool as " But before I go out with you there is something you have to do for me!" she licked her lips and looked down and his grin faded. She was not going to back away from this.

"WHAT HINATA-CHAN?" Naruto meant to ask it soft but the microphone was to loud, he should have not set it on high, but he had to make her listen to him, to wait and not rush so much anymore, to listen for once! "I'D DO ANYTHING FOR YOU!"

"I Want You" she gulped "I Want You To Kiss Me! Here and Now!" she blushed looking up to peek at him and Naruto blushed while people smiled. Then Sakura and Ino stood up and started to chant. "Kiss her! Kiss her! Kiss her" and dragged up Sasuke and Shikamaru up to do the same "troublesome KISS HER!" "Kiss her already dobe!" then everyone in the restarunt stood up and chanted too,

"Kiss her!"

"KISS HER!"

"KISS HER!"

"KISS HER KISS HER KISS HER KISS HER KISS HER KISS HER KISS HER KISS HER KISS HER KISS HER KISS HER KISS HER KISS HER!"

"Fucking french her foo!" yelled someone random.

"Use lots of tongue!"

"And make it wet!" it was mostly random females and some males telling them what to do.

"KISS HER ALREADY!!"

"Then strip her naked here and now and fuck her!" that person was thrown out the door immediately. Meanwhile lost in an eyelock world of their own, Naruto decided he would make it a wet kiss...what ever that was...

Everyone chanted in the back round and sounded far, but they were near. Naruto jumped off the stage with a big foxy grin and ran to Hinata and then stood before her. "Hinata-chan" he whispered as he looked into her white eyes and he leaned in and crushed his lips to hers in a sweet wet kiss. His tongue coming out to taste her sweet soft lips and her's came out to touch his. The kiss was partly passionate, but not to out of control since this was a public place. His tongue came in to her mouth fully, her arms around his neck and his on her waist.

"YEAH!" and there was clapping and some whistling and then two crashes and grunts as Sakura pounced an unsuspecting Sasuke to the floor kissing and Ino pounced an unsuspecting Shikamaru too and fell also to the floor making out simultaneously.

"RIP HER CLOTHES OFF!" that person was beat out the door ...again.

Then Jerry Springer comes out of no where and decides to do a final thought speech : "sometimmes we don't know what the hell is in front of us, and other times we do. Usually it is already to late, but as we saw here today nothing is that impossible. If that person truly loves you. You will be togerher. Don't play with someones emotions. Till next speech, take care of your selves and each other..."

"YEAH!"

" JERRY, JERRY, JERRY, JERRY!"

Then Jerry stopped before exiting (Yes, Naruto and Hinata are still kissing) "Before I forget,I'll let you know that you can read a NaruHina lemon all you have to do is go to Damn thing. The chapter named Anything! well Chapter Nine. Well, see you later" and he exist with Todd and Steve taking Sasuke, Sakura, Ino, and Shikamaru with them.

Naruto pulled away so he could look her in the eye, both oblivious to their surroundings "So can we take a walk" Naruto asked in a husky whisper as he rested his forehead on her's.

"Why not" she said and they walked out of there with their hand intertwined. There was some fighting around and some stipping, but like I said they were oblivious of this. Since this happened. In the future They were banned from the restaurant for making such a commotion, but since they were under the name Uchiha guests and then THE Jerry Springer. It brought popularity to the restaurant...


I couldn't believe it, here and now this night, under the shining stars and the moon so bright next to me, my true love was walking, with me. I've never felt more happy or complete. He was with me at last... what elese in this world can I accomplish being me? I made a mess of such things and acted on impulses. What the hell was I thinking?

Was I rally thinking?

Or was it that it was just to much fun to hurt others, I really enjoyed sending my fist into Neji's face and I really didn't care about the state my sister was in. In fact I didn't care for the hyuga name in all, besides later in the future I might be known as Uzumaki Hinata.

That has a better ring to it...

"Hinata?" I turned to face him, my heart beating loudly at my ears and my skin at my cheeks was heating up. I knew I had a hot blush on, I could never, EVER, control them around him. "Would you ever forgive me for being so dense?" I blinked a couple of times, it had taken him so long to notice that I loved him...

"How why?"


How could I have been so stupid to over look her and think of her as weird when she is so much more! More than any other person will ever be! That time when Sakura and Sasuke yelled at me in my face cause Sakura was still pissed that Hinata had kissed Sasuke and Sasuke blamed me for the way she was acting...

Putting together the fact that she knocked me out to do something...? I think

The fact that she got mad when all I did was mention Sakura? How could I not see it, it was plain. She showed her plain jealousy.

How come I never noticed those blushed for me?

Damn, I really am an idiot...

Was anyone out there able to tell in a heart beat?


"It's alright! It doesn't matter now, what difference will it make to apologize now" she said facing him and he smile that goofy foxy grin of his. It made him look so cute...

"I just can't help but apologize– " he was startled when her soft lips came down on his in a simple kiss before his bottom lip was between both of hers and then her teeth grasped his bottom lip. Hinata looked up at Naruto and nearly laughed at his expression, he looked both dazed and confused not to mention blushing brightly red.

"Are you alright Naruto-kun?" she asked innocently.

"Nah, yeah– Ahem– Yeah, im cool" Hinata laughed lightly at that and then brought her hand down to his as they continue to walk. He was the one to intertwine their fingers together... once again.


I looked down at our locked hands and couldn't help the feeling that I was home..

I didn't belong with Hyugas in a huge mansion

I was born to be free

from here on I tend to take full advantage of that


Somewhere else... (Don't own Italic Lyrics, Eminem does, see...)

[Intro-Eminem

Shady, Aftermath

There she goes shaking that ass on the floor

Bumpin and grindin that pole

The way she's grindin that pole

I think I'm losing control

"Dude!"

"Dudetts!"

" When and where did you find this place."

"I don't know"

"DAMN!" Kiba and Shino said in Unison when they saw the stripper twist around the pole and she was a freaking old lady!

"WOOF, WOOF GRRR!" Akamaru on the other hand found it terrifying as he would sink into Kiba's sweated and oly stick it's head a bit to bark and the contorting stripper.

"Dude, I can't tell if she's stripping or having a seizure"

Shino just nodded and in agreement...


A Month Later

Hinata sighed, she had resigned her tittle as Hyuga heiress and gave it to her sister, she didn't want it anymore it was meaning less, she wanted a fresh start in her life with Naruto by her side nothing could go wrong. And she was moving out of the Hyuga mansion. She didn't like it, cause it was full of strangers and it was a huge place.

She moved to her own apartment and her father had no say in the matter, she refuses to listen to him and refuses to call him dad. Finally packing the last of her things, she handed them to Naruto.

"Hinata-chan?" he asked as he looked at her heading up the other side stairwell. She smiled down at him.

"I just have one last thing to do, before I completely can go away from this place" he nodded.

"Alright, I'll meet you at your apartment and start to unpack this box" she waved him goodbye and started to go up till she reached her little sisters room. It was a vague memory at what she had done to her sister. But that was it, she had beat her for the acknowledgment of her father. She didn't want it anymore and she was finally able to live in peace. Lashing out wasn't the way to go, but still revenge was good before coming to a rational reason and she got to punch Neji, in the end it was all good.

"Hanabi?" she asked. Said girl looked up to see her older sister by the door smiling at her.

"What the hell do you want!" the little girl snapped at the older. To Hanabi, what Hinata had done was going to go straight on to sibling rivalry.

"Nothing" Hinata said in a low voice that it was almost a whisper...

"Then, Get Out!"

"As you wish, bye Hanabi, and I mean that." Hinata closed the door as she saw the wide eyes of her sister. She wasn't going to take in her questions, Hanabi will learn soon enough what her position will be and Hinata knew her sister could handle that position of power.


"Hinata-chan" said Naruto as she came out "you ready to go" she nodded.

"Yes!"

"Later im going to take you out" he said planting a chasted kiss at her lips.


You know, I don't know where im headed in life anymore...

Nothing is expected of me anymore, im free.

And it feels good to be free, im not pressure anymore. This freedom that I now have unleashes my strength. My full potential. I don't have to meet no one's goals. No one saying im worthless, cause im not.

I used to leave in a trapped world, wanting out. Im set free...

Im free. And this freedom is power.

I live my life now. My own way. My own choices.

So far couldn't be happier. I couldn't help for once to smile so carefree... and my new life is only just beginning...


So I let the rain pour on me

Releasing what yearns to be free

A smile

A kiss

The tender touch

They will miss me

My 'family' will miss me in the end

I don't regret

I learn from my mistakes

I made my own choices along the way

Some I'm not proud off

But they were my choices...

To me it doesn't matter what you say

Like it or not

I not for one second wish to go back and fix something

This is my life... soon my own words ...I guess..

The End


– Oh hell, that sucked! Any who, you want some lemon NaruHina, go to my fic Damn Thing and read the chapter named Anything/Chapter 9 No, that is a one-shot apart from this story.

– Thank's to all of you who stuck with this story!

And Thanks for Chapter Seven Reviews!


Thank yous

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The song that inspired some of it! Yes, I know Naruto says some of these things. But he tells the truth mis amigos...
Mmmm

You're beautiful but you don't know

Can't see what's there inside your soul

Always feelin like you're not good enough

You wish you could be someone else

Sometimes you just can't see yourself

But I can see just who you are, who you are

You're exceptional the way you are

Don't need to change for nobody

You're incredible, anyone can see that

When will you believe that?

You are nothing but exceptional

(Yeah)

You never you think you measure up

Never smart or cool, or pretty enough

Always feeling different from all the rest, oh

You feel so out of place, you think you don't fit in

I think you're perfect in the skin you're in

You're just perfect just how you are, just how you are, yeah

[chorus

You're exceptional the way you are

Don't need to change for nobody

You're incredible, anyone can see that

When will you believe that?

You are nothing but exceptional

If you could see the one I see when I see you

You'd know how lucky you are to be you

I see through into you

And you are

You're exceptional the way you are

Don't need to change for nobody

You're incredible, anyone can see that

When will you believe that? (You are!!!)

You're exceptional the way you are

Don't need to change for nobody

You're incredible, anyone can see that

When will you believe that?

You are nothing but exceptional