A/N: Okay, hello everyone. This is my first Naruto Fan Fic and I hope you all enjoy it. The main story is going to revolve around Naruto, the Hyuugas, and the Uchihas. Since this is going to be an Alternate Reality, there will be a few HEAVY changes to the original plot of the manga, but it will still follow it, albeit a bit loosely. I will explain some of the changes if they are a bit too hard to comprehend or seem impossible. Just no flames saying "that would never happen" and "that's retarded" or whatever, if you don't like it then go read something else. Feel free to point out any errors I may make, long as it's kind of important, otherwise I'll probably just leave it alone. Review if you liked it or not, my ego needs fuel to keep growing. :-P
Notice: I did borrow the idea for Hanabi from Surarrin's story "An Alternate Path". If you've read his story then you know what I mean. Any other similarities between his story and mine though are purely coincidental. (Even though it's not finished, I'd recommend you read it. I liked it.)
Disclaimer: I don't own Naruto or anyone from the Naruto universe. Any of the few original characters I may make in the future I do own though. You've got to ask permission first if you want to borrow them.
Key:
"" Speaking
'' Thought
"" Kyuubi
Jutsu Name
'Why, Why, Why, Why, WHY!' That was the only thought constantly running through the mind of the 4 year old, crying boy as he tore down another street of Konoha as fast as his tiny legs could carry him. The thought belonged to Naruto Uzumaki, the bane of Konoha's very existence. The poor boy was currently running for his life from yet another mob of blood thirsty villagers. He did not know why he was being chased. This had suddenly become a reoccurring event every week for the past month since he was forced to leave the orphanage. Somehow he always managed to evade his would be assailants, and Kami willing, he'd be able to do it again. He had gotten lucky last time, if it hadn't been for the Sandaime stepping in himself, he would have probably been killed three days ago during that stupid parade to celebrate the ending of some war with some other nation that he didn't know about.
The unmistakable yelling of curses and insults of his pursuers drew ever closer, effectively drawing him from his thoughts as he turned down another seemingly empty street. He didn't bother calling for help. It never came. Not once. Whatever happened to those men in the black and white armor with animal masks who were supposed to protect everyone?
He seemed to wince with almost every step he took. Upon closer inspection, one would notice that the boy had no footwear with which to protect his tender feet from the harsh, unforgiving cement that was Konoha's streets. His feet were a bloody mess, several cuts and lacerations adorning them. Unbeknownst to the small boy, all his many cuts and small wounds were being miraculously healed almost as fast as they were being inflicted.
It was like being caught in a living nightmare to the child. No matter how much he cried, no matter how fast he ran, he could always feel them drawing closer and closer. Even worse, he always felt like he was slowing down. The overwhelming sense of fear and dread rolling off him in waves could be felt by anyone with half a brain. He instinctively knew that should he let these sick and twisted individuals catch him...he was as good as dead.
Thinking quickly, Naruto ducked into a nearby dark and dingy alleyway that was cluttered with filth and dirty boxes. Curling into a tiny shivering ball, he hid underneath the nearest box he could find. No sooner had the box shrouded him in complete darkness, he could hear the rush of several footsteps passing by him followed by the occasional cry, "We'll get you, you little fucking demon" and "We'll make you pay for what you did!"
"What did I ever do to them? Why do they always call me a demon? Am I really a demon like they say?" Naruto thought to himself while he hid underneath the box, trying his best to keep his shivering and whimpering under control. Soon the yelling and thundering of feet started to fade away and Naruto started to relax…he had managed to outsmart the bastards again. He'd be alright for another day at the very least...or so he had thought.
Tap...Tap...Tap...Tap...
Just as Naruto had been about to lift the box up to see if the coast was clear, he heard the dreaded sound of foot steps heading in his direction. He held his breath and clenched his eyes shut, praying with all his might that whoever was walking toward him wouldn't find him. The footsteps continued getting closer and closer until they came to an abrupt stop right in front of him. He couldn't help the small whimper that escaped him as he felt his fear return tenfold.
He heard a dark chuckle as the box was kicked away, revealing the frail little blonde headed child, his legs cradled tightly to his chest. Naruto lifted his head to see who had found him. Their eyes met. Tear filled ocean blue eyes clashed with crazed pearl black. From the Konoha hitai-ate attached to his arm, Naruto instantly knew that he had been found by a young dark-brown haired ninja. What rank he was, Naruto had no clue. All he knew was that if he didn't get away, it was all over.
"There you are you little shit. Its time you stopped running and just accept your fate. You should have been killed the day you were born. I won't let you get away with what you did to me. The Hokage isn't here to save you either…it's time to burn demon." The unknown ninja spat menacingly as he made his way toward the quivering boy. He had a maniacal smirk on his face once he saw the fear etched on the boy's face. To punctuate his last statement, he slowly put his hands together into a seal. It was obvious this ninja intended to kill him by using some kind of Jutsu. Naruto was quickly running out of time.
At the sight of the hand seal, Naruto slowly started to crawl away, his blue eyes widened in fright. He wished he could stop his god awful trembling, but this was just too much for a young boy to endure. While his instincts cried for him to flee, an idea slowly came to mind...he just hoped it worked. Dieing at the age of 4 was not what he had in mind.
Hanabi Hyuuga, age five, was in a deep state of confusion. She and her father, Hizashi, had recently met the Head of the Hyuuga clan, Hiashi, and his little daughter Hinata, the heiress of the Hyuuga clan. While Hanabi had enjoyed getting to meet her cousin, she still could not completely grasp what had been done to her, nor could she figure out why her father had been growing increasingly tense and easily aggravated over the past few days. She was at a loss as to why.
Flashback
Three days ago…
Hizash gently held the hand of his little white-eyed daughter as he stared emotionlessly into the white pupil-less eyes of his twin brother, Hiashi.
They stood on opposite sides of the Hyuuga main garden, merely a few yards apart; all dressed in formal Hyuuga robes. They were accompanied by various members of their respective branch of the Hyuuga clan. Hiashi stared back just as coldly at his brother. His own little daughter, Hinata, was shyly clinging to the back of his robes, trying to hide herself from view.
Hizashi looked down at Hanabi's face to see her flashing her favorite arrogant little smirk for all to see. While he prided himself on having such a strong daughter, it broke his heart when he thought of the grief and sadness she would have to endure. 'If she only knew what's in store for her…to be cursed to forever serve the main branch of our accursed clan. I'm so sorry honey.'
"Hinata-sama is now four...congratulations" Hizashi stated calmly. He flashed Hinata a small smile as she poked her head around from her father, before retreating back to her hiding place.
"Thank you" Hiashi replied with a small nod.
Hanabi happened to catch a glimpse of Hinata's face as well, and was surprised to find how similar the two looked alike. Besides her hair being cut shorter and being more of a raven black, as opposed to Hanabi's long flowing obsidian locks, they could easily be mistaken as sisters. Hanabi looked up to see her father looking down at her already. She silently whispered to him, "She's really pretty otousan."
Hizashi's already thin lips turned into a gloomy frown. Hanabi instantly picked up on this this and tried to find out what was the matter.
"Otousan? What's wrong?" Hanabi asked softly.
Hizashi instantly recognizing his slip flashed a small fake smile to his daughter, "Huh...Oh, no...its nothing honey."
Hizashi then returned his attention to his brother, leaving his daughter to look at him skeptically.
"Well then...I'll be taking care of the sealing of young Hanabi. Hizashi...?" spoke Hiashi with a condescending tone.
Hizashi's face contorted into a deep scowl. "Yes Hiashi-sama" he grounded out. His hands, which were balled into fists, were shaking violently at his sides.
Hanabi was left wondering...'What does he mean by sealing?'
End of Flashback
Ever since then, her father always seemed to be upset about something. She had pondered what Hiashi-sama had done to her, but when she asked her father, he would only get even more upset and tell her to not worry about it. Hanabi had stood in front of a mirror in her room for hours gazing at the strange looking seal that had been placed on her forehead by her very own uncle. While she honestly had no clue what it was for, she decided that it would be best to just take his word for it and leave it be for now. She decided to follow her father's example by wrapping some bandages around her head to cover her seal, being as she didn't have a hitai-ate yet. That would come when she became a kunoichi like she always dreamed of being.
Hanabi and her father were now walking towards their home, Hizashi walking with a stoic, calm posture, while she walked with a slightly arrogant swagger behind him. She liked to show off in public…while she didn't believe she was superior to others like practically all of the main branch of the Hyuuga clan did, she did feel like everyone should know that she was not somebody to mess with. She sometimes wondered why it pleased her to see people either appear shaken or fearful once they saw her white eyes and instantly recognized which clan she was from. If anyone got on her nerves, she was quick to remind them why her name meant "Fireworks". She did have one hell of a scary temper. (Kind of contradicting huh?)
White pupil-less eyes took in their surroundings. The long streets of Konoha were quite deserted, something that was quite unusual for a city with such a huge population of people. She found it quite odd for a village that had just had a huge parade celebrating the end of the war with Kumogakure, it was hard to believe that the village seemed like a ghost town now. Just as she was about to ask her father why it was so abnormally quiet, there was a thunderous roar that shook the very ground they walked on, resounded for several blocks of the village.
Sasuke Uchiha, age four, smiled happily as he rode upon his brother, Itachi's back with his arms wrapped snuggly around his neck. He had just gotten to see his big brother train some more and was proud to have someone as strong as Itachi for an older brother. Not many people could say their brother graduated from the academy at the top of his class at age seven, mastered their family bloodline limit at age eight, and recently became a chounin at age ten!
Though his brother hardly ever talked, Sasuke found he was the only one who could get his brother to willingly talk with the least bit of effort, another thing he was proud of. 'I can't wait for my brother to start training me like he promised! I can't wait to be strong like him.'
While Sasuke was lost in his own little world...Itachi was trying to calm the raging storm that was his own thoughts. 'Damn you Shisui...what has happened to you...?' He was of course referring to Shisui Uchiha, a twelve year old boy who until recently, he had looked up to as an older brother. He had recently begun to emotionally distance himself from Shisui due to some disturbing occurrences that had him wondering if Shisui had any sanity what so ever…
Flashback
One month ago…
Itachi crouched down on one knee breathing slightly harder then usual. A few beads of sweat falling down his brow. He deactivated his Sharingan as he looked at the destroyed landscape around him. Kunai and shuriken littered the ground with the occasional smoldering crater mixed in. He looked down at the two motionless bleeding corpses at his feet. The two jounin level missing-nin that he had defeated were quite a handful, but nothing the Uchiha prodigy couldn't overcome. He glanced over to see Shisui, sharingan still activated, glaring down at the last of their enemy who was crippled on the ground with two kunai in both of his legs, screaming in pain as a small pool of blood started to surround him. Shisui had the most disturbing gleam in his eye and sadistic smirk on his face that Itachi had ever seen.
The crippled enemy ninja had been the one who had blindsided and killed their third teammate with a very accurately thrown kunai with an explosion tag attached. Even though neither was close to their now deceased teammate, it appeared that Shisui intended to get revenge.
Itachi decided that they had wasted enough time and that it would be better that they retreat back to Konoha, just incase the enemy ninja they just killed had any back-up in the near vicinity.
"Shisui...if you're going to kill him, make it quick. We need to make our retreat" Itachi stated without any hint of emotion.
Shisui acted as though he didn't hear a thing as he slowly stalked toward his prey. The enemy ninja had just managed to gather control of himself and look at Shisui with a hateful glare, trying his best to hold back the pain he was feeling. Shisui seemed to pause for a second before letting out a dark chuckle.
"Excellent...excellent...I love that look. That wonderful look of pure hatred on your face. It makes it all the more enjoyable when you realize your going to die and that look of utter fear and desperate takes over. Can you show it to me...just a little peak?" Shisui spoke as he slowly lifted his leg and slammed it down on top of one of the kunai in the man's leg, jamming it down until it scraped the bone. The screams of unimaginable agony resumed almost instantly. Blood erupted everywhere, shooting ever which way. A few drops landed on Shisui's cheek which seemed to only drive his blood lust.
Itachi merely scowled underneath is high collar of his black Uchiha crested shirt as he watched his best friend and rival laugh hysterically at another man's pain. He knew something was wrong with Shisui. He had slowly begun to change from the nice, gentle natured friend he once knew into a heartless killing machine ever since he had mastered his sharingan shortly after Itachi and the both of them had been assigned to increasingly challenging mission after mission. Itachi wanted to say his friend was just going through a phase...that he would soon return to his normal self...but with all the bloodshed they had both gathered on their hands...he was honestly surprised he hadn't lost his mind himself.
The enemy ninja then proceeded to futilely crawl away from Shisui, which only caused him to laugh even harder. Out of options and out of time, the enemy ninja released a chakra pulse to alert his comrades, much to Itachi's annoyance. Shisui seemed to sober up instantly and walked around the fallen ninja so that he could look him in the eyes.
"Time to burn buddy" Shisui stated with a sickeningly cheerful expression on his face as he put his hands into a very familiar seal to Itachi. The poor ninja only managed to widen his eyes in shock as Shisui flew through the hand signs and yelled...Katon: Kagirinai Enkou no Jutsu!!!
The ninja was engulfed in a roaring flame that caused him to thrash around and scream in utter agony. This Jutsu was different from most other flame jutsus because it burned the victim at an ungodly slow rate until they finally died. Even then, the jutsu was known to burn a victim's body for up to several hours, even after the victim has long since died.
"Yes...burn you fool...cry for me..." Shisui whispered to himself as the man's dieing screams echoed in the forest around them and the flames reflected in his now pearl black eyes. He was brought out of his musings by a firm hand on his shoulder. He instantly whipped around, sharingan blazing to confront whoever dared to touch him. Three tomed sharingan met three tomed sharingan in a dead stare. Shisui instantly relaxed, deactivating his sharingan once again.
"Sorry Itachi-kun. Just having a little fun is all." Shisui stated with an amused smile on his face.
Itachi was all but amused at the moment. His glare left no room for discussion. "Since you're done with your...fun...I'd suggest we retreat, NOW! Every enemy within a ten mile radius probably felt that distress call. We need to leave before they arrive on our position." Every word he said, his voice slightly raised in tone. He was clearly very upset and slightly disheveled.
Shisui was about to make a retort when they felt several enemy chakra signatures starting to close in on their position and decided it would indeed be best if they made a hasty retreat. Not to mention an angry Itachi was not a good Itachi. Shisui didn't want to press him anymore then he all ready had.
The two of them then disappeared into the trees making a mad dash back to Konoha, the whole while, Itachi flashing the occasional glare at Shisui with a hidden scowl beneath his collar while all Shisui would do in response would be to flash a happy, cheerful smile.
End of Flashback
Needless to say, Itachi had immediately reported what happened to his father, Fugaku, the Captain of Konohagakure's military police force. A saddened frown was the first thing he received from his father. He no doubt was assuming that Shisui's sharingan had driven him insane, an unfortunate side effect that seemed to affect a small handful of the few people able to achieve their clan's bloodline limit.
His father had personally done his best to prevent such a thing in his first born son. He had helped him to understand the dangers of his sharingan, taught him its secrets, and made an agreement with the Hokage to lower the number of dangerous missions his son was sent on in an attempt to protect his son's gentle psyche, all in the hopes of preventing what was apparently happening to Shisui.
Fugaku had warned Itachi to be wary of his friend, and try to keep a close eye on Shisui, should his mental state progress too out of control. He was to report to Fugaku immediately should Shisui become a threat to himself and others around him, which to Itachi seemed like he already was. If push came to shove, Itachi was told to kill his friend; should they have no other choice...he did not know if he could do that...
"Oniichan...ooonnnniiiiiiccchhhhhannnn hellllooooo?"
Itachi was abruptly torn from his thoughts by his sometimes incredibly annoying little brother. He let out a deep sigh and slightly narrowed his eyes incase there was a problem.
"Yes ototo?" Itachi said with a silky, albeit forced calm voice.
"What are you thinking about oniichan? You seem really upset about something?" Sasuke said with a slightly worried expression on his face which went unnoticed by Itachi since Sasuke was still behind him holding onto his neck.
"Do you really want to know Sasuke?" Itachi replied. Feeling Sasuke nod his head, he motioned for Sasuke to bring his head next to his as if he were about to tell him an important secret. When Sasuke's head was right next to his, Itachi swiftly tapped Sasuke in the forehead with his index and middle finger, leaving a small mark and only serving to aggravate Sasuke. Itachi's usually cold eyes shone with glee and had an unusually amused smirk on his face. Not that anyone saw it underneath his collar, but it's not like he cared.
'Damn him! He got me again!' screamed Sasuke in his mind. Just as he was about to yell in his brother's ear, a thunderous roar shook the ground underneath them, sending all the birds in the nearby trees fleeing in fright. Followed by that was a sinister wave of intense hatred and bloodlust. The likes of something Sasuke had never experienced in his life. Sasuke suddenly felt very frightened and went to tighten the grip of his arms around his brother's neck, when Itachi quickly kneeled down and gently placed Sasuke on the ground.
"Sasuke, I'll take a look into this. You stay here and stay out of trouble. Are we clear?" Itachi said in a cold tone that left no room for question. Sasuke merely nodded his head. With that, Itachi took to the roof tops.
'That cry wasn't too far away. The source was at least 10 minutes away. Hmmm...I wonder who could have done it...' Itachi thought as he sped from rooftop to rooftop. A good idea of who it was already who could have made such a feral cry...
Meanwhile Sasuke watched his brother until he disappeared from view. He felt ashamed of himself. A proud Uchiha wasn't supposed to succumb to such pitiful emotions such as fear. It was probably nothing anyway. He would go see for himself and show everyone he wasn't afraid of anything, especially to Itachi...with that, he broke out into a mad dash in the direction his brother had headed, all the while hoping he didn't get lost...Itachi would kill him if that happened...
This was probably going to get him killed...better yet he knew this would. Unfortunately this was the best thing he could come up with and all he could do was hope it worked. Steeling himself for what he was about to do, Naruto slowly made his way to his feet, much to the unknown ninja's excitement which shone clearly on his depraved face.
"Excellent...excellent...your going to fight back. All the sweeter for when I kill you demon. "The dark-brown haired youth sneered as he took his hands apart, canceling the Jutsu he was about to use to destroy the child. He would make the demon spawn suffer first. Oh happy day…
Naruto stood before the ninja head with his head bowed, his shaggy dirty blonde hair obscuring his eyes from the other boy's sight. It was now or never. He slowly raised his head to stare into the other boy's pearl black eyes, his ocean blue orbs as cold and emotionless as he could manage...he hoped this worked...
"You want a demon you big jerk...I'll show you a demon" Naruto spoke with a tone as chillingly devoid of emotion as his eyes. The brown haired ninja faltered for a split second. Naruto took his chance. He ran screaming at the top of his lungs at the young boy, hands ready as if to slash his enemy, who seemed to be lost in some terrifying memory. Upon hearing the child's scream, the boy jumped back several yards, fearing that he had actually managed to awaken the demon within. But after a few seconds of watching the boy running towards him, he realized what the blonde headed brat was up to...and he didn't find it one bit funny.
Naruto stopped running toward his assailant when he saw the man's face change from one possessed with fear to one of bitter rage. 'Looks like he saw through it' Naruto thought gloomily. He had hoped he could scare the ninja back just enough so that he could escape out of the dead end that was the alley he was currently in. The enemy ninja was out of the alley and in the street, but there was no where enough room to run by him. He was trapped. He was good as dead.
"Nice try you little shit...you had me going there for a second...I'll give you that. But, playing upon my insecurities like that really wasn't a smart thing to do" The dark haired ninja stated sadistically as he slowly began to fade from view until he completely disappeared.
'Where did he-'Naruto didn't even get to finish his thought as all the air in his lungs left him in a rush. The bastard had disappeared then rematerialized in front of him in an instant, driving his fist into the poor child's tender stomach, raising him a couple of feet off the ground before letting the child plummet to the floor. As Naruto's head hit the ground with a dull thud, his assailant then proceeded to assault his tiny body with a furious barrage of bone jarring kicks and punches. Naruto did the only thing he could at that point, which was curl up in a tiny whimpering ball. Naruto would have felt proud of himself for not crying out if he had not been in so much pain that he could think straight.
After he placed one more well placed punch to the child's head, he followed it up with a heart stopping kick to the boy's ribs sending the kid flying several feet until he crashed into a pile of trash cans. His smile only grew wider and more sadistic. He had felt a few of the demon's ribs snap with that last kick. 'Well it was fun while it lasted, but I might not get to finish the job should I play around with him any longer, what a shame, ne?" With that thought, he disappeared and reappeared next to the boy who was on his hands and knees coughing up blood. He picked the boy up by his arm and spun him around a few times before flinging him down the end of the alleyway into the wall at the end. The boy landed with a satisfying crunch, leaving a few cracks in the side of the building. This was over…
Somewhere inside Naruto's Consciousness…
There was a massive room that was flooded with up to a foot of dark and murky water. Instead of there being a fourth wall, there was a truly massive caged door. A small piece of paper with the word "Seal" written on it was placed on the caged door.
In the shadows within the cage, a majestic being of incomprehensible power slowly began to stir. It opened one of it great eyes to reveal piercing golden amber.
"Pathetic Mortals. I'll show you what a true demon is like...kukuku"
His piercing amber eye began to glow with a malevolent unknown purpose...The being's entire body began to glow a dark sinister red aura as a very small sliver of its malice laced chakra seeped out from the cage he was incarcerated in...
'Damn! Damn! Damn! DAMN!' Naruto screamed in his mind as he was assaulted with blow after blow. He was trying his hardest to protect his stomach, which for some reason; his sadistic attacker kept attacking for some reason. Could it have something to do with that weird seal that was there? Who knew? All he did know was that he had never experienced so much pain in his entire short life. Especially when the man kicked him in the ribs, sending him flying into a pile of trash cans. His chest was on fire with blinding pain, he had heard something snap with that kick and he was finding it increasingly difficult to breathe every second. Just as he had raised himself onto his hands and knees, the brown haired ninja did that same disappearing and reappearing trick and latched onto his arm. Before he knew it, he was being spun around like a top before being hurled into a wall all the way at the end of the alleyway.
When he slowly slid down the wall to rest on his knees, his mind drew a blank. Was this really the end? Was he really going to die in some run down alley, killed by some bastard he didn't even know for no reason other then him being some "Demon"? Fuck that...'I don't want to die...'
With that last thought, sudden warmth rushed through his body, it was an incredible feeling. All his aches and pains slowly began to fade away into nothingness. Even the blinding pain in his chest was nothing more then a dull ache now. He felt...powerful...he felt amazing...like there was nothing in the world that could touch him. Unbeknownst to him, his tiny teeth and nails had slightly elongated and became sharper. The cute little whisker marks that adorned both cheeks had slightly deepened and became more pronounced. Adding to his already feral looking expression. The last of his small changes were the fact that his pupils had become slits like a fox and his irises were now a deep crimson red. If he had looked at himself in a mirror he would have been utterly blown away, as well as disheartened to see why everyone hated and despised him.
While he may not have noticed the changes he was going through, his assailant sure did. His eyes widened in fright as he saw the once calm ocean blue of the Jinchuuriki's eyes slowly morph into a demonic red. He instantly realized it was for real this time. No tricks. He needed to finish the job now, or he may wind up in a lot of trouble. He instantly activated his fully matured sharingan, glaring at the demon child in front of him. It was over.
"It's too late for that now you filthy demon. You're going to burn, and I'm going to enjoy every second of it!" The boy screamed as he flashed through his hand seals. Katon: Kagirinai Enkou no Jutsu!!! He bellowed as a monstrous flame shot forth from his lips and proceeded to travel down the alleyway toward his trapped query. 'Please burn for me'
Naruto's eyes widened for only a split second as the glow of the flames got closer and closer. It filled the entire alleyway; there would be no dodging it. He was going to die. While he should have been overwhelmed with despair and fear, he was unexpectedly flooded with feelings of rage and hate. He had never felt this before...he wanted to kill the boy in front of him...would it really be so bad? All he knew was that he wasn't going to die, not here in some god damned alley. Not by this fucker. He had had enough…
In a voice much too deep and malicious for a four year old boy, he slowly bellowed at the asshole trying to kill him. Releasing wave after wave of hatred and bloodlust into the air.
"LEAVE…"
"ME…"
(The fire was almost upon him now. Only another second or two and he'd be dead.)
"THE…"
"FUCK…"
(The fire spread went to engulf him, promising a most painful, agonizing death…Naruto closed his eyes and screamed with all his might…)
"AAAAAALLLLLLLLOOOOOOONNNNNNNNEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!"
With that deafening roar, the blazing storm that was his assailant's flames were instantly blown out, hurricane force winds slammed into the brown haired youth, his eyes widened in unimaginable fright and he raised his arms to protect his face...the winds were too strong, everything in the alleyway was blown into the wall opposite the alleyway, boxes, filth, trashcans, everything. His would be assassin was the last to go, even with chakra anchoring him to the ground; the mighty gusts were still too powerful. He was lifted up and hurled out of the alleyway across the street into the wall of a building behind him. He was surprised he didn't go through the wall, if the size of the crater he made in the wall was any indication, he'd come mighty close.
The winds died almost as fast as they had appeared. The sharingan wielder slowly pulled himself from his crater and slowly made his way back to the alleyway, holding his shoulder the entire time. He'd broken something when he impacted that wall. He'd have to find out what, later. His sharingan swirled in a crazed frenzy as he neared his prey once more.
When Naruto finally opened his eyes, he saw the insides of the walls of the alley missing several bricks and pieces of wood. Everything that had once been in the alley know littered the street and wall over at least one hundred feet away from the entrance to the alley. In a nice sized crater along the wall as well was his attacker, staring at him with a mixture of shock and hatred etched upon his face. Naruto was too shocked to move. 'Did I really just do that? What...what am I?' Naruto slowly began to feel the world darken around him as he stared into his attacker's crazed eyes. 'Why are the black dots in his eyes spinning...'. As he slowly began to fall to the ground, he saw his attacker had already pulled himself from the wall and was stalking towards him, albeit slightly slow due to various injuries. 'Looks like I'm going to die after all...at least I tried my...best...' Then he succumbed to the darkness.
Hanabi struggled to hold her footing as the earth shook beneath her. Here she had been about to inquire why it was so quiet, and then she hears the loudest yell she'd ever heard in her life. Followed by a very tainted wave of malice and bloodlust that any living being would know better then to mess with. She looked up to her father to see him already tensed and standing in front of her, Byakugan activated, the veins around his eyes throbbing and quite visible for all to see. He seemed to search around aimlessly until he seemed to scowl and deactivated the Hyuuga bloodline limit. He looked down to her and told her in a very firm voice…
"Hanabi, go home NOW! Something very dangerous might happen soon." Hizashi ordered firmly before taking off in the direction one could only assume the disturbance had come from.
Hanabi merely pouted, and waited until her father was out of sight. Then she flashed an arrogant smirk. If something big was about to happen, she was going to see for herself, not even her father was going to stop her. As she quickly made to follow Hizashi, she couldn't help feeling like something unexplainable was pulling her toward the direction the disturbance was coming from. Little did she know that disobeying her father was actually going to pay off…just this once anyway…
Jutsu Journal:
Katon: Kagirinai Enkou no Jutsu: Is supposed to mean Fire Release: Eternal Flame. While I've found different ways of typing it, I just decided to go with this. I know its probably wrong, but just ignore it please lol.
AN : Ok, I decided to cut it a few pages short of what I originally planned to be the first chapter, I just wanted to see if anyone was even interested in this. No point writing a story no ones going to read no? Main points of story…Its obvious a little changing of personas has occurred and what not. Neji will now be Hiashi's second born child and Hinata's little brother when he is born. I'll try to keep Hanabi as close to her usual arrogant proud self. I keep finding myself making her too nice and trying to go back and make her a little spunkier, but let's face it, she won't be a badass manga neji skilled kunoichi until her pops dies. This will of course be a major part of the story. It's a shame she doesn't even know she's been branded as a slave yet huh?
Onto the Uchihas, if you can tell what I have in mind for them, kudos. Those worried that Itachi's going to become a pussy nice guy don't worry…he's going to be his cold badass self…just for Konoha this time around. I tried to make Shisui as mentally unstable as I could; I hope I did a good job. I got big plans for this guy. And he's not an OC incase your not up to snuff on Naruto info. He's the guy manga Itachi killed for his Mangenkyou Sharingan. Expect more of him in the future. (Oh and the cute little moment between Itachi and Sasuke was inspired by that video on youtube where sasuke kept calling his name over and over again. Thought it was hillarious.)
First few chapters are going to be before the timeline of the original plot, the main chunk of the story will be with them being 12-13 years old and what not. I hope them being little kids doesn't bore you to tears! P (Check my Profile for additional story info)
Review if you liked, otherwise I'll just scrap this and try something else. I really hope you guys liked it because I type really slowly and this took a few hours lol. And sorry for butchering the Japanese language.
(2nd Edit: Forgot to mention in story: An example of the Roar in the story can be seen if you watch Naruto fight Sasuke in the Valley of the End. Went back and fixed all the obvious mistakes I made. Hope I caught them all. Oh ya, seeing as it seems people do like this story somewhat, expect a new chapter within a few days. Holla!)
(Oh and if you don't know who attacked Naruto by now…Kill Yourself Right Now!)