Temptation

thank you Cookie for being my first reviewer i am sending you the first chapter personally for you to see since i decided to revise the story.

Summmary: from the begining...what if ryuk told one little white lie just to get light/raito to be his? YAOI MALEmisamisa and lots of love for light.

A/N:the person who took out the first volume finally turned it in yesterday. why didn't i write it up yesterday you wonder? i got a tooth pulled, i was nervous the whole time especially when i saw the needle but then everything swirled i they put me to sleep. mom says it only took about 10 minutes for them to pull it out. and now when i see anyone i am going to ask "do you wanna see the tooth?"

A/N 2: for those who saw that temptation was the first i wrote for my thing but now when you look at my profile there is more i will tell you why. when i get an idea i put it up and get it out there least i forget it. and i read and play games awhole lot but never finish. so i am trying to become more dedicated. MY LIBEARY FINALLY GOT YAOI MANGA!

AND: for any and all reviewers be you anonymous or otherwise i don't mind flames really i find them amusing and if you really don't like it quite reading if you have a problem with my spelling or wording you can tell me i probably won't fix it. i make errors like everyone else. and the wordpad on my computer works perfectly (though it still makes small errors) this is my grandmothers computer so any chapter you read that happens to have a problem was written on this one. the schools and mine are fine and fix things but mine does not have internet (i wish it did) and the schools well we got homework practically every class. plus the reason for most of my errors be it speeling or otherwise is that i type so fast while staring at the keyboard that i may hit the worng key or forget to hit a key or the computer is on strike and i am going to fast for it so it gets prissy.

XD to all reviewers thank you i like to know people are reading this.

did i tell you the guy i had my friend ask out for me said no? well i did now. i don't really care but Biz seemed a little upset about it i yet to know the reason why he said no since biz made it sound like he was going to say yes.why do i not care that he said No when i and my family seemed so hyped up about it? becuase i was deadset that he was going to say no from the begging.

disclaimer: why not just write one and be done with it? i do not own. but I do own a tooth.

i am revising the first chapter as of now. the notice will not be bothered with at the moment maybe later but it will be replaced. the third chapter that was a filler will stay and the next chapter('s) that come after this will go after that one. i decided on a better way for the ryuk/raito romance action to take place and for raito/lights transformation into a shinigami to take place.

okay i am going to follow from the begging like looking into the past since i already wrote the first chapter but its on the schools plus i can't remember what i wrote, and i am milking the pain i am n form my tooth for all its worth and seeing how long i can not go to school. raito will be typed Light in this one because i am being lazy and have to pay attention when i type raito.

words in caplocks are the things in the boxes in the manga.

italics are thoughts.

underlined words are from the tv, phone, microphone hearing piece whatever that thing is...computers etc...

bold words are like really stressed words or shinigmi talk. but they won't be bold when talking to another shinigami unless a human is in the conversation.

if it is in italics but got " hello " like this it is just pronounced louder then a thought but a thought nonthingless

if it is italics but lie this " yes you are reading this " the word is drawn out when it is said or emphasized.

if there is a space between the sentences its probably a switched POV or a change in time or place.

i am going to describe what everything looks to me from the manga.

Chapter 1 Boredom

THIRD PERSON POV

REALM OF THE SHINIGAMI

"same old thing, day after day...what a bore." says one blue shinigami who looked like a grinning clown with big yellow googoo eyes. (author is thinking like phil off hercules). the earing that was a long chain with a heart looked almost formidable on his form. a tight blue shirt was sown onto his pale blue shin and blackish blue leather was wrapped around his arms you could not tell wether the feathers came from the shirt or the hand made sleeves but it made a good fashion staement. a belt that had a skull in the center of a cross circle made out of real bone kept the loose pants on his form. hooked to his belt was another cross in the center of a cirlcle. a two more chains linked with skulls that hung diagnol from the first belt that was a bag with a cross on it that was only large enough to hold one or two NoteBooks the other seemed to just hang the oposite way. he had a ring on each finger except (1) pinky and thumb. they were either just a plain small the large band or they had a skull of some design on them.

his body was in a crouched sitting position his long arms practically touching the dead soil on the ground. as he sat there watching the other shinigami gamble away. the sorounding area looked like a destroyed building and large bone like fossils and piles of junk.

THE HUMAN WORLD

"this world is a mess..." one Light Yagami whispered as he stared out the window during class.

REALM OF THE SHINIGAMI (again)

klank. klank.

the sound of animal bones being tossed to the ground sounded out."heh.heh.heh" laughed a mummy like shinigami. "two death-heads. i win again."

"tch!" the other that had the head that looked like the skull of a gazelle snorted obviously a little angered that he had lost again. the two shinigami seemed to be playing some sort of gambling game but who knows how it works.

it's been five days now...

" 'bout time i got going." ryuk said almost to himself as he stood up.

"hm? where you off to, ryuk?" asked the mummy.

"anyplace you go around here, it's all barren anyway. hee. hee." the gazelle skull laughed.

" i dropped my death note." ryuk said with al seriousness.

"whoops! hyuk, hyuk, hyuk! you really screwed up, man!" the mummy roared with laughter obviously finding ryuks loss funny.

"hey, weren't you carrying around a second one behind the old man's back? you sayin' you lost both?" the gazelle asked stupified by ryuks stupidity.

"so, you got any idea where you dropped it? kyak, kyak, kyak." the mummy said trying to be a little more serious but still laughing.

"yeah. the human world." ryuk said lightly already walking away.

"WHAT?!" both shouted turning around where they sat to watch the blue shinigami go.

ryuk made his way down the steep winding stairs to the portal that led to the human world. as he stood on the last step he unfurled the blackish blue wings that hid in the feathers at his shoulders (2)as he passed through the protal a flash of light signaled his disappearance.

THE SINGLE NOTEBOOK, DROPPED INTO THE HUMAN WORLD BY A SHINIGAMI...SETS OFF AN ALL-OUT BATTLE BETWEEN TWO CHOSEN PEOPLE.

THIRD PERSON POV (from lights standing point)

Light Yagami, age 17. the pale dirty blonde haired boy ( 3 ) was still staring out the window in his class bored with the things they tried to teach him but he already knew what they taught.

he saw something fall, what was it? a square like shape but still could be anything. squinting slightly he leaned his head forward as if he peared closer to the glasse it would wave at him. a black note book!!

a notebook? light waited till class had finally ended and walked calmly outside as if there was nothing new, but his mind and body were deadset on the book. outside standing on the school lawn next to the book he looked back to the student body but no one came over to claim it. banding down he picked it up. and flipped it over to see if it had a name on it.

"DEATH NOTE." a notebook of death?

flipping it open he read aloud queitly to himself." 'this is a death god's notebook.' " pfff. he snorted lightly it must be some joke. " "how touse it...' geez, it's all in english. what a pain... 'the human whose name is written in this note shall die.' ha, ha, ha." he laughed silently to himself.

talk about sick. why's everybody into this kind of crap, anyway? like those dumb chain letters that say you'll get cancer if you don't pass them on...

even as he thought this he closed the notebook and put it in his bag.

"i'm home." he called out as he opened the front door to his house.

he sat at his desk with the small lamp light on with his wrist bent so that his face leaned lightly against his hand and he silently read the rules of the deathnote.

"this note will not take effect unless the writer has the person's face in their mind when writing his/her name. therefor, people with the same name will not be affected."

"if the cause of death is written within 40 seconds of writing the person's name, it will happen."

"if the cause of death is not specified, the person will simply die of a heart attack."

"after writing the cause of death, details of the death should be written in the next 6 minutes and 40 seconds."

hmm. so you can let people die peacefully or make them suffer...

"a prank this intricate isn't too bad, i guess..." he said to himself as he got up and went to sit on his bed. laying back he stared at the wall but something nagged at him. he looked over at the book that seemed to just sit on his desk innocently. he looked back up at the cieling thnking aloud, "write their name,and they die...how stupid." he yawned.

FIVE DAYS LATER...

light was walking home with some friends talking lightly and as he opened the gate to his home he waved goodbye. "see ya." they waved goodbye back and continued to walk and talk amongst hemselves.

"i'm home." he siad as he shut the front door. klick. the sound of the lock (4 )sliding back into place.

"light, is that you?" his mom came out form the other room and stood smiling happily at her son with her hands clapsed in front of her.

light looked at her for a minute but then remembered what she must be waiting for. "oh, yeah." he said putting his bag down and digging through it. "here." he said pulling out a piece of paper and handing it to her and smiling softly before heading up the stairs to his room at a sedate pace.

"oh, my! you placed first again- and these practice college entrance exams are nationwide!" his mother excliamed in a suprised happy voice.

"uh-huh." light agreed not really suprised by the grades or his mom's reaction. he had always gotten good grades, been the perfect student/son role model. "well, i'll be studying so don't bother me, okay?" he said lighly going up the stairs one by one.

"okay, dear." his mom said. "oh, light. is there anything you've been wanting? anything at all- just let me know." she said as an after thought watching her son go up the stairs.

"no, mom." he said in a slighly joking tone.

i already got what i want... he thought as he closed his eyes while he opened his door.

"phew..." he sighed. locking his bedroom door and opening his eyes he picked up the romote lying on his the table next to his desk that had his tv on it, and turned on his tv to the news. pushing a key on the key board to wake his computer he pulled out his desk chair and sat down. opening the first drawer he pulled out the notebook.

"...heh. heh, heh..." he started to giggle as he stared at the notebook.

"you seem to like it." a slightly rough but husky voice said from behind him. turning around he could only gape open mouth and fall out of his chair.

"why're you so suprised to see me? i'm ryuk, the shinigami who dropped that notebook. "the way you were acting just now, i can tell you know it isn't just any old notebook ...right?" ryuk asked. he looked upon the humans form. indeed the boy looked at him in open mouthed shock ( 5 ). but he noticed that the boy not only fell out of his chair but his legs were spred wide open. the human probably couldn't tell that he was starting to check him out. he could only tell that he was looking down at him becuase of the way his eyes were set on his face along with his permenant grin. indeed the human who found his notebook was what the human girls called 'prettyboy'. he probably would not amuse him.

"a...shinigami?" light asked in shock he closed his mouth but his jaw dropped again but he closed his eyes and bit his lip slightly. whenhe opened his eyes he set his mouth in a firm line he would not show this thing no...being...god of death, his fear, his suprise, his emotions that seemed to run rampant in his head. "a 'deathgod'..." he said as if he was confirming what he saw and what RYUK said. standing up with the help of the desk chair he looked up at the shinigami. he would have frowned but that would just show an emotion that he had no need for. his irratation at the shinigami being taller than him. he didn't like people being taller then him. he was considered tall for a japanese person ( 6 ). "i'm not suprised to see you, ryuk." he said seriously. honestly he hadn't. ryuk looked at him in suprise the only way he could tell this was that his head had gone back slightly as if in suprise. "... in fact..." he continued standing straight again and looking at ryuk dead on as he said, "i've been waiting for you..."

THIRD PERSON POV (but from ryuks standing point)

his head jerked back slightly in suprise as the humans eyes seemed to blacken he was slightly happy that his skin was blue at the moment and that he wasn't easily embarresed and that the last time he had "mated" with a human was only like twenty years ago or he would be in some serious trouble. as the male human teenager said he had been waiting for him in such a sultry voice he had almost thought it was a female shinigami breeder (7). even though sex and anyhting close to it was forbidden. breeders still existed and tried to tempt others but mostly the breeders mated with the king. ryuk had seen his fair share of breeders and so far lthis human had the voice or had the actions of one...or maybe he was just being human (8).

THIRD PERSON POV (back to lights side and out of ryuks thoughts)

"Really." ryuk stated.

"gee. a personal visit from a shinigami...very kind of you...not that i doubted this was a 'death gods notebook' but... seeing things with my own eyes like this lets me act with greater certianty. plus, there're some things i wanted to ask you..." he said whilst picking up the DeathNote and turning to fully face ryuk opened it to show the shinigami what he had done.

ryuks eyes roved the page that was filled with names. "hee hee... wow, this is amazing. gotta say i'm the one who's suprised." he said, but elaberate dsince the human would not understand. "i've heard of deathnotes getting down to the human world a few times before...but no one's ever done this many in just five days. most people would be too scared." he looked over at the human. the human was still watching him with the same piercing eyes and deadly gaze watching him with such intensity.

"i'm ready for anything ryuk...i used the notebook, knowing it belonged to a shinigami...and now the shinigami's here..." he said with all seriounes leaning back agianst his desk.

"huh?" ryuk said confused slouching his shoulders a bit. "what's that? some fantasy you humans came up with? i'm not going to do anything to you the moment a death note lands in the human world, it belongs to the human world. so it's yours now." he said pontingat light showing one long finger and a black claw like fingernail.

"mine..." light whispered.

"you don't want it, give it to another human. when you do, i'll just have to erase all your deathnote memories. oh, and... " ryuk jumped out the window extending his wings causing light to start with suprise expecting to hear screams as ryuk sat on a telephone pole. but ryuk just continued as he looked down around him at the people walking on the sidewalk.

"ha ha ha! no way." a school girl giggled. "i know so," continued her friend.

"since you've used what was My notebook, you're the only one who can see me. nobody else can hear me either, of course. the deathnote...is the bond between light the humanand ryuk the shinigami."

"the bond..." light said, "so there really is no price to pay for using the deathnote?"

"well, not exactly...but there is the terror and torment that only humans who've used it will expirence..." light looked up at him his eyes widening slightly. "and...i could..." ryuk knew he was going out on a limb with this lie, light could give up ownership...but if he didn't ryuk grinned though you couldn't tell since he was always grinning. " take you as my mate... and when you die...i'll e the one writing your name down, but...don't think that any human who's used the deathnote can go to heaven or to hell. that's all." by the time he was done explianing he almost had light backed up tohis dresser. ryuk waited for his reaction. light continued to look at him. lights lips were parted as he looked at him and his eyes were wide with suprise but then he grinned and started giggled slightly as if to lighten the suddenly tense atmosphere. "you'll find out about that after you die." ryuk laughed.

"o..okay, one more question." light said. he wanted the deathnote but he stuttered because of the mate business. trying to stand straighter he put one finger up. "why did you choose me?"

"hunh? hyuk hyuk! don't flatter yourself.all i did was drop the notebook, that's all. you thought i chose you? 'cuz you're so smart or something?" ryuk laughed. sure he could believe the niavete of the human, it happened all the time even when they weren't involved. "it just happened to land somewhere around here...and you just happened to pick it up.that's why i wrote instructions in english- it's the most popular language in your world."

"then why did you drop it?!" light acused. if he wasn't chosen then why? why?! "don't tell me it was by mistake, after you went and wrote all those instructions."

"why did i drop it...?" ryuk said as if to himself. he shrugged, " because i was bored, that's why." light looked at him in stunned disbelief. ryuk pointed at him trying to get a point across as he explained. "it might be a weird thing for a shinigami to say, but...i just didn't feel like i was really alive...in actual fact, shinigami these days don't have a lot to do. all they do is nap, or gamble. if they see you scribbling humans' name into your death note they say, 'what're you working so hard for?' and laugh at you. i'm in the shinigami realm, so killing people in the human world isn't any fun. but if i write the names of shinigami into the book, they don't die. it's more fun to be here, is how i figured it out." ryuk finished. light looked at him in slight contimplation, considering what he said. ryuk flipped the notebook open again. "gotta say, though, you really wrote a lot of names in here."

"i was..." the shinigami ryuk looked up at him from the book he wa still reading trying to count how many people the human light had killed. "bored,too..." ryuk started grinning wider again. "of course, i didn't believe it at first...but the notebook has a power...that makes you want to try using it, at least once."

FLASHBACK FIVE DAYS AGO...

"a prank this intricate isn't too bad, i guess..." he said to himself as he got up and went to sit on his bed. laying back he stared at the wall but something nagged at him. he looked over at the book that seemed to just sit on his desk innocently. he looked back up at the cieling thnking aloud, "write their name,and they die...how stupid." he yawned. he sat up on his elbows looking back over at the black notebook. it stared back innocently enough almost taunting him. getting up slowly he went back to his desk and sat down opening the book. pulling out a mechanical pencil and puting it to the page when a thought hit him.

"wait a minute.if someone actually dies, would that make me a murderer?...i guess it would have to be...someone it's okay to kill...who has no relation to me at all...and there has to be a way to find out right away if they die..." he muttered.

hey, that's right...geez, i'm getting to o serious about this... he thought as he clicked a button on the remote to turn on his tv to channel 6 News (A/N: or is that news at 6?)

the man who indiscriminately killed and wounded six people yesterday in shinjuku is still barricaded inside this nurserey school, with eight hostages, including children. the metropolitan police have determined the man's identity. he is Kurou Otoharada, 42 years old and unemployed. two days ago, Otoharada...

looking closely at the face he wrote the mans name down. he waited til his clock read 18:22 in minutes till the next hour (A/N: this is the only thing i could think it could be when i read the manga) and started his count down. "forty seconds, and it's a heart attack...that's forty seconds..."

nothing. i knew it. he said looking away from both the clock and tv about to put the notebook back up.

What's this...?! the hostages are coming out! light's neck craned back to the tv to see what he thought couldn't be possible his eyes widening fractionally as he listened in suprise. they all seem to be all right. and now police are going in! will they be able to arrest Otoharada?! blah blah ...they're...coming back out! blah blah... but no sign of their captor just yet. what exactly is going on? This just in!! the captor is inside the nursery school, and he is dead!! it appears Otoharada is dead!!

"dead?!" light exclaimed in disbelief.

the police are emphasizing that they did NOT shoot him. could that mean he commited suicide? well, the hostages are apparently saying he suddenly collasped...

a heart attack...

" it...could just be a coincidence. theres only one way to find out..."

"light!" called his mother.opening his door he looked downsatirs as his mothers head popped into view. "it's 6:25 already. you have prep courses today." his mom explianed smiling.

"uh, yeah. i was just getting ready to go." he said turing back to his room. "somebody..." he whispered to himself. "it would be okay to kill...no,who out to ought to die."

Until next time...

( 1 )i think this is right i am not sure but i know there are rings on each hand and more than one

( 2 ) i do not know if this is true either it probably ain't but it will have a purpose later.

( 3 ) what are his colors exactly?

( 4 ) what is that thing a bolt or somethig my brain has gone dead trying to think of what it is

( 5 )No pun intended

( 6 ) i do not mean to be a hypocrite (sp?) but i do veiw light/raito as taller than average or whatever. how tall is he? oh and this is a big fat hinting teaser that light does not like to be second/bottom to nothing cracks into fits of giggles because the author just gave an awaiting lemon sneak peek but the action will start soon i think i put the wait on this off for long enough.

(7) this is not an insult to any female out there who has children or whatever it is becuase i am a girl to too young to have kids technically but it is stated as a rule that shinigami can't have relationships so in my mind it is put under the catigorie no offspring and in the legend or what ever shinigami are like haedes or whatever gods children like the titans from hercules. its put as a rule i think becuase the king/ruler of the shinigami doesn't want anyone powerful or whatever more people to deal with it but his own. plus it is siad in the book that they were rotting away and dieing off because they kept forgetting to write names and all that and i was like what if there were only a select few that could reproduce. yes this will have a point later. i will tell you it right now so i don't forget and you have something to look forward to and to keep you reading this fic. it is not light/raito who is going to mpreg on you it is ryuk!

(8) its true humans (myself includedfeels strange talking like this) act like humans and not themselves all the time. its what you call those nasty habits and stuff that you just do regularly or come natrualy to you that you just don't notice until someone points it out to you or you decide to act stupid.

A/N: for those of you who don't understand completely how light/raito could be a shinigami heres how i see it. in BLEACH ichigo could have become a soul-reaper with out rukia's help since he was his fathers(his father for those of you who don't know and read bleach SPOILER was a shinigami captian and is not a total idoit like he acts) son. and i was thinking well what if somewhere in the past a shinigami was sealed in a human form or took a human form becuase it fell for a human and light is just the powers abillity whatever you want to say that are slowly being unsealed and released. if you hgave a question, ask me i will try to answer i like to talk/type what is on my mind.