This is the edited chapter one. I kinda told myself to keep the writing style, but correct the grammar. At least I can see my improvement whenever I read this again from the start, the writing style that is. NOTE: I only edited the grammar and punctuations. That's all.
I really can't believe that I improved a lot as the story progressed, especially in grammar. But I still have a lot more stuffs to work on.
"Damn fangirls." a girl named Fujiwara Mayumi stated, sitting on her seat, after she almost got mobbed on by screaming fangirls who were chasing after some tennis guy.
Mayumi was just an ordinary girl who hated, well, not really hate but didn't really care about popular guys or even ordinary boys that much…
"Why am I not enrolled in the same school as Eiji?" Mayumi complained, placing her head on the desk in front of her.
"Konnichiwa, Mayumi-san." She heard a masculine voice from her side.
She smirked. "What's good in the afternoon," she started as she leisurely looked up at the person who just greeted her. "…Saeki-san?"
"Looks like you had a bad day." he chuckled, as he sat on his own chair which was just beside the lass'.
"Not really. My day started great not until I almost got stepped on by a battalion of lowlives which other people called fangirls. I'm quite fine, thank you." she said sarcastically. "Wait a sec. Why are you here? Don't you have any practice or something?" Mayumi asked.
"It's free practice. It's okay for Oji if we won't train. You?" Saeki said.
"Day off."
"Day off?" he repeated what she said, didn't quite get what she meant.
"Don't ask… I'm going to Seigaku, coming?" she asked indifferently.
"Are you inviting me?"
"Well, if you don't-"
"No, I'll go."
"Okay then."
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SEIGAKU…
"Game and match. Winner Kikumaru-Oishi pair." the umpire concluded.
"HURRAY!!! WE WON!!!" the red-haired acrobat shouted in joy, as he jumped on his partner's back.
"Congratulations..." a feminine voice was heard and everyone in the court turned to where the voice came from.
"MAYUMI-CHAAAN!!!" the red-head hugged his bestfriend oh so tight once he got close to her.
"I-CAN'T-BREATHE" Mayumi said while struggling for air and finally Eiji let her go.
"Aheheh… Sorry." and a knuckle met his empty head.
"Hey! That hurts… What was that for?" Eiji pouted.
AS THEY KEPT ON TALKING…
"Konnichiwa, Saeki." the tensai of Seigaku greeted his childhood friend.
"Konnichiwa, Fuji."
"So, is she the girl?" Saeki nodded.
"She's too cute… for you, that is." he joked.
"Yea-, Hey!" Fuji smiled.
"Have you confessed?"
"Are you crazy? She'll kill me!"
"Kissed her?"
"That's just the simplest way in committing suicide." Fuji chuckled.
"That's good."
"You're not really helping."
"I know." The tensai said, still had his sadistic smile.
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"ACHOOOOO!" Mayumi sneezed.
"You alright?" Eiji asked. Mayumi nodded in response.
"You better drink my new vegetable juice this can make you feel better." Inui stated after he popped out of nowhere.
"No thanks, I'm fine." Inui shrugged and walked on towards the other members of the team.
"Do you have any plans on-?" Mayumi didn't let Eiji finished his sentence.
"Hell no. It's very impossible for him to like a girl like me."
"Why shouldn't he? You're cute-"
"Shut it."
"Sporty, talented, simple, not to mention… smart."
"And boyish" she thought to herself… "Of course you'd say those things you're my best for Pete's sake."
"No. Really."
"Just shut it."
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NEXT DAY at ROKKAKU CHU
The teachers gave their class a free period, so it's also expected that the classrooms will be almost empty or maybe empty... in Mayumi's class...
Mayumi was sleeping on her seat while her seatmate, Saeki, was reading a book, and the others were nowhere to be found in the room. They were the only ones left.
"She looks very peaceful." he told himself then he said something to Mayumi in a low voice.
"Mayumi-san, I really really like you." he blushed while looking at the girl in slumber.
"I did it... well, sorta." he thought. He wasn't really sure if he would be happy or not.
The door slid open.
"Saeki-san, come here!" Kentarou told him childishly.
Saeki stood up "Hai, Kentarou." and went out of the door.
Mayumi's eyes opened..."Did I just hear the impossible or was that a dream?"
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Author: Heyaaa, guys! This story is supposed to be oneshot... but what the heck my friends told to add more. So I cut it into some chapters. So please keep on reading and don't forget to review...