I have recently come to the conclusion to republish my story and try to make it better. I feel over the past few years I have gained some knowledge on writing and I hope it shows. What I am asking from the readers is for ideas. I would like for any readers to send any ideas, whether good or bad, to me about how to improve the story. These would be greatly appreciated. Also I am looking for a beta for the redone story. I hope the new version comes out better.

Thank you,

Mandy