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Disclaimer: I don't own Deathnote! I also don't own Dani California or Ben 10.

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I love crotch hits but I was trying to keep this story as serious as possible.

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"There is an eighty percent chance that Akira is Kira," Near had said. "She wants us to suffer before killing us, so our only hope for survival is to prove that she is Kira and apprehend her before she writes our names in the Deathnote. That's assuming she hasn't already."

Matsuda, of course, was pissed. "She's not Kira," he screamed at Near.

Near soon came to regret his decision to meet the team face to face. Matsuda picked him up by the collar of his shirt and slammed his fist into Near's cheek.

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That scene made it into the story, but I almost followed up with.

Near angrily stood up and shouted, "Do you realize the chances of Akira being Kira are close to one-hundred percent? Watkin Hash was obviously killed by Kira!" The young albino angrily thrust his foot into Matsuda's crotch, causing the man to fall to the floor.

Matsuda rolled around in agony, clutching his crotch in pain.

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In the end I decided to have a little fun by having him pee his pants though.

Other lines I left out included Matsuda's complaint about him dieing a virgin, but I thought it was unnecessary to put that in.

I also considered having Matsuda live until the end, because I like him. But I decided against it.

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As you know, I considered killing off Misa, but didn't.

This is how her Death would have played out.

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Ryuk has just killed Near and he knows he will soon be executed.

Ryuk: So you've actually managed to kill me. Now what?

Akira: I'm writing my own name in the Death Note, so that I can finally be with Light.

Ryuk: That won't work you know…

Akira: light told me what you said about there being no Heaven or Hell. But I think you're wrong. I believe there is a Heaven, and Light is waiting for me there.

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I kept most of it the same except I took out the part about Misa/Akira killing herself.

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My original plan was for Sayu to get the Death Note first, and then enlist the aid of Misa, but I ditched that idea. I even planned to remove Sayu from the story entirely until Emerald Skies suggested I put her in.

At another stage of the story, Akira's roommate Haruka was to be the second Kira.

Sadly, the second Kira didn't show up as much as I had hoped.

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Lastly this poem

You Messed with the Wrong Person

When You Messed with Him

Now I've got You in my Grasp

To Bend You to my Whim

You Cannot Escape

The Fate I Wrote for you

I've Declared Your Life Over

There is Nothing You can do

Now Beg on Your Knees

Get Down and Plead

Maybe I'll Spare You

Maybe I'll Make You Bleed

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It was originally supposed to go to the tune of Dani California, but I got stuck at…

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You Messed with the Wrong Person

When You Messed with Him

Now I've got You in my Grasp

To Bend You to my Whim

Light Yagami

Rest in Peace

Something, Something

Something Release

Light Yagami

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Now for a note about upcoming stories,

This took a lot of effort and it will be awhile before I write another serious story.

I still have to write The Village Hidden in the Sky for Naruto.

My next Death Note story will likely be a Light/L/Light YAOI crackfic.

Anime-StarWars-fan-zach

If I remember your profile correctly you dislike YAOI, so I just wanted to let you know ahead of time so you don't read it by mistake.

Other shows I'm planning to write stories for.

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InuYasha

An InuKag story.

Ben 10

Ben/Gwen comedy.

So what if they're cousins. Everyone knows that when you make a TV show people will want couples so whoever created this show knew what they were getting into when they made the male and female leads cousins. I swear, they must want us to ship Ben/Gwen!

Xiaolin Showdown

A lot of Xiaolin Showdown ideas are living in my head, but it will be a while before I get there.

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Well, that's all I have to say.

See you all later!