Okay dokie here is the last part of my story; well it's not actually part of the story but does have a few parts that link to the story. I've done those that you requested (note: if you e-mailed me it I won't have received it do to my e-mails not working so if you did that'll be the reason it's not included) and I included one or two of my own. This chapter is quite long but hopefully you'll enjoy the extra's.
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Okay firstly I need to thank all of you for reading my story, so just bare that in mind I'm grateful towards all of you. Also for a selection of you it may be worthwhile reading all the thank-you's as I may have included you more than once...
Before I start with names I want to thank everyone who favourited and alerted on my story. I would include your names but I unfortunately don't know who you are due to my e-mailing not working. Thank you though!
First off I want to thank the people who read my story from near the very beginning, they are: Saba Butt (Also known now as Ichijiku), gingibread101, RandomnessGoddess, ILoveDeepBlue95, renea142, NekoxNicole, Tomoyo Kinomoto and xMew Ichigox. Thank you for reading it from when I first started it and reviewing like-wise!
Next I want to thank the one person who reviewed the most, Saba Butt, thank you for reviewing so much and being so kind! And also NekoxNicole and Tomoyo Kinomoto who reviewed a lot. Also Tomoyo when reviewing you were almost always the first on that chapter, well done I guess.
I'd also like to thank those of you who gave me small tips or advice during the story. Those people are, renea142, Tomoyo Kinomoto and Libby the Great. (Sorry if I missed any of you off who also helped me)
And now I just want to thank everyone overall because I want to! I've also done it in order of when you reviewed. A great thanks to... ILoveDeepBlue95, RandomnessGoddess, gingibread101, Saba Butt, Tomoyo Kinomoto, NekoxNicole, renea142, xMew Ichigox, IchigoMashimaro, XxXChiharu-Chan-1000-SpringXxX, Safaia Bara, Libby The Great, Michaiah, Ana-Ookami-Chan andfinally usahiki1234. Thanks so much guys!
And lastly I'd like to thank RandomnessGoddess for believing with me than tanks can fly like I do! Yeah tanks! (Sorry, I just had to include that!)
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Now for requests, first off Saba Butt requested something to do with Pinchu's death however I'll leave than till the end for reasons you'll know when you read it. :).
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The following are for Libby The Great who requested bloopers and Pinchu totally pissing off Kisshu.
Bloopers: (I tried to not do too many but even so there is still quite a few.)
Alien Clones, Chapter 1, Action!
"Pinchu?" Ichigo murmured surprised it was so similar to Kisshu's name.
"Yes and I'm delighted to meet you Ichigo Momomiya." he said taking her hand and raising it up. Then to Ichigo's surprise he kissed her hand.
"W...w... what are you—"
Pinchu cut her off by kissing her on the lips and pressing her against the wall.
"Mmph!" Ichigo cried, her arms wafting all around.
"Oi! Get off my kitten!" Kisshu shouted jumping in to the alley.
Pinchu pulled away and looked at Kisshu, "What did I do?"
"Agh! Someone tell him to stop messing the script!" Ichigo wailed.
Alien Clones, Chapter 2, Action!
"What are you doing here?" Mint asked.
The aliens came to the ground and walked towards them, "We're not here to fight you." Pai said.
"Then what are you here for?" Zakuro asked.
The aliens exchanged glances.
"To take over the make-up factories!" Taruto shouted jumping up on the spot.
Kisshu nodded and glared at them, "And you won't stop us!"
Pinchu flicked his hair behind him, "Looks like this don't come naturally you know!"
The mews stood there and sweatdropped and Lettuce stared sadly at Pai.
"What's the matter Lettuce?" Ichigo asked.
"How can I like someone who isn't gorgeous naturally! He's a liar!" she cried, "I mean look at my natural self." she said, Lettuce then released her hair from her plaits, took her glasses off and also loosened her waitress outfit so her breasts appeared A LOT larger.
"Wow!" Pudding cried.
"She's even more beautiful thank Zakuro!" Mint gasped.
"Oi! What about us! We're trying to control make-up!" Kisshu whined jumping up and down with Pai and Tart and having a tantrum.
Alien Clones, Chapter 3, Action!
A gust of wind blew across the field which the aliens and clones had first battled on.
"You guys! Untie me already!" Ichigo shouted who was still tied to the tree.
Alien Clones, Chapter 6, Action!
As Ichigo changed her top she suddenly heard something behind her.
"Hello kitten!"
Ichigo cringed at the voice and turned her head to see Kisshu smiling, she felt her face going bright red considering she didn't have a top on and only a bra.
"Why you pervert!" she cried clenching her fists, grabbing her shoes from the floor she turned around and was about to throw them but hesitated.
"Ichigo..." Kisshu murmured, "You're meant to throw them at me."
Ichigo stood still staring at him and shook her head, "No I just can't hurt you!" she cried leaping forward into Kisshu's arms.
Kisshu shrugged, "Oh well, we can do the scene later." he said shutting the changing room door where the camera were.
"What? Oi!" Ryou shouted banging on the door, "What are you doing in there!"
Alien Clones, Chapter 6, Action!
As Ichigo changed her top she suddenly heard something behind her.
"Hello kitten!"
Ichigo cringed at the voice and turned her head to see Kisshu smiling, she felt her face going bright red considering she didn't have a top on and only a bra.
"Why you pervert!" she cried clenching her fists, grabbing her shoes from the floor she turned around and threw them at Kisshu.
"Ow!" he cried.
Ichigo ran forward and grabbing her bag began to beat the crap out of him as Kisshu merely shouted in between hits, "Someone... hitstop... hit her!"
Pai and Tart quickly teleported in.
"Ichigo you're going to far, didn't you read the script?" Pai asked.
Ichigo looked at Pai, "Huh? Oh sorry, did I go too far?"
They all turned their attention back to Kisshu who was laying lifeless on the floor.
"Oops..." Ichigo murmurred.
Pai sighed, "Bring in the double!"
Alien Clones, Chapter 7, Action!
Ichigo stared in horror as he closed his eyes and leant forward, she tried to move but couldn't.
Just as he was inches away however...
"Ribbon
Mint Arrow!"
Pinchu's eyes flew open at the voice and he
quickly jumped out the way, however he took Ichigo in his arms with
him.
Ichigo turned her head slowly in Pinchu's arms to see all the mews, "Mint..." she murmured.
"Let Ichigo go!" Pudding cried.
Ichigo shot an angry glare and squirmed in Pinchu's arms, "You idiots! Why did you have to come!"
"Huh?" Lettuce asked.
Ichigo sighed and looked at Pinchu, "Teleport us somewhere else so we can continue."
Pinchu stared at her, "What? Eh? What's happening! This wasn't in the script!"
"Ichigo! How dare you cheat on me!" Kisshu shouted teleporting into the set.
"Well you're the one who was eyeing up Mint!" Ichigo shouted back.
"What!" Mint shouted.
"Why you..." Caruto began teleporting in, "I'm gonna kill you Kisshu!"
Alien Clones, Chapter 8, Action!
"Thank-you..." Lettuce murmured staring at Pai.
Pai looked to the side, "I only did it because it would be troublesome if you died..." he replied.
Lettuce smiled and kissed Pai on the cheek and blushed, "Even so... thanks."
Pai looked back and then smirked, "Finally!"
"Huh?" Lettuce asked as he pulled her forward, her eyes widened like saucers as he planted his lips on her's.
"Mmph!" she cried.
"Oi!" Ryou shouted running into the scene and pulling Lettuce away, "What are you doing!"
Pai looked at him, "She kissed me, I think it's obvious she likes me."
"This isn't real! Just follow the god damn script!"
"Make me!" Pai said glaring at him.
"Erm guys..." Lettuce said glancing at the two glaring at one another.
"Can we please get back to the scene, it's exhausting for me!" Ichigo shouted from above.
"What! You're in my arms! How can you be exhausted!" Pinchu shouted.
"Hmph!" Ichigo replied turning her head.
Alien Clones, Chapter 14, Action!
"Okay Ichigo you asked for this!" Mint shouted getting her weapon as Ichigo merely floated above the ground in the centre of all of it with no expression.
Mint took a step forward, "Ichigo..."
Everyone watched with anticipation at what she would do, Ichigo stared at her through emotionless eyes.
"Ichigo... strawberries are stupid disgusting fruits!" Mint shouted, (Note: This is taken from the brat's guide to maddening and is no.35 which was done by MewCuxie12, that guide sure does come in handy!)
"Oh... my... god!" Caruto gasped.
"On no she didn't!" Gai said waving his hand in front of him, (Maybe we should pronounce his name 'gay' and maybe someone should tell Zakuro...)
"Uh oh..." Pudding said.
Ichigo clenched her fists and stared at Mint, "I'm gonna kill you!" she shouted diving forward.
"Agh!" Mint shouted running out the way and trying to escape from Ichigo.
"At least Ichigo is back to her normal self." Lettuce murmured.
Ryou suddenly came through a door which suddenly appeared in the room, "Guys can we please get this scene right, I'm late for my waxing!"
Alien Clones, Chapter 17, Action!
Ryou and Keiichiro watched the scene before them.
"Somehow I think the names got mixed up in the script." Ryou stated.
Keiichiro nodded, "I agree."
"There has to be some mistake!" Ichigo shouted trying to escape from Pai who was attempting to kiss her, "Even Kish is better than this!"
"Oh you think so?" Mint cried a way off sarcastically, "Get off me!" Mint screeched, "Now or I—mmph!" she cried as Kisshu forcefully kissed her.
She then paused and put her hands around Kisshu's neck, He's not a bad kisser...
"Agh! Someone help me!" Lettuce cried as Caruto held her from the back.
"Foxy..." he said with a smirk.
"How did this happen?" Zakuro murmured as Taruto hugged her burying his face in her chest or breasts should I say...
"Much softer than Puddings..." he murmurred dreamily.
Zakuro sighed.
"Waahhh! I don't like this!" Pudding cried standing next to Gai.
"Neither do I. There's no way on earth I'm kissing you." Gai stated folding his arms. Anyway you would have thought from the previous blooper people would have guessed I don't go for girls in real life... tsch!
"Erm Ryou..." Keiichiro said looking at the script, "Look at this."
Ryou took the script and his eyes widened, "No way! There's no way you and I are kissing!"
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Pinchu v. Kisshu (Note: These idea's have been taken from Brats Guide to Maddening and I give all credit for the idea's to the people who came up with them!)
Kisshu who was stood in a room gazing at a picture of Ichigo he took whilst hidden in the bushes was unaware of Pinchu walking in.
"Hey Kish!" he shouted.
Kisshu turned around just as Pinchu reached him, Pinchu then stated casually, "You are a girly man!"
Kisshu's eyes widened and he showed his teeth, "What did you say!"
Pinchu smiled, That guide sure is handy... that was No.2, maybe I should try No.7... "Only joking!" he cried however his face then became grave, "Kisshu I've got sad news about Ichigo..."
Kisshu's eyes widened in fright, "What happened to her?"
"She's gone to America with Ryou and Masaya." he said sadly, "I'm sorry..."
"What!" Kisshu shouted nearly making Pinch deaf, "I have to go get her!"
"Wait I was only kidding!" Pinch said laughing.
Kisshu glared at him and brought out his dragon swords, "Prepare to die!"
Pinchu put his hands up, "Wait!"
Kisshu continued to stare threateningly, "What?"
Pinchu suddenly brought out a fire extinguisher, where from I have no idea, and suddenly blasted Kisshu with it, "There!" (No. 9)
Kisshu was now red in the face with anger and raised his swords, "That's it, say your prayers!"
Pinchu looked at the dragon swords, "Dragon swords? Don't you know that M-16 are the rage now, those swords are so last season!" (No. 12)
Kisshu growled and slashed at him however Pinchu quickly teleported and appeared a way behind him, Kish turned around ready to charge.
"Don't I have any last words?" Pinch said putting on a puppy look.
Kisshu sighed and lowered his swords, "Fine just hurry..."
No.19 now, he thought. Pinchu stared sadly, "I've just found out that... no it's too horrible!" he cried.
"Tell me!" Kish shouted now very angry.
"Very well..." Pinchu sighed, looking up he said, "I just found out that Ichigo... and Pai... they're dating!" he cried.
Kisshu clenches his fists and his eyes grew like saucers, "W-what?"
Pinchu nodded, "I'm afraid it's true, I saw them kissing together..."
Kisshu showed his fangs, "Oh Pai?" he cried turning around, "Let me have a talk with you!" he shouted before teleporting off.
Pinchu brought out the brats guide to maddening and turned to the page for Kisshu, "Let's see... after trying to kill Pai you'll have two aliens on your back... better get running..." he said teleporting away, "At least it was worth it..."
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Okay Saba Butt you requested a scene dedicated to Pinchu and after much thought I've decided that I will do a sequel! I'll post the story as soon as I have time, school ends soon anyway so I'll be able to write more then. Then again... I do have summer school . So there you have it, a sequel will be coming soon and you "may" expect something of Pinchu in it. That's all I have to say on that matter for now...
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This is for Tomoyo Kinomoto who requested the story of Masaya and his girl, here it is:
Masaya sighed as he stared through his hotel window, right now he was in America and it had been around over a year since he had left Japan. He still thought of Ichigo often and every moment he spent here the more worried he was that he would never be able to return.
What upset him even more was that because he moved from hotel to hotel with all his kendo matches he had lost his mobile which had Ichigo's number on it. Unfortunately he was unable to remember it and could only hope she would ring him but she never did...
"Dear..."
Masaya turned to see his mother in the doorway of his room, "Yes?" he asked.
"We're going to a party tonight to celebrate your recent kendo victory, get ready please." she stated.
Masaya nodded, "Okay."
Turning around he took one last look out the window, Might as well enjoy myself...
Later that night Masaya entered the huge room in which the party was being held, chandeliers hung from the ceiling and tables were laid along the walls and piled with food. Since Masaya had come to America he had become quiet well known with his kendo skills and so a few people looked at him as he entered.
He was currently wearing a black suit and white shirt, walking in he was greeted by many people. Looking around he noticed his parents talking to two other people who he could only guess were very rich considering their clothing's.
As he admired a painting which was one of many that were on the walls a voice suddenly spoke, "Hello?"
Masaya turned to see a girl around the same age as him; she was wearing a long blue gown with silver thread embroided into patterns along the edges. Her dress draped across the floor and around her waist was a piece of silver ribbon that was tied into a ribbon at the back and showed her slim figure. Her dress had no sleeves but she was wearing some silky blue gloves that matched her dress on both her hands. Her eyes were a shimmering blue and reflected the light, her lips were as red as cherries and her hair was a chocolate brown and came down to her waist. In all she stood out quite a lot from the other girls.
"Hi." he greeted politely, "May I help you?"
"Tell me are you Masaya Aoyama, the famous kendo player?" she asked.
Masaya smiled and nodded, "Yes."
The girl's eyes lit up, "I'm Tenshi, (means Angel in Japanese) nice to meet you." she said bowing slightly, "I just thought it right I should meet you."
"Why's that?" Masaya asked, slightly confused.
"My parents have just been speaking with yours." she explained, "And as of tonight you and I are engaged."
Masaya's eyes widened, "Engaged?"
The next night Masaya sat in his hotel room staring at the floor, he was engaged? How could that be? His thoughts drifted to Ichigo and he felt guilty, apparently Tenshi was daughter of some millionaire's and wished to marry him and even more surprisingly his parents had agreed!
Many thoughts were whizzing through his mind, as much as he disliked the thought his parents had already agreed and he didn't want to upset Tenshi as she did seem rather sweet.
Suddenly something caught his eye; walking over to a jacket he didn't wear usually he noticed a bump in the bottom of it within the jacket itself. Feeling it he then realised it to be his mobile! Putting his hand into his pocket he found a hole and guessed his mobile must have fell through it, going through the hole he fumbled around till he found it, by now the battery had died but after a while he found his charger and plugged it in.
Five minutes later he turned it on and scrolled down his contacts till he found one named, 'Ichigo.' Selecting it he put it to his ear till someone answered, although it was very late here in Japan it would be the afternoon.
"Hello?" answered a voice.
"Hi Ichigo." he replied.
"Masaya!" Ichigo cried into the phone.
Masaya smiled, yep she was the same old Ichigo... Suddenly he heard some talking in the background, listening closely he could swear they sounded familiar but who--
"What are you doing calling?" Ichigo whispered, Masaya was confused as to why she was whispering but then realised she didn't want who ever was with her to know it was him, this made him feel slightly upset.
"Well first off I'm sorry I haven't called you." Masaya replied, he had to tell her the truth... there was no way he'd get out of this and if the person in the background was indeed her boyfriend then at least Ichigo wouldn't be upset.
"It's been over a year." she stated.
"Yeah... the job turned out to be much more complicated." Masaya answered, in truth it had been as he hadn't ever expected to remain in Japan this long!
"Erm Masaya..." Ichigo began, "I'm thrilled you rang but well... I'm kinda with someone else."
Masaya couldn't help but feel disheartened, his suspicions were correct. But on the bright side at least she wouldn't be upset he wasn't going to go back to her, he himself wasn't as upset now considering it had been a year. Infact he didn't really feel very upset now that he knew Ichigo wouldn't be.
"That's alright... I actually thought I should just ring you to say I'm living in America permanently." he replied, "Also my parents have got me in this arranged marriage." he explained not seeing any harm in telling her the truth.
After saying that both of them said goodbye and then hung up, suddenly there was a knock at the door.
"Come in." Masaya said.
The door opened to reveal Tenshi who stepped in, she was wearing a knee-lengthed red dressed and red ribbons in her hair, "Hello Masaya, I was just wondering if you were okay with this arranged marriage. As much as I'm okay with it I wouldn't want to go ahead knowing you were unhappy."
Masaya stared at her surprised by her question, in the end he smiled and nodded, "I'm fine with it."
Tenshi let out a sigh of relief, "Thank goodness. And I promise I won't rush things, I'll even let you decide the date of the wedding! And before then I'll let you know everything about me..." she cried.
Masaya thought it quite likable how she was trying her best to make him like her, maybe this would work... As she continued to talk he stood up and went over to her.
"..and I promise I'll be..." she trailed off as he put his hands on both her shoulders.
"Don't worry it'll be fine." he said reassuringly, leaning forward he kissed her gently on the forehead and then pulled her into an embrace, if Ichigo was able to move on he would aswell. After all... Tenshi was rather beautiful.
Tenshi's cheeks reddened as he held her close but a moment later she put her arms around him and buried her head into his chest, "Masaya..." she murmurred.
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Yep and so that's the story of Masaya and his girl called Tenshi . I actually find myself liking that couple now lol. Anyway that's all for this story now, please don't send any more requests as I won't be putting any more chapters up. Hope you enjoyed the extra's! Thank you and good night!