The Fate of Downward Spiral

Hey guys. Okay I'll skip the small talk and get straight to the point. I'm seriously having doubts about continuing this story. I was going to post another chapter tomorrow but when I reread the last three chapters I literally cringed. The dialogue and the flow of the scenes were choppy and downright horrible. There's too much description and not enough depth or explanation of certain things. I was thinking of putting this on hiatus and then rewriting the whole story. You know, start from scratch. Or I can write chapter four and see if I can salvage the story and plot. I can post it and see if it's good or not by judging your reactions to it.

Please leave a review saying if you want me to or not. I won't discontinue this story but it might take a while to rewrite. Sorry to those few people who actually read and liked Downward Spiral. I love you xD

Once again I would love some feedback :D

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