Hello
friends
This is my first chapter of my FF and I hope you
enjoy it.
Well is just a prologue ne
I hope you like
it
I would be glad if you write me your opinion.
As you
know, I'm from Germany.
Therefore, I hope I have my story well
translated into English.
To Legend:
Monologue
"Verbatim speech"
"Obelisk
Blue"
A properly beautiful, cold day on the island in the Duel Academy. The day before, it had snowed again after several years, so you could probably hope to "White Christmas" this year.
Actually,
you would think, that at least a few lucky students would play
outside in the snow, but thought wrong. The students were in fact too
busy with something better.
Today was the last test this year and
of course everyone was curious as to how well starting the test.
The audit
was a dorm-Swich duel.
A small boy with glasses and turquoise
colored hair was just off. His opponent had only 500 life points, he
himself had 1500.
He drew a card and viewed it with joy from the
inside, outside you could not tell of all, however.
He had considered (Submarineroid). With this card, he could start a direct attack and the duel would be over. He looked at the field a little more accurate, then he discovered something:
His opponent had a hidden dangerous card (card case) on the field and thought:
Now I have the dwarf. If he now plays a
monster, it will be deducted 500 life points for every monster in his
cemetery.
As he has his six monster on his cemetery, the duel
should be over soon
However, the little boy named Syrus Truesdales had already thought that something lurked in him because his opponent had made a mistake. Strictly there were even two mistakes.
First, he had quite underestimated him, which would be fatal to his opponent, now.
And then his opponent had not thought that he also had two cards face down on the field.
The first card was (Severe Storm) and the second was (thwart attack). For emergencies, he had still (Steamroid) in his hand. With which, he could attack and destroy the monster in defence position of his opponent
Then he
had a withdrew grin on his face, his opponent was a little confused.
Then the little one played his face down card.
"I play
my face down card...( Heavy storm).
With this card, I can
send all your hidden magic and trap cards to the cemetery "
His
opponent was rigidly against terror, but firmly believed that his
monster in defence position would protect him, but he thought wrong.
The audience was a loud murmur.
Syrus played even further,
namely. "I'm playing (Submarineroid) in attack mode." His
opponent was easing up in the face.
What can be doing a monster with 800 points attack my (Pirates of the dragon)! He has 1800 defence points.
Syrus saw of course, the self-confidence of the other and said further.
"Who will be here so hasty. If my is (Submarineroid) in attack mode, he can attack your life points directly."
At this
moment, the facial expression of his opponent suddenly changed again.
He was downright shocked.
"So go (Submarineroid), atack his
life points directly!"
The duel was over. Syrus's opponents
fell to his knees: "How could I only defeat this Knirps"
Syrus was
happy. The duel was over.
After the duel, the chancellor
announced that Syrus now been conveyed to an blue obelisk student.
I
do not believe it, I have finally managed. After such a long time.
I
am now a student obelisk blue!
I have shown you all.
I really standing here in the arena of the duel Duel Academy, and I have just won in a dorm-Swich duel test against a blue obelisk students.
When I Think According times; Nobody would have bet before even a penny on me. ... no one has respected me as I am. All have said I do not belong here, even my Nii san has turned against me.
But now, I've shown them.
After the promulgation of Chancellor
Sheppard, the little one is suddenly torn from his thoughts.
All
students had started to clap for him. He could hardly believe these
people who never believed in him, injure him, treated him badly, just
these people applaudissions him.
He looked
up to the spectator stands. There he saw his friends, who
anlächelten.
A little further still, he saw someone. His brother
Zane and Alexis's brother Atticus. Syrus then turned around and
helped his opponent back on his feet. The loser congratulated him,
threw him a few compliments to the head and welcomed him in the house
obelisk blue.
He looked
up to the spectator stands. There he saw his friends who were happy
for him.
A little further still, he saw someone. His brother Zane
and Alexis's brother Atticus. Syrus then turned around and helped his
opponents back on their feet. The loser congratulated him, threw him
a few compliments to the head and welcomed him in the house obelisk
blue.
Syrus then looked up to the spectators gallery. What he
saw brought tears to his eyes ... His brother was proud of him and
smiled.
His brother had actually accepted him that he recognized
his eyes.
Somewhat later all had calmed down and all went to
their accommodations.
Sy went to Ra Yellow accommodation
to pack his things.
So, that was my first cap. Has made
fun .
Please review
And as I said, am grateful for any
help. )