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Chapter 46: The Truth Will Revealed


"This changes everything," Miles shouted as he slammed his fist down on the meeting table. None of his friends reacted they had been arguing this point all night. They were once again back in the Room of Requirement. They had never left after they witnessed the truth about Dumbledore and Voldemort. They couldn't agree on whether or not to loop the D.A. in on the new revelations.

"I think this changes nothing," Zeph countered, "I'm not ready to reveal the fact that I am the half elf formerly know as Dobby the house elf playing the role of Harry Potter, or that your really Harry playing Miles. I think it will confuse our Defense Association, maybe even destroy it. We cant admit we've been lying to them it could shatter their trust and we could lose everything we've been working towards."

"Sorry Miles, but Zeph is right, it's confusing enough for me to keep track of. You are Harry Potter but pretending to be Miles. He's Zeph, who was once Dobby, who's now pretending to be Harry Potter. I'm Abby Hunter, but some of them would recognize me as Nymphadora Tonks." Abby explained backing up Zeph's argument.

"Adding to that, were going to reveal the truth because of what we discovered about Grindewald swapping places with Dumbledore. Then we have Voldemort being his evil creation, but now he's free and back to being Tom Riddle. We don't even know what that means and who's side he falls on , except hes after Dumbledore who once again, is really Grindewald." Abby was standing now glaring her lover down, they could all feel the temperature in the room rising with her anger.

"To continue these lies though would potentially have the same effects you are scared of," Shira finally put her own thoughts on the table siding with Miles. That was unexpected, normally he would have expected the others to team up on him. He was talking full disclosure with a group of admittedly advanced and mature school children, but children they were none the less.

"So we're at an impasse then," Zeph sighed. "Nothing is ever easy for us is it. Fine, sorry Abby, thanks for backing me up but I'll concede we should tell the kids everything tonight. About us, about Riddle and Grindewald. Better to hear it form us them for someone else to reveal it to them."

"I guess the majority rules. I stick to the idea that our story is complicated, hard to follow. Do we also explain our reason for training them, that we need them to become elementals like us so that we can graduate to masters of the Order of the Triad. Do we tell them that I'm a ticking time bomb of rage that could destroy half the country. That I can feel Tom Riddle in my mind, that hes coming our way to get revenge on who he thinks is a corrupted Dumbledore. Our kids are smart but its so much information to process, it sound like some convoluted fantasy story." Abby had resumed her seat and returned to her natural form.

"I'm sorry we have to do this, but its time. The kids, they should understand that it was all necessary to discover the truth. I think we should reveal our true identities and the reasons we took them. I do however think using them to become Masters of the Order would be the wrong move, we should keep that card close to our chest," Shira spoke with a slow determination.

"Plus, I don't really have to deal with the dual identity thing, being as I'm new in school. You humans lives are so complicated." she added with a smirk and a wink.

"Hey I'm a half-elf, I resent that statement. I'm only half as complicated as these two," Zeph pointed at the Hunters.

"Ah but you forget buddy, your also a Malfoy, which compounds your problem making your life easily more complicated then a mere dual identity," Miles mocked his friend.

"Lucius Malfoy's older brother, Draco Malfoy's uncle no less. Your screwed." Abby added with a chuckle.

"Your his cousin," Zeph countered.

"Thorough his mother a Black not those Blonde twats," Abby laughed

"That's it then, we tell the kids tonight." Shira said changing the subject, "complicated humans and Malfoy's."

"Hey," Zeph shouted in exasperation.


Tom Riddle fought against the corrupted parts of his soul attempting to submit their dominion over him, he needed to obtain more Horcruxes to maintain control. The ring was holding his control over this form for now but there was another ring he had in mind that would help. The old cottage that he was standing in front of housed another part of his fractured soul. He lifted his hand and blasted away the protections he had placed when he was a mere child. Black fire rolled down his arms, streaming continuously from his open palms. The unnatural blast of flame bombarded the cage of magical energy that protected his treasure. There was a resounding boom and a clanging like an enormous bell that caused the shack to waver and crumble as he reduced his family's, derelict ancestral home into ash.

A golden ring with a large black stone flew to his hands, the symbol of a circle inside a triangle bisected by a line landed on his other hands index finger. A cool sensation and the glowing of his souls energy as he rebound the piece of his ethereal essence to his body. he had decided it as safer to bind the soul back together through objects rather then attempting to recombine it inside the magical construct that served as his body. He had no idea how his homonculous body would handle then increased power of a recently reconstituted soul. Voldemort, hadn't even ever planned on the control shift and possible reconstruction of Tom Riddle's soul. He theorized that this was Dumbledore's intent behind the Horcrux scheme he planted in his alter egos mind.

Speaking of which, the remnants of that personality was subdued further into mere whispers by the new addition to his broken soul. He had a few more stops on the list before he confronted his old Professor. He appeared inside the cave where he hid the locket of Slytherin, slipping past the enchantments and flying to the island in the center of the water. Vanishing his potion he instantly realized that something was wrong, there was no soul shard here, the locket was old and ornate but it was not the one his alter ego had stolen from Hepzibah Smith. He opened the locket and read the note contained inside. R.A.B. He ran back through his memories as Voldemort. Only one Death Eater had those initials. Regulus was influenced by that jester of an older brother more then he showed. This would be an issue the House of Black was ancient and protected by age old wards that would be a chore to counter. Not to mention its whereabouts were unknown to most, a family secret that only those given permission by their head of house could share

That left the Diadem at Hogwarts, the Diary with Lucius and the Cup with Bella. He waved his wand over his body producing a illusion of his alter ego. It was time he visited some of Lord Voldemort's most faithful followers, he would need to put on a show for them to believe he was their master. It was time to collect the rest of his soul. He disappeared in a rush of black flame.


"Abby, wake up,come on dammit. Tonks, honey please, I need you too come back now," Miles cried as he frantically waved his wand over her performing all the medical and diagnostic spells he knew.

"It doesn't make sense, there is nothing physically or magically wrong with her," He was looking over the results of his forensic spell.

She spanned up with a gasp holding her head. Her breathing was quickened and strained.

"Are you OK? What happened." Miles and Zeph shouted at once as she regained her bearings.

"I was just inside Tom Riddle's mind, I think whatever piece of his soul was in you transferred when he was Voldemort and he possessed me. He's looking for Horcruxes, he is struggling to maintain his grip on the steering wheel. ."

She paused taking a breath, "Before the vision ended he thought, ones with Lucius, a diary. Then a cup with Bellatrix and a Diadem at Hogwarts. he is attempting to recover the first two from Voldemort's inner circle. The last ones the one that's interesting. Turns out that my Cousin Regulus, Sirius's younger brother seems to have stolen one of the Horcruxes before his death in the first war. I think that's how we can reason with him, no on but a Black with permission can recover or remove any artifacts that enter that house."

"Tom thought about our Ancestral home, The House of Black, Grimmauld Place. Looks like we have a visit to pay to my Great Aunties house. Abby started towards the door before realizing that no one was following her. "Come on let's go I've been there before."


A/N


So its been forever, I must have a record for the longest running fan fiction, that not completely abandoned, that updates periodically. So I went back and I think I've finally edited the first few chapters enough to be comprehensible. So my hiatus, life hit hard, I got married and decided with some urging from my wife that I should take a break playing around in J.K.'s world and playing massive amounts of table top role playing games and try to create my own original fiction. Well I have and it's pretty decent, it has some similarities to this story a bit, decided to use the blood runes and some of Miles and Zeph's characters as inspiration.

I am nearly finished with the millionth edit and rewrite of this book and I will be self publishing through amazon or hopefully getting an actual publisher to sign me. I'm planning on getting this story to the point of Army of Death. I will keep you guys posted on the real book which has the working title of The Blake Chronicles or The Chronicles of the Last Blake. Its a first person epic telling the tale of Alexander Blake a mage that is travelling through the Multiverse attempting to avenge his family. He is attempting to gather the ability to defeat his arch-nemesis Xanatos an inter-dimensional deity who bargained with His ancestors and bestowed magic on his family in the first place. The link for this story is provided in my profile.

I can't guarantee that the updates will be frequent but they will be coming.

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