I'd like to say, although I do appreciate constructive criticism, please don't go ahead and think it hurt my feelings. But I do appreciate it. Also, I will make her fail TWO subjects, okay? Math and Geography. I'll go back and change it. Also, she isn't a Mary-Sue, because like I said in the Preview, this isn't a romance fan-fiction. The age difference is to great for that.
But like I said, I'll go back and change it, and thank you for the criticism.
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Haley shot up in bed, a severe pain working its way up from her chest and stomach.
"Mom.." she called wearily, knowing full well her mother couldn't hear her clear across the house.
A sharp burst of pain shot through her body, and she held back the urge to scream. She clenched her teeth as she stumbled out of bed and ran towards the bathroom, every step causing great pain.
She knelt down in front of the toilet and lifted the seat, ready to vomit. But even though she could feel the urge to puke, she couldn't. The pain was excruciating, and she sat there whimpering. Finally she puked into the toilet, the small scent of blood lingered in the air. She looked down to see dark-red in the toilet.
"Haley?" her mother asked, worriedly.
She had heard someone puking and ran to the bathroom as soon as possible. The door cracked slightly as she walked in to see her daughter in front of the toilet with tears swelling up in her eyes.
"Mom," she began, "Take me to the hospital."
And with that, she collapsed.
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I know, I know, extremely short chapter. But, I kinda wanted to go ahead and add this much. But I promise, this will be the ONLY chapter this short.