To all of my readers:
Relax, this story is not being taken down, abandoned or up for adoption. I've been freakishly busy for the past year and I'm starting to get caught up on a few things; one of them being my stories. Now, I've read over this story and thought: Wow. Just wow, Pax. I didn't think I could sink so low in my writing, but there it is in black and white; published for the world to see with over 175 people waiting for you to update this... monstrosity.
Well, after a round of defending my writing from myself, I've decided to rework this bit of 'entertainment' and rid it of (hopefully) 50% of the crap. There were a few elements I liked and the core of the story will remain the same... but I just feel the need to rewrite this.
Any and all reviews will be accounted for and I will personally try to answer them all as quickly as I can. If there was anything you liked about the story, feel free to tell me. If I liked it too you can bet to see it in the revision. If I didn't like it... defend it. If you can convince me to keep it, I might just let it slide. If there was anything that made you slap your forehead or roll your eyes while reading, let me know. Trust me, I want you to tear this horror apart so I can rebuild it better than it was before.
To all the people who read this in it's entirety, mention the name Azzil Malus in your review and I'll put you at the top of the list to get a message from me. If you're an "Anonymous" reviewer, put your email in the field or in the message and I'll send you a message back.
Cheers.
