(WHOLE STORY REVISED as of DEC.25, 2008) (PS.. Don't worry guys, the plot is not changed... i just fixed some grammar and spelling errors and added some stuffs..^^)
WARNINGS!!!
There would be a lot of NITCHIE until CHAPTER 6!
The main story starts at CHAPTER 7 so skip if you don't like reading Nitchies...!!!
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Wow.. this is probably the longest chapter i have ever written! Maybe it's because my request for a category got approved(the 'Mirmo Zibang!' Category!)..
this is my first camp rock fic by the way...
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I LOVE CAMP ROCK SO MUCH!! JOE AND DEMI FOREVER!! WAHAHA!!
DISCLAIMER: I DON'T OWN CAMP ROCK...IF I DO THEN MITCHIE AND SHANE WOULD HAVE KISSED!!AND MILEY CYRUS(and i would never want her)..
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CHAPTER 1: Competition
"Looks like my search is over." Shane said as he walked down the stairs and went to Mitchie's side.
"Depends on who you're looking for, hi I'm Mitchie." Mitchie said as she lend her hand for a handshake.
"I'm Shane." he replied as he accepted her hand. "You up for a canoe ride later?"
"I wouldn't miss it."
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Mitchie and Shane went to the lake after Final Jam. They went up for a canoe ride under the bright full moon. The light from the moon illuminating them, making the night more romantic. Happiness clearly written on both faces.
Shane can never think living without her. Her mystery girl, the girl he met at the kitchen, the girl who lied to him, the girl who makes him feel so right.
"I wonder how you make me feel like this?" Shane asked Mitchie as they stopped rowing in circles.
"Feel like what? Betrayed?" Mitchie sighed then looked at the lake. "Sorry about that."
"Well, I was gonna say calm and happy but betrayed is better." Shane said sarcastically.
"Well, if you think so pop star. Are you disappointed that I'm the girl you've been looking for?" she asked as she looked at him straight in the eyes.
"Yeah, I'm expecting someone much better." he joked but Mitchie took it seriously because she looked down at her feet. "Hey, I'm just kidding. I'm glad you're the girl."
Mitchie's head shot up. "What makes you say that?"
"Well, since the beginning of summer I've met different parts of you. From the one covered in flour," Shane was interrupted by Mitchie's sentence.
"You know that's me?!" her eyes widened.
"Of course I do. Who else in this camp has the guts to talk back to the Shane Gray?"
"Jerk." she giggled. They both laughed.
"Hey, I was just kidding." Shane said.
"I know pop star."
"It's a rock star!"
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As the two of them walk back to their cabins, Shane wanted to introduce Mitchie to his two best friends so they walked to the Connect3's cabin.
Shane opened the door and found his friends inside. Nate is strumming his guitar while Jason has binoculars to do some bird watching. "Hey guys, we have a visitor!" he and Mitchie went inside.
Jason looked away from the binoculars to look at them then gave them a greeting then went back to what he was doing. Nate just stopped strumming his guitar and stared at Mitchie…? With…awe?
"Her name is Mitchie Torres. She's the girl." he and Mitchie walked in. Him holding her hands.
"Obviously." Nate said looking at their hands then rolled his eyes. They both blushed and let go.
"Dude! You're near me but I can't touch you!" Jason said, still have the binocular on his eyes.
Shane grabbed the binoculars. "Wow." Jason exclaimed as the binocular was removed on his eyes. "Nice meeting you Mitchie…again! This calls for a group hug!" he gathered all of them and group hugged.
"Nice meeting you too Jason but I think I need some oxygen, now." Mitchie said. "And a second greeting after the other is not really necessary."
"Do you like birds?" he asked, ignoring her words.
"Y-Yeah.." she said. "I guess so."
Mitchie stayed inside the Connect3's cabin for about two hours. Talking with Nate and Jason while Shane just sitting at the side, looking at them, or more like looking at her.
"Mitchie, don't you think it's time to go back to your own cabin?" Shane said as he saw the clock reads 10 minutes before 11 o' clock in the evening.
"Oh geez!" Mitchie slapped her forehead. "Brown's gonna kill me! See you tomorrow guys!" Mitchie stood up and went to the door.
"Want me to go with you?" Nate asked.
"No thanks. I can do it." Mitchie refused.
"I insist. Come on." Nate stood up to and went outside with Mitchie but before passing the door he looked at Shane then smirked.
'What was that supposed to mean?' Shane thought to himself. 'And I should be the one to walk her back!'
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Another day came and after this day would be goodbye at Camp Rock. They spent the day hanging out with each other. Mitchie hang out with the Connect3 because Caitlyn got home early since she has to set up her boring boarding house blah blah.
Mitchie didn't got bored. All the three guys were really fun to be with. Shane would tease her sometimes, Nate is really worth to talk and he always back her up for Shane, and there is Jason who is always talking about birds and birdhouses.
"Hey Mitchie, wanna go for a canoe ride tonight?" Shane asked her.
"Sure." she nodded her head.
"Wait a minute! You already did that yesterday night." Nate said. "What if me and Mitchie go for a canoe ride first?" he said then blushed a bit. "Well I was just thinking that you and Mitchie spent a lot of time together already at camp while we…" he kept rambling and rambling.
Shane looked at Mitchie, pleading. "Shane, Nate has a point."Mitchie said while Shane's face fell.
"I can't believe this! You made another history! Who in the world would choose Nate over the Shane Gray!" he exclaimed as he pretended to be hurt by putting his hands on his chest and scoffed. "Come on Mitchie!"
"Oh no. I'm not turning down the Shane Gray's offer, I'm just turning down plain ol' Shane Gray." she replied. Shane smiled.
"Alright. But you better come back fast! Watch your moves Nate." Shane said to Nate the tapped his back.
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"A canoe ride is definitely the best." Mitchie said as she looked at the sunset. "It's so beautiful."
"It's really is." Nate agreed, but not looking at the sunset, but at Mitchie.
He didn't know why but even if he knows that Shane like this girl he still liked her but he didn't know why. Since the first time he saw her last night, it all seemed so fast. So now, he is trying to catch Mitchie's attention the whole day from Shane and even got all the way here in the canoe ride.
"I might melt." Mitchie said as she faced him. "Do I have something on my face?"
Nate blushed. "N-No! I'm just thinking of something."
"Oh… How long have we been here?" she asked, remembering Shane.
Nate looked at his watch. "Thirty minutes." Nate sighed. "Shane would kill me."
"Does that mean we'll be going back now?" she asked.
"I guess. But I still want to spend some more time with you." Nate blushed as he realized what he just said.
"Well, it wouldn't hurt Shane to miss one canoe ride right?" Mitchie smiled at him. Thank God she didn't thought of anything. Nate nodded and smiled back. They laughed and talked and stayed there until its dark.
Mitchie discovered a lot of things; how Connect3 was created, about Nate's family, and some personal stuffs about him.
"Uhm, Nate? If you don't mind me asking… Why did you broke up with Miley?" the brunette asked hesitantly.
Nate smiled at the question. "That is the best thing I've done ever! She such a pain in the ass. She's nice and humble when we first met but as she got more famous and popular she became a jerk. She thought she's the best and step down on people." Nate said. They both laughed.
"Like Shane?" she asked.
"Yes. Like Shane, but that's before. You changed him." Nate agreed.
"Me? I didn't do anything." Mitchie replied with confusion.
"Oh girl, believe me. You've done more than anyone can do." Nate said.
"Speaking of Shane, I can't wait to see Shane's annoyed face!" Mitchie said, trying to avoid the topic. Whenever she deals with things including Shane, she really felt uhm… how do you say this? Awkward? No. Nervous? Nope. Oh! Maybe out of focus can do!
She can't think right.
"Me too! He is so gonna kill me!" Nate said.
"Don't worry, I'll talk to him." Mitchie said.
"Do you know that you are the only one who can talk back at Shane so easily? Normally, he wouldn't listen to us. You're even lucky if he looked at you."
"Really? I never thought of that." Mitchie said.
"You've done many things but little you only know." The curly-haired boy said mysteriously. Mitchie laughed.
After a few hours, they went back to shore and saw Shane waiting there.
"Guys! Do you know what 'better come back fast' means?!" Shane said, looking pissed.
"Dude, I'll-" Nate started but Shane walked away.
Mitchie faced him. "I'll talk to him. Don't worry about it." she smiles at him. Oh how he loves her smile. She turned her back on him and ran to follow Shane.
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"Shane! Wait up!" Mitchie called, but Shane didn't stop. He just kept walking faster and faster.
Mitchie sighed. It's gonna be harder than she thought.
"Come on Shane! It's just a canoe ride! We can do tomorrow if you like."
Shane stopped and turned to face her. "Just a canoe ride? It's not just a canoe ride Mitchie! That means a lot to me!"
Mitchie stood silent for a moment. "Care to tell me why?"
"Because I love.." Shane started. His face blushing.
"You love?" Mitchie asked. Curious about what he'll say and secretly hoping that he loves her.
"I love.." Shane looked away. Nice going Shane! You're not even sure about it yet! "I love… riding canoes!"
Mitchie's face dropped in disappointment. "Oh…"
Silence.
"I-I should better go back. It's dark and I got to get up early." Mitchie bid goodbye to Shane and he did the same.
"I'll walk you back.." Shane said.
"No." Mitchie quickly refused."I-I can go back myself.
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As Shane came back to his cabin, he saw Nate looking outside through the windows deep on his thoughts while Jason is not back yet.
He walked to his bed and changed into his pajamas then slump on his bed.
He heard Nate sighed.
"Mitchie is such an amazing girl, isn't she?" Nate said then sighed again before he stood up and grabbed his guitar.
"Yeah. She's one of a kind." Shane agreed, thinking what his friend had in mind.
"Definitely."
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-EDITED FOR SOME ERRORS AND SOME MISSING PARTS (LIKE THE MILEY PART)-
So.. what do you think? OOC or not? I found it cute actually..
What pairings would you like for this fic?
Smitchie, Nitchie, or Jitchie?
What a stupid question right? of course you'll choose SMITCHIE!! lol
well, if not, say it..
before i go I'll have some trivias for yoou guys... w/c you all probably know anyways... well anyway..
HERE IS THE FIRST TRIVIA QUESTION:
WHAT IS THE NAME OF THE STORE WHERE MITCHIE WORKS?
the next chapter would be dedicated to those whoever got the correct answer..
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