(My first story- please be nice and review)

Story from Eragon *disclaimer- I do not own any of the characters except Kiara and Ash*

Ch.1 awakening

The world swayed. She slowly got up again, the world still swayed. This was not normal. Normally this kind of magic didn't even dent her energy. Now she couldn't even stand without swaying to and fro like a tree in a windstorm. What happened? All she could remember was playing in Esmerella with the two younger elven kids when the world blacked out. Then she awoke the next day feeling different and when she tried to command water to her mouth like every other morning the drain was too much. What happened?

Once the dizziness subsided she half stumbled to the mirror and to her horror noticed that some of her previous beauty had been ducked. She lacked some of the luster of her skin that all even children had, and her ears were not as pointed. Her complexion looked somewhat human…