Well I was going through this stroy and notcie a lot of errors and decided to fix them.
So here is the edited version of A God by Any Other Name and a NEW Chapter !!!!!
Enjoy.
A God by Any Other Name
The streets were usually quiet, the sidewalks deserted. Not a soul was seen, not shadow walked. It was as though time had paused in this city, suddenly something happen. At first it went unnoticed for its voice was as small as the silence that fell upon the city, but then that voice grew an enchanting melody danced in the air.
It was searching, the wind blew carrying the song. Passing buildings and stores that held secrets within their walls, but the melody was searching for something much deeper, of the nearly unknown. Deeper and deeper the melody went pass pipes and fading walls that have seen the unimaginable, to a place known only to a few.
The melody then called, its voice calling for the Destine. Calling for the pure white glow that appeared hypnotize by its enchanted and ancient words, the glow followed the melody back up to the city up to the skies, pass the clouds and stars away from the land its always known.
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Hermes paused in his playing and looked at the Milky Way stared sky, a smiled graced his lips before playing again. Above him the stars sparkled brightly and the white glow descended following the song that flowed from the god's lyre.
"Hello little one" Hermes said as the glow circled him swaying like a vine in a breeze to the melody. Hermes started to walk the gates that he stood in front of open, he continued to play the glow following.
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Poseidon watched his brother Zeus paced back and forth, his other brother Hades lounged on the throne, one leg draped over the side swinging his foot back and forth. "What's takin so long?" Hades whined "Maybe she got lost" Poseidon offered.
"No!" Zeus stopped his pacing "No, the Destine had never gotten lost" he said before pushing Hades out of his throne. "Hey!" Hades picked himself off the ground "Is called excuse me, feather-head" Zeus ignored him, "You worry to much brother" came the amused voice of their sister Demeter.
"How you remained ruler for so long without having a heart attack is beyond me" Hades snickered ,"She right brother, keep this up and you might actually succeed in sprouting grey hairs" Zeus glared at his amused siblings before looking over the other gods and goddess. Talking and laughing all patiently waiting for the Destine to arrive. Suddenly the door swung open, everyone fell silent.
The wind blew carrying Hermes 's melody inside seconds later the god came in, eyes followed him as he made his way to the four siblings. He stopped playing when he stood in front of Zeus.
" King Zeus, I present to you and all the gods and goddess, the Destine" his voice echoed through the silent room, the soft song of the lyre played once more, the gods and goddess watched with anticipation as the whit glow entered. The glow moved with the music stopping in the middle of the room. Everyone watched excited and eager to see what the Destine looked like, the glow shined brightly taking shape.
Everyone gasp and murmured, never mind that the Destine was not human they were use to that. It was the fact that the Destine was male and had the brightest blue eyes anyone has ever seen. The Destine looked around, partly in confusion and fear.
Finally Zeus spoke "Welcome to Mount Olympus" he said, the Destine looked at him questions in his eyes, Zeus smiled kindly at him before speaking to the gods and goddess "My family come welcome our new member". The gods and goddess quickly surrounded the Destine, all giving gifts and praises. Welcoming the Destine, welcoming Michelangelo, child of the gods.
Well here it is, the redited story, is it better or worse. Tell me please.
Bye-bye! ^^