Hey people!

Sorry I keep deleting it, I keep on editing!

This is my first fanfic. I'd like some constructive criticism.

Please tell me if you like it.

Disclaimer: I don't own ANYTHING!

Prologue

I look into his piercing, red, eyes.

"Please! Just leave me!" I yell.

"Don't worry. It will only hurt for a minute," he tells me, brushing hair away from my neck.

"Please," I say, as slowly, I back away. I nearly fall backwards as rocks crumble from beneath my feet, hitting the freezing water, far, far below. He walks forward, caressing my face and neck. His face comes very close to mine, he smells like blood.

"Such a waste," he says, "You would have been so beautiful. But to resist means I have but one option, to kill you."

"Please," I say, "please," quieter, "please," even quieter.

Jacob. I think. Please come.

Just then I hear the pounding of many pairs of large, heavy feet. He turns around, fear in his red, beady eyes.

Finally. I think, relaxing a little, but my foot slips.

"Jacob!" I yell.

I'm falling, falling, falling.

"Emma!" is the last thing I hear, Jacob's beautiful voice.

I love you, I think as I'm engulfed in the rough, icy water.