ok since i got a few hits just pretty much 20 minutes after posting this story i worked on chapter two, but my surpise came when some random punk decided to dis my story. i understand that you probably wont like my story, hell its gona suck no matter what, did i sit here and proclaim this shall be the greatest story every? no i did not, hell even on my authors(SP?) page it says i suck at writing. but enough ranting about that, flames will be ignored unless its complete and utter bullshit that i have to laugh at the person for writing something so stupid. but he does bring up an excellent point, i am jumping, around but also he seems to think that gringotts runs everything that has to do with money, and also review tell me if i should slow down or give a little more detail, i wont care if you put it in a nice way,
And before i stop, for any future flamers, This story is suppose to be a kickass!Harry or super!harry what ever way you put it, i just really dont want to sit here and write 6 chapters on how long it takes pushing damn paperwork through. or detailing how they go to do something and take that many chapters to write before one big epic fail.
Harry Potter: Through the Veil
Chapter 2
Harry woke up with jerk breathing deeply from another nightmare that kept plaguing him while he slept. Getting up he moved towards the bathroom; exiting 15 minutes later showered and shaved, he started his way down the stairs. When he was half way down he heard softly running foot steps behind him before he heard a scream as a small girl start to fall down the stairs jumping quickly he caught the small girl before she could fall down.
A scurry of footsteps brought a beautiful woman down the hall, harry guessed that where the scream came from, sitting the girl who had platinum blond hair before she ran to her mother with a fierce hug. Noticing both had platinum hair harry figured they had some Veela blood in them; smiling at the mother and daughter harry turned away and started back down the stairs before a heavily French accent cut through the air, "wait! Thank you for saving my daughter, what is your name sir?"
Harry only turned slightly, "no thanks is necessary, and I am just Harry Madam, good day to both you and little one" before heading down into the lobby and towards the furniture store to pick up his orders.
Shifting to Hogsmeade with his new furniture; he started to walk down the main street towards his new house nodding and smiling towards passersby finally reaching his new house he unlocked the front door and stepped inside his new home from now on. Taking out his new furniture he charmed them to move into their new positions around the house while he took a look around at all the easy access points in the house and mentally marking each one.
Shutting and locking the door, happy with his new purchase he started back up the main street towards the Three Broomsticks for a quick lunch. While heading there he noticed that a lot of students around, mentally slapping himself he should have known it was Hogsmeade weekend for the kids at Hogwarts, it wasn't long before he noticed he was being followed by what appeared to be a couple third years.
Turning around he almost laughed at the fearful expressions on their faces; smiling while looking at them he said, "So what do I owe the pleasure of having three Hogwarts students following me?"
There were 2 girls with Hufflepuff crests while the other was a boy with a Gryffindor crest, one of the girls seem to hesitate before stepping forward while saying, "are you the man their calling the savior of Diagon Alley that we read about in the Prophet?" She asked while giving a light blush.
Scratching his chin in mock thought he gave them a smile before nodding, "I guess if that what the paper is calling me then I guess I am. I was the one who stopped the attack on the alley, but please just call me Harry who might each of you be?"
The girls gave a small giggle before introducing themselves as one Nymphadora Tonks and Hestia Jones, the boy introduced himself as Bill Weasley no wonder he had flaming red hair. Giving a smile he said, "and why would you three be following little ol' me around while you should be enjoying your trip on this nice day?"
Shuffling their feet Tonks blushed as she said, "we wanted to ask you a question? If that's alright harry!" She said shyly.
Giving a laugh he gave his ok, "well we were wondering will you protect everyone in Hogsmeade from You-Know-Who and his death eaters?"
Giving a serious nod he replied, "I will protect everyone in this village and anyone I can with the best of my ability." He said seriously to the youngsters before smiling, "no wrong along and go meet your friends"
The three of them nodded while smiling before running off to meet their friends. Turning he kept on walking to the Three Broomsticks not noticing a red headed woman with green eyes give a smile while nodding to herself.
Arriving at the Three Broomsticks he quickly placed an order for a light lunch, paying the total he sat down in a booth he was half way done with it before explosions started to echo throughout the village when someone ran into the bar.
"Death Eaters are here! Everyone run!" With that everyone started to run through the doors trying to escape quickly shifting into the street he saw Order and Aurors fighting pretty evenly against the Death Eaters even though they started to get pushed back. Calmly walking up the street he started to stupefy every death eater he met along the way before a flash of red hair caught his eyes ask he saw his mother taking on three death eaters, but she never noticed the fourth on behind her, the one behind her shot the killing curse at her.
Lily Potter was having trouble against the three Death Eaters; until she heard the dreaded Avada Kadevra from behind her, turning around she knew she didn't have a chance to dodge the curse. Closing her eyes she waited for death but it never came, cracking open her eyes she saw the four death eaters were dead from what appeared to be 6 inch wide hole through the place where the hearts were to be located she looked again and saw a destroyed marble wall in front of her. But what made her gasp was the Sopravvissuto guy standing in front of her with his arm out stretched with an angry look on his face.
Before the two could even say anything to each other a blood freezing scream ripped through the air, Harry looked down the road that made his blood boil the self proclaimed Lord Voldemort was standing over Nymphadora Tonks holding her under a Crucio.
Voldemort stood over the girl before releasing the curse and said, "So this is the spawn of that blood traitor Andromeda Black, you will be a good lesson taught to your mother!" But before he could cast another curse the air seem to go dense and magic could also be tasted in the air followed by an angry scream, "VOLDEMORT"
He looked up to see everyone of the Death Eater lackeys he brought along with his Lieutenant Lucius Malfoy drop dead to the ground with all of their head severed from their bodies and the Aurors and the Order were surrounded by some kind of shield that glowed a brilliant gold. Standing front of him was some man wearing a black muggle suit and caring what appeared to be a bone staff; and a green Killing curse eye and a red Fire eye before he was blasted back by some unknown force.
Harry was beyond piss at the moment he was ready to kill, sending a wave of magic he blasted Voldemort of his feet and twenty yards back, stepping forward he raised his hand before grabbing Voldemort with his magic he raised him and slammed him through a marble slab he summoned, walking towards him he sent a power cutting curse at him while he was groggily getting to his feet.
Voldemort never had a chance to block the curse before he screamed out in excruciating pain as his non-wand arm fell off from the elbow down before being incinerated before his very eyes. That second was the very first time Voldemort was afraid for his life, quickly he activated his emergency portkey barely avoiding another cutting curse at his head.
Harry ran quickly to Tonks before picking her up softly, she seemed to flinch at the touch before she noticed who it was, she broke down crying as Harry quickly walked towards the school, conjuring stretchers and levitating the wounded behind him not noticing how the non-injured Aurors and Order members parted out of his way as he lead a small caravan of injured to the castle. Summoning his patronus he sent it to fetch more healers from St. Mungos
Arriving quickly to the school he noticed how many of the teachers along with the Headmaster were running down the path towards them. Ignoring the questions and shouts for him to stop he kept on walking with the young Tonks in his arms who had fell asleep before arriving at the Hospital wing he gently laid Tonks on a bed while laying the other injured on similar beds before turning and gave a sad smile to Pomfrey before summoning a paper with writing on it.
"Here is a list of all the injuries these people have suffered and what is needed to heal them," he said with a grave voice, "there are more healers arriving from St. Mungos to help they should be here any moment."
As he finished that sentence the door opened and Healers started to rush in. When Madam Pomfrey turned back around she noticed the man was pale. Before she could say anything the man knees buckled and he started to collapse.
Harry knew he was injured since he lost a lot of blood, it seemed someone had got a lucky shot that hit his back leaving a very deep gash, and he started to notice that he was falling down before everything went black.