Chantelle: I guess you are wondering why I am here. Well it's a long story and well I just don't know where I should start from.

Sam: How about the beginning, were it all started.

Chantelle: Fine Sam, if that will make you be quiet so I can start the story

Sam: what it is the best part to start a story

Chantelle: OK Sam, so this is my story started

Sam: I was alone on a Stormy night, then suddenly a Hugh monster jumped out and

Chantelle: Sam. This is my story and that is not what happened and at least I was not the one screaming like a little girl now was I. So Sam are you going to stop butting in and let me finish

Sam: OK

Chantelle:OK, good. my story begins in a place that I call home it's not a great place to start but it will have to do, you see I just move here and I didn't have any friends at the time but that was all going change.


"Chantelle get up or you will be late for school" my mum shouted from the bottom of the stairs.

"OK mum I know" I said quickly getting changed.

just then my sister Amie came in

"Chantelle's going to be late, Chantelle's going to be late" my sister was singing.

this really was annoying so I did what any big sister would do I started to chase her down the stairs to the kitchen

"Mum, mum Chantelle is being mean to me"Amie said being the little cow that she is

"Chantelle stop being mean to your sister and hurry up or your'll be late for school" my mum said as Amie stuck her tongue out at me.

"But mum" I said

"no buts hurry up" my mum said

"alright, bye mum see you later" I said as i opened the door to leave for school

"Chantelle have you got everything" my mum said

"yes mum, I need to go now" I said

"Chantelle have a nice day at school" said my mum


on the way to school


By now I was running to school but Istopped when I saw somethink, it was really hard to describe all that I can say was that it was somethink mechanic, I look at my phone to see what time it was then I looked back and the thing, it was gone, I started to run to school again.


at school


I know what your thinking, to most of you school can be a boring place that kids like me have to stay till 3:00 pm but school can be great if the lessons are fun.

I just made it to school and my first lesson was maths. Maths can be a bit boring but fun if the teacher is fun, well any way I was sat next to this boy. To me he seemed a bit weird but that was what I thought of him, he seemed to hide somethink and he seemed to be drawing something on his maths book.

"can I help you with somethink" Sam said

"No, but can you tell me what you are drawing" I asked

"Why should I tell you" Sam said very rudely

"Well you don't have to be rude about it I was only asking an its just that this morning I thought that I saw somethink that looks like that" I said

the teacher was rambling on about something when suddenly I saw it again the mechanic thing, I looked away then looked back it was gone this was getting freaky but I had one day until the summer holidays.

"I hope you all have a good summer" said Mr Hacket

Mr Hacketcan be a strict teacher and students said that he had really bad coffee breath well that's what I heard and I also heard that on time someone offed him a mint but anyway my next lesson was history and I'm not going to tell you about that because to me it is boring and I think I fell a sleep in that lesson.

the rest of the lessons went well but drama went really well because it is my favourite lesson, my last lesson was English. I find English good because of the teacher Mr Baines he is really nice and he will help anyone who needs it.

school ended finely I thought to myself I was glad, I could sleep in my bed till late and not have to worrier about school until september.


out side school


I started to walk home when a guy came up to me

"Hi sweet thing you want to come with me and I'll give you a ride home" he said

"No thank you" I said

"The names Jones but you can call me Joe" said Jones

"Jones can you just leave me alone please" I said feeling slightly afraid

Jones grabbed my arm and I tried to pull it away but Jones had a strong grip


mean while


Sam was getting in to his car

"Bee, how have you been today" Sam said

"Good" said Bee


back to me


"Jones let go, your hurting me" I shouted at him trying to free my arm again but Jones just gripped harder

"Your coming with me sweet heart" Jones said

"No let go of me you jerk" I screamed at him

Jones just Kept pulling me and I kept shouting at him and hitting him


back to Sam


"Sam do you hear that " Bee said

"Year I wonder what is going on" Sam said as he got out of the car

"Sam where are you going" said Bee

"Bee stay here I'm just going to see what's going on" Sam said

Sam started to walk out of the car park then Sam stopped when he saw Jones holding on to me. He started to walk back to his car when he heard me scream at Jones Sam come over to Jones and his friends, Jones' friends saw Sam come over

"What do you want punk" Said Jamie one of Jones friends

Sam just acted as if nothing was said

"Jones leave her alone" Sam said trying to sound brave

"What is it Witwicky, she's my girl" said Jones

"Let her go and she's not your girl or any ones for that matter" Sam said with anger in his voice

"Come on Witwicky I don't think you reallies who your dealing and I think you should back off before you get hurt" said Jones

"I know who I'm dealing with and I'm not the one who'll be getting hurt" Sam said

"Witwicky now your going to get it" Jones shouted as he threw me to the ground and lunged at Sam

Sam and Jones started to fight, Jones looked like he was winning the fight but to me he looked like he was going to kill Sam and I had to do somethink.

"Jones stop this. your hurting him" I said trying to grab his arm and pull him off Sam.

"Stay out of this girl" Jones said angrily.

I tried again but Jones just threw me to the ground

"Witcwicky your going to wish you never got involved" Jones said as he was about to punch Sam

I had to do some think I just could not stand there and watch

"Jones you better stop or else" I said

"Or else what. What are you going to do" Jones said sounding a bit cocky

I was getting angry with Jones

"I not going to let you hurt him Jones" I said running and pushing him to the ground and started to beat him silly

Jones ran off with a black eye and I thought I saw Jones start to cry

"That will teach you to to mess with me, you jerk" I shouted

After Jones and his friend had disappeared out of sight I went back to Sam

"Are you OK" I said holding my hand out

"Year, I think he'll think twice before he dose that to a another girl" Sam said getting up

"I guess I should be getting home" I said

I started to walk home, Sam got in to his car and started to drive home when Bee pulled over to me

"Bee what are you doing" Sam whispered

"Hi is there anythink I can do for you" I asked

"No, do you want a lift to your house" Sam asked

"OK but no funny stuff" I said

Sam started to drive the car and well we started to talk as he pulled in to my road

"thanks for what you did back there" I said

"No problem" Sam said


to be continued

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