It was a good plot when I first thought it up (as plot bunnies are wont to do), but lately I've realized that this... isn't very good at all. I didn't even have a proper plan with it, and overall it was a complete mess. Not to mention it was co-authored (and by that I mean we each wrote a chapter) and was even crazier with our conflicting ideas and whatnot.

TL;DR, I'm moving on without this story, sorry I can't see it through to the end.