Hey guys, so...I'm going to remake this fan fiction because it sorta sucks and the flow is awkward.

Ugh, I know I should just finish this and get to work on Facing the Consequences (which sucks too, but not as much as this one) but right now, after working on the next installment for this fan fiction and having to reread it to refresh my memory, oh gosh, it was a horrible experience ; A ;

I think I'm a stronger writer now and I really do like the concept of this fan fiction, so allow me the opportunity to remake this into a (hopefully) better piece of work? I'm also sorry for the lack of updates on my other stories, I just haven't had the indescribable feeling of motivation lately, I've been sorta indifferent recently and I've only now noticed how much of a jerk I've been to some people :P and when I'm a jerk, I take it to some pretty bad levels =="

Just to be fair to those of you who were looking forward to the next chapter of this awkward story, I'll let you read some of what I had typed up for the nest chapter. I had fun with it, unfortunately it had to end after I was thoroughly rereading this sorry excuse of a fic.


It was deathly silent. The kind of silence that would make your heart skip several beats in anxiety of something, anything, popping out in the open ready to attack.

He held the gun tightly at his side, taking a swift glance to his partner whose eyes were scanning the area. For a split second their eyes met and the two rolled out of their respective hiding places, guns blazing and shot with all they got. Their eyes focused on their targets with animalistic features appearing on their faces, yet having the feel of emotionless machines designed for combat. For a second the duo stopped, hearing the hiss of the destroyed targets and stood with a moment of pride. "Still got it," his partner praised as she grinned. Then she lifted her heel and...

Snap!

The boy quickly rotated his body away from the remains of their dead prey and towards the girl who seemed almost at ease. There was absolutely no time for that right now! With another second that ticked on the clock, the boy approached the necessary feet towards the girl. She gave him a questioning look, ready to ask what was floating on her mind, but stopped and braced herself when their intense gaze met. He kicked her out the way and jumped back, avoiding the load of bullets spitting at them from above. The metal floor burned from the array of gun shots and the young man breathed with relief of getting away from the dangerous area. She, on the other hand, was sliding to a stop and rapidly recollected her surroundings. He was standing behind a pillar, near a bunch of crates while she was lying out in the open, but was at least in a safe circle for a moment.

"Ugh..." she whined, getting up and then she back flipped out of the way when another round went after her from a different post above their heads. The two winced at the sound of about three torrents getting reloaded and scouring the area."Watch yourself!" she warned, digging into another hostler strapped to her thigh, locking a gun in her left hand. He rolled his eyes and smirked cockily while disposing of his previous piece and retrieved a fully loaded fire arm.

"You should too!" he replied back then jumped over a crate while his partner ran behind another stack of them. The sound of the torrents shifting with the clicks and beeps rang in their ears and they breathed silently. ...He sprang to another stack, higher than the single crate, and narrowly missed the bullets that rained towards him. He clenched his teeth, landing on the edge of a crate and fell back, landing his body onto the floor.

"Kagamine!" his partner cried out and began running towards him. He winced and forced his body to sit up only to face the mouth of another barrel. He glared at it and with just the flick of the wrist he could...


No no no. I am not going to take any, "Your fic doesn't suck!" or anything like that. Look guys, I appreciate the compliments, but I really believe this needs to be rewritten.

YOU GUYS DESERVE BETTER THAN THIS. I AM TELLING YOU RIGHT NOW. All of you are so sweet and kind and my goodness, I just brag about you guys being so nice to some of my friends who know I write fanfictions ^^" So I'm gonna try and make up a better remake and make you guys PROUD. And hopefully wait less than usual.

That's it from me = 3=.

~Ventus