Hey! It's Lola Starz. This is my first fan fiction, so please review and give me ideas!
This story is about Hunter Redfern's attempts to catch a girl-The Raven. He sends Drew Quinn, a distant cousin of John Quinn, to find her. But what happens when he finds his soul mate in the very girl he's been assigned to kill.
I don't own Night World, L.J. Smith wouldn't give it to me for my birthday.L
"She's gone?" Hunter Redfern asked calmly.
"Yes." the messenger replied quickly.
"Gone?' he asked again with an edge to his voice.
"Gone." the messenger replied quietly.
"WHAT DO YOU MEAN SHE'S GONE!" Hunter yelled, releasing his fury.
His voice echoed throughout the room, seeming to bounce off even the most solid furniture. He was amazed it didn't break the windows.
The messenger slunk back, trying to blend into the shadows. It did him no good. It could be pitch black and Hunter would still be able to see that pup shaking.
Don't shoot the messenger a voice whispered in her ear.
"Get out of my sight!" Hunter gritted though his teeth.
The messenger didn't need a second invitation. He sprinted away, tripping over air, trying to get away.
Hunter turned towards the window.
No one in Night World seemed to be able to catch that girl. There was only two people that he thought might be able to catch her, and he didn't let the second one out of his sight because of what happened when the first one was let out of his sight.
The first one had ran off with his vampire hunter "soulmate" and burned down his house, killing three of his bloodfeast guests.
Bloodfeast, that's how he even got "involved" with that stupid girl-Raven.
It was about a year that after John Quinn had walked out on the Rederns. Hunter had gathered nine of the most powerful vampires in the world. Thirty girls had successfully disappeared, none had escaped and they were all doped up. The only glitch was Angelia, and at the time even Hunter hadn't even worried about Angelia's ONE friend who MIGHT know where Angelia had disappeared to.
Midnight stuck on the spring equinox and the feast began.
Ten girls were brought before them, Angelia put in front of Hunter.
He was about to start when he sensed and odd presence. The mystery friend, it had to be. He smelt the sweetness of human blood. He turned at pounced. As he was about to bite, he smelt…..wet dog. His eyes snapped open.
He was about to bite his guard.
He heard a thud and everything went dark.
The next day he awoke. Hunter questioned his guard and got the whole story. The girl was short, had shin length blonde hair, golden-hazel eyes, was around 14 and had a long, thin scar running across her face. She was covered in blood after she was attacked by a raven.
Hunter couldn't believe that he and his guard had been beaten by a girl stupid enough to climb up a tree and piss off a raven enough to make the raven attack her and make her bleed.
Bleed…blood…BLOOD! She had left blood.
It took four days his guards to track her down.
Hunter entered the room with the girl sitting there.
"Hello" Hunter greeted her.
The girl said nothing
"So…Why brave an island of vampire to rescue one girl?"
Still the girl said nothing.
"Raven…May I call you that? Raven, if you don't talk soon, I'll just kill you slowly until I get the answers I'm looking for.
Raven smiled…and pounced.
For the second time in a weak, Hunter fell into darkness.
She always escaped. Everytime he thought he had her, she slipped though his fingers.
But though out the times he had learned more about her. She always wore the same leather jacket, causing her blood to have just a hint of leather in the smell. She was also a part of Circle Daybreak.
But that was the thing that DIDN'T make sense.
If she were apart of Circle Daybreak, surrendered by protective people, then why were they letting her out alone when most of Night World was aching to bring Raven to him…?
The story will mostly follow Drew or Raven, but I thought it would be a good idea to introduce the story this way. Like, Dislike? Review and give me ideas! J