So, I found a huge story on my desktop called the Flock Splits At Last Chapter One
I opened it and turns out I wrote it and its Eighteen freaking pages, just in Chapter one!
I wanted to publish it, so I split it up.
Here is the first part...
Fang's Journey: Day 1
You are reading Fang's Blog. Welcome!
Date: August 14th
You are visitor number: 1,000,220,978
Hey everyone!
It is about 7:00 p.m. right now where I am.
I'm just getting back from work.
Today was the first day of school this year and the kids were being brats.
I'm officially 21 now.
Old guy Fang, that's me!
The way those kids are acting, ah, I got so mad.
Guess I'm probably the worst teacher ever.
Oops! I guess I just said too much!
Ha, ha. Oh well, I'm about to turn in.
I'm wiped from trying not to just thrust my wings out and brag about that to those dumb kids!
But, I didn't and I won't.
I probably shouldn't either.
But if any of those kids get in fight, I'll be like about time!
And stretch my wings.
Oh, well, I'm ranting now so, almost bye.
By the way, any school students, heed my warning, be nice to teachers cause they just might turn out to be crazed mad scientists. (Or mutants.)
-Fang
A doorbell chime sounded and naturally Fang shot up into the air.
He silently stepped over to the wood door and peered out the tiny eye thing.
He saw the familiar eager face of Brigid.
That's right, Brigid Dwyer, the "young for a doctor" girl from the flock's trip to the polar- regions.
Every time Fang saw her, he couldn't help but compare her to Max.
At least, what he remembered of Max.
Tears came to his eyes as he remembered her tangled sandy hair, passionate brown eyes, tall slim form, casual yet careful clothes, her all too attractive smile…
"Stop it, Fang." He muttered to himself.
"She never liked you. Every time you'd kiss her, she ran off."
He frowned at the memory and then ignored the persistent ringing and sat back down at his computer.
Flipping to the "comments" section, he started the hard process of answering the many questions.
Katiekatie from Texas says:
You're a teacher! Um, somehow, I just didn't think that was your type! What do you teach?
I teach Gym class, if you must know Katiekatie. That sure matches my type, don't you think? Anyway, it's so frustrating. I just want to fly out of there some times!
- Fang
LovingRose from New Zealand says:
I was wondering, what happened to Max, Iggy, Angel, Gasman, and Nudge? I mean, it's been like 6 years and you haven't even mentioned them at all. Did something happen? I hope you and Max find each other again.
Well, um, that's kind of personal. But, you're right. It has been 6 years. Wow! But, I'd really like to know what that last comment means?
- Fang
Faxnessfan from Panama says:
I totally agree with LovingRose. You and Max are totally the perfect couple. Are you married yet? Ha, ha. I'm totally leader of the Faxness club! Continue on your journey, fulfill your destiny… find the faxness!
What? First of all, what's with the name? Faxness! What is that supposed to mean? Why do you think Max and I would be the perfect couple and that we'd be married? What makes you think my destiny is to find the faxness!
- Fang
Fang was stunned by those last two comments.
Faxness!
Fulfill his destiny, find Max, it was all too overwhelming.
Fang shut his laptop and flopped onto his bed and cried softly.
How he missed them.
Iggy, with his sarcastic view of everything, Gazzy with his comforting attitude, Angel with her sweet personality, and even Nudge, the chatterbox!
His eyes filled with tears all over again as he remembered the one of his flock that he'd loved most.
Max.
Or, her full name, Maximum Ride.
The leader, the invincible Max, the one that never runs out of comebacks, the bravest strongest person he'd ever met.
The one who'd always have his back, who he'd have killed himself for.
He'd loved her.
Loved.
It was strong word, but it was really true.
He remembered her familiar face through all sorts of times and memories.
At the school, fierce determination, sorrow, pain, yet still courage.
At the institute, passion, horror, loyalty, and anger.
During her headaches, complete vulnerability, pain, terror, and a longing of death.
He'd held her tight and stayed by her sides all through those times.
He remembered her face… smiling, crying, laughing, joking, fighting, bruised, tending to the others, mouthing off, disrespecting adults, and many other scenarios.
By now, he was sobbing and desperately trying to rid himself of her image, her memories, her… everything!
He missed her, much more than he'd ever miss anyone.
"This must be the saddest most terrible thing that has ever happened to us."
He sobbed into his pillow.
But, whether or not he thought it was the worst, it wasn't.
Soo... did you like it?
Imagine, that wasn't even a full page in the story.
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Thanks for reading, next chapter coming soon
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