Hey every1! This is my very first fanfic, so please go easy on me. I'd love some suggestions, and it would probably do me well. I have been reading a lot of stories on FF, so I have an idea. And I'm putting my thoughts straight into Word and right onto FF, so its not like I'm editing any of this. Rough drafts…nah. Screw it. Unless its like, on my notes page in my ipod. But that doesn't count.
So If you guys have any suggestions for my story please pm me/ REVIEW! But, of course, its gotts work with the idea forming in my head.
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Oh and please gimme a chance, guys! This first chapter's always gonna be slow, cause of, ya know, introductions, extra necessary details, and blah blah blah. Whatever. You get it….. I think.
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Summary:
The Flock lands in forks, soon to meet the cullens. &when new people find out about the cullens and befriend them, u know how uneasy theVolturi happens when a flock member catches their eye, & the school's involved ? R&R! 1stFF, plz b easy!
Max's thoughts/ whoever's POV it is=italics
Voice=bold+italics
Ange=Bold
MPOV
Man, I have got to find clearing to land in, hopefully near place with food before-
"Maaaa-aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaax!" aw MAN! So darn close!
"Nudge! Im workin on it, alright?"
"but im-"
"I know your hungry sweetie," I told her. She pouted but nodded and angel flew up to her. I turned to everyone else- focusing on Gazzy and Iggy who were sneakily conversing, with very big hand gestures. I narrowed my eyes at gazzy's turned back.
As if sensing my glare, Iggy tapped Gazzy and they turned to face me. Gazzy rubbed the back of his neck and grinned sheepishly.
I cut them off before either one could say a word. Strictly, I said,"If you guys don't wanna go hungry, I highly suggest you two stop scheming up bomb ideas and start looking for a place to eat. Otherwise I may have to borrow your tools for a while. A longwhile. Capishe?" I practically growled at him. What? Hunger gets to you like that! You try going without any food but a granola bar for a couple days!
"Non Capisco Italiano," ^I do not understand Italian^,Gazzy, with a satisfied smirk, replied in an Italian accent.
I raised my eyebrows at him. "You don't understand Italian, eh?"
He frowned, realizing his mistake of replying in Italian, and iggy smacked him in the head.
The two quickly turned away in argument and began searching the ground for places to eat, while Iggy continuously smacked Gazzy over the head at his stupid reply. Guess I just ruined a pretty big plan. Heheh. Good.
Man, Ig,Fang and I were all 16 now-looking like 17-, but boy, did someone, *coughIggycough*, still act like a 10 year old. (this made Nudge 13 and Gazzy and Angel 10 and 8) [AN: the ages r right, right?]
Max.
I jumped-which is kinda hard to do in mid air. Yes, Oh-Grateful-One?I replied sarcastically.
Down below. The town's called Forks. There's a house, pale creamy colored with columns out front, under your name on the outside of the town, in the forest. Go there. There's enough food stocked in the fridge for you all over the next month or so.
i raised an eyebrow in suspicion. Alright, a house just does not appear out of nowhere, Under My Name! How can I be sure its not a trap?
How could you be sure the MaxRide Card wasn't a trap?It shot back at me.
Damn. Well…I didn't.Man I am SO not losing a fight with a freakin' voice in my head. But that's besides the point. Yea, that's me…very smooth, Max, very smooth.
"Hey Max?" Ange disrupted my conversation with the voice. "There's an interesting town below. Forks, I think it was? Can we check it out?"
She looked at me with big blue eyes.
Aw man…she's giving me bambi eyes!...Shoot!…
She has got aVerygood point. I would listen, if I were you.
If I could growl in my head, I sure as heck would've done it - right then and there.
"Max?" Fang interrupted my thoughts.(A/N: PretendFangnever happened…too complicated writing all that stuff in there. Oh, And the two are not in a relationship, but lets just say Fang keeps trying, and Max is being…well, very Max about it. Hope that makes sense…srry-)
I shook my head slightly and sighed, making him smirk. I narrowed my eyes at him. "You called?" I said sarcastically.
Ange giggled. "You didn't answer my question, Max! You know… Forks?" She smiled sweetly.
Soo….. she thought to me.
Yea Ange, We're stopping by.
To the rest of the flock I said, "Surprisingly the Voice decided to buy a house under my name at the edge of town. Guess we'll be stayin awhile guys."
I heard a couple cheers but they became distant as I focused on the Voice's dreadful words: Don't forget that you start school Monday, Maximum.
Aw MAN! Can things get any worse?
Woah woah waoh, crazy voice in my head say WHAT now?
I was met with the typical silent answer.
I tried again. Well, what if I refuse. What if I do NOT take the house and I DO NOT have us go to school? What THEN voice?
A small sharp pain appeared in my temple then quickly disappeared.
Now that hasnot happened in two whole years! Are you seriously gonna make me pass out until we do what you say?
Its your destiny, Max. Its been seen in your future.
What? What future? Voice! Is going to school in a town named after a utensil REALLY what my future is made of?If so, then Im gonna have a really, really, bland life.
More silence. Aw crap!
I groaned out loud.
Fang looked at me pointedly, holding back a smirk.
"Guess we'll be staying a lot longer, guys. I'm also told we'll be starting school Monday…so…we have Tomorrow to get ready, I guess." I said unhappily. I immediately tuned out the nudge channel, which had been on a roll since I mentioned the words "stay", "house", and "school".
"I take it there's no way to get out of this right?" Iggy said. "'Cause, you know," he chuckled slightly and flew back up to my left, "school, houses, and long stays do not mix with bird-kids very well."
I frowned at him, which I guess he took as a no.
"Voice?" Fang said. I gave him a look that said, Do you even have to ask? Of course you dummy!
He held up his hands in surrender when my look turned into a hard glare. Man, he is SO lucky he doesn't have conversations with a voice in his head. He gave me one of his rare grins.
I sighed shook my head slightly. "Okay guys. We gotta house full of food. Look for a pale, creamy colored house with a bunch of columns. Should be, like I said, at the edge of town in the forest." We headed off and scouted the forest from the night sky.
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