Chapter 1 Guardian: wds 2,348 - 4,264 (+1,916)
Expanded opening scene
Slight rewords throughout
Tali and Shepard Bedroom Flashback revised
Expanded Med-bay scene
Chapter 2 Normandy: wds 1,290 - 2,442 (+1,152)
Slight rewords throughout
Added discussion between Shepard and Chambers, Character development
Rewrote Garrus' segment, receives message from Omega instead of sends it
Chapter 3 Omega: wds 1,542 - 2,391 (+849)
Slight rewords throughout
Expanded segment concerning Geth back-story
Reworked discussion w/ Aria
Chapter 4 Old Ties: wds 1,404 - 1,987 (+583)
Slight rewords throughout
Added more descriptions
Added flashbacks and expanded the exploration of Garrus' former hideout
Rewrote Seraph as a more… familiar character
Chapter 5 Seraph: wds 1,435 - 2,437 (+1,002)
Near total rewrite of fight scene
Revised med bay scene (partial)
Chapter 6 Correspondence: wds 1,338 - 2,396 (+1,058)
Minor additions
Added explanation for Retro-Virus' function
Expanded Tali's letter to Shala
Chapter 7 Nor Hell a Fury…: wds 1,835 - 2,560 (+752)
Slight rewords throughout
Added more descriptions
Moderately lengthened the knife fight
Added the storm and rewrote the ending of the chapter
Chapter 8 Downpour: NEW Chapter : wds 2,048
Goes into greater character exposition for Tali and Shepard
Chapter 9 The Contract: wds 1,435 - 1,778 (+343)
Minor rewords throughout
Revised the engine room discussion
Added brief scene with Garrus contemplating the losses of the crew
Chapter 10 Kahje: wds 1,719 - 2,639 (+920)
Expanded Myrik's inner dialogue
Minor additions and rewords throughout
Chapter 11 EDI: wds 1,734 - 2,135 (+401)
Minor additions and rewords throughout
Chapter 12 Resurgence: wds 1,720 - 2,648 (+928)
Minor additions and rewords throughout
Mild expansion of Husk fight
Chapter 13 Intervention: wds 1,881 - 2,330 (+449)
Minor additions and rewords throughout
Added ambush against Collector infantry
Chapter 14 Catharsis: wds 1,295 - 2,235 (+940)
Minor additions and rewords throughout
Added discussion between Tali/Kasumi
Chapter 15 Admiral: wds 1,612 - 2,176 (+564)
Minor additions, including Tali's discussion w/ Yeoman Chambers and internal dialogue.
Chapter 16 Brigand: wds 1,694 - 2,455 (+761)
Minor additions and rewords throughout
Explained Kepral's syndrome in minor detail, (built upon explanation in the codex)
Expanded the warehouse search and Thane v. Veraidian fight.
Chapter 17 Ancient Khelish: wds 1,285 - 2,024 (+739)
Rewords and additions throughout
Revised opening scene to flesh out Shepard's character a bit more
Expanded the proposal scene: Thank. You. Miraza!
Chapter 18 Status Quo: NEW chapter wds 1,661
Story pacing chapter
Chapter 19 Catalyst: wds 1,337 - 1,492 (+155)
Minor rewords and insertions
Chapter 20 Vanguard: wds 1,898 - 3,036 (+1,138)
Minor additions and rewords throughout
Partial revision of the fight scene
Expanded opening scene
Expanded details about Surviving salarians
Chapter 21 Recollection: wds 1,447 - 1,740 (+293)
Minor additions and rewords throughout
Revised the trial scene
Chapter 22 The Council: wds 1,475 - 1,704 (+229)
Minor additions and rewords throughout
Chapter 23 Intrigue: wds 1,382 - 1,976 (+594)
Minor edits, additions and revisions throughout
Expanded opening scene
Rewrote Thane's internal dialog
Chapter 24 The Presidium: wds 1,773 - 2,426 (+653)
Minor additions and rewords throughout
Expanded ambush scene
Chapter 25 Na'Vera: wds 1,721 - 1,969 (+248)
Minor additions and rewords throughout
Expanded Thane's internal dialog
Chapter 26 To Stand on Ceremony: wds 2,147 - 3,264 (+1,117)
Minor additions and rewords throughout
Added "Confession scene" to the beginning
Expanded the after-ceremony section
Chapter 27 Shel'lahia Bahnté: wds 1,594 - 1,862 (+268 net)
Minor additions and rewords throughout
Rewrote opening scene to avoid unnecessary contradiction of M-E cannon
Reworked the 'undressing' to make Shepard seem less the bystander
Chapter 27.5 Shel'lahia Bahnté Explicit: wds 2,665 - 2,935 (+270 net)
Minor additions and rewords throughout
Revised Shepard to seem less like he'd almost talked himself out of it, but kept his concern for Tali's wellbeing
Refocused the chapter on the character's emotions (less focused on the physical aspect)
Chapter 28 Alliance: wds 1,753 - 2,236 (+483)
Expanded the opening scene
Revised the shower scene
Expanded the conversation with Legion
Chapter 29 Resolve: wds 2,005 - 2,972 (+967)
Slightly lengthened the Garrus/Tali intermissions
Expanded the opening scene and warehouse descriptions
Substantial additions to the pre-fight dialogue and the fight proper
Chapter 30 Progress: wds 1,687 - 2,420 (+723 (1,398 new))
Added Garrus Intermission segment at beginning of chapter
Expanded original opening scene
Near total rewrite of GDF scene
Added Shepard and Tali sparring
Chapter 31 Reflection: wds 1,642 - 1,676 (+34 net)
Minor rewords and additions throughout
Chapter 32 Negotiations: wds 1,576 - 1,738 (+162)
Minor rewords and additions throughout
Chapter 33 Justicar: wds 1,995 - 2,066 (+71 net (829 new))
Deleted X's death scene, set buildup to next chapter in its place
Moderate additions to Tali/Shep argument
Added description of the Carthena
Moved conclusion of argument into this chapter.
Chapter 34 Spectre: NEW Chapter : 2,003 wds
Revision of [Redacted's] death
Added net 4,440 words, 7,271 new
Chapter 35 Sigma 23: wds 1,655 - 2,122 (+467) (+1,236 new)
Revised the Impetus/discovery of Sigma 23
Substantial additions and rewords throughout
Chapter 36 Assault: wds 2,904 - 3,968 (+1,064)
Minor revision of Tali's knife scene
Moderate additions and rewords throughout
Added Tragfalgar's perspective on the assault (from the outside)
Added to Shepard's team's progress
Chapter 37 Dog of Hades: wds 2,113 - 2,556 (+443) (+901 new)
Added the quarian squad v Cerberus ops
Reworked Shepard & co singularity
Chapter 38 The Needs of the Many: wds 2,107 - 2,337 (+230) (+483 new)
Added to the Harbinger fight
Revised the ending of the chapter.
Chapter 39 Reunion: wds 1,450 - 2,109 (+659)
Minimal additions and rewords throughout
Added brief snippet with Synn mulling over his past
Moved the ending of Khetros Naiva to this chapter and revised it somewhat
Chapter 40 Unity: wds 1,653 - 2,498 (+845) (1,064 new)
Revised opening scene
Revised the Conclave meeting
Added Legion's perspective on the quarian/geth alliance dilemma
Revised the chess scene: added Legion/Tali/Shepard discussion
Chapter 41 Dyson Sphere: wds 1,581 - 2,116 (+535)
Moderate additions and rewords throughout
Expaned EDI's scene
Reworked the ending scene
Chapter 42 Khetros Naiva!: wds 2,087 - 2,709 (+622) (+1,223 new)
Significant additions and revisions throughout
Revised and expanded opening and second scenes
Rewrote the majority of the fight
Revised X's death to bring it more in line with Shepard's persona
Rewrote ending scene
Chapter 43 Reprieve: wds 1,311 -1,994 (+683)
Minor additions and rewords throughout
Added dialogue between Shepard and Grunt
Chapter 44 Shore Leave: wds 1,930 - 2,338 (+408)
Minor additions and rewords throughout
Moderate expansion of end scene.
Chapter 45 Arrival: wds 1,935 - 2,011 (+1,374 new)
Near total rewrite of the chapter, preserved the opening scene with moderate revision
Chapter 46 Invasion: NEW Chapter: 1,815 wds
Details the beginning of the conflict proper
Chapter 47 Genocide: NEW Chapter: 2,091 wds
Harvesting efforts and the efforts to save Earth
Chapter 48 Synn: wds 2,008 - 2,494 (+ 486) (+1,132 new)
Substantial revisions and rewords throughout
Deleted the sections concerning Reaver and refocused the chapter on the titular character
Chapter 49 Pathogen: wds 2,255 - 2,586 (+331) (+1,066 new)
Moderate additions and rewords throughout
Chapter 50 One Good Turn…: wds 1,610 - 2,438 (+828) (+1,081 new)
Significant additions, rewrites, revisions and rewords throughout
Enhanced the significance of the Reapers gaining control of the Citadel relay.
Chapter 51 Stronghold: wds 2,534 - 2,967 (+433) (+805 New)
Moderate revisions and additions throughout
Added Reapers' trump card
Chapter 52 Revelation: wds 3,154 - 6,148 (+2,992) (+3,901 New)
Significant expansions and additions to and of combat sequences
Rewrote the Singularity scene
Rewrote section on "Silence" and the Reapers' origins
Expanded plot details (cannot explain without spoiling)
Chapter 53 Aftermath: wds 2,296 - 2,180 (-116) (+1,453 New)
Moved the second half to the next chapter
Moderate additions and rewords throughout
Chapter 54 Awakening: NEW Chapter: 1,605 wds
Tali's new Veil (finally)
Moved the ending of 'Aftermath' here