Hello! So this is my LOF story and I'm really excited to write it! I will NOT be requiring a certain amount of reviews for chapters because I think that's crappy! But I REALLY appreciate reviews and they DO help me write faster! I really can't wait to start sinking my teeth into this story and I promise I will update as much as possible (once every week or so)!
Disclaimer:
"Why do I have to do this again? Groaned Jack as he sharpened his spear.
"Because LiveLoveWrite-93 doesn't own this story! And we don't want her to get in trouble" Simon said sweetly.
"UH FINE! LiveLoveWrite-93 DOES NOT own Lord of the Flies which belongs to…."Jack stopped and looked at Simon in embarrassment.
"William Golding" Simon said trying hard to fight his growing smile.
"I WAS GOING TO SAY THAT I was just pausing for effect!" Growled Jack who was blushing like crazy.
~Prologue~
Faster...Faster…Faster! Elise's thoughts screamed as she flew through the dense jungle. The faster Elise ran the faster she would get away from him. Even thinking about him sent shivers down her spine. Those eyes…how they glinted with poorly concealed malice. That smile that was as crooked and black as his cold heart. Those hands stained forever with blood…the blood of innocent lives that met terrible fates. Elise's vision became slightly blurred as she felt her eyes well up with unshed tears her heart contracting painfully in her chest. Suddenly Elise felt herself falling as she tripped over a large charred log in her path. Cursing she rolled into a menacing bush filled with needle sharp thorns tearing into her flesh. A sharp cry escaped her throat as she felt her ankle flare with sickening pain, she didn't know if she had sprung or broke it but she that she wouldn't be able to stand. Elise began to frantically crawl through the dirt her only thoughts repeating in a frightened mantra
faster…faster…faster.
"Hello dear Elise" a dark voice chuckled at her pathetic attempts at escape. Elise starred up in horror as he slowly made his way over to her with jungle cat-like motions stalking their defenseless prey. That's exactly what I am…his prey! Like a helpless mouse in the claws of the hungry cat and they both knew it. Elise cried out in anguish knowing his wicked plans for her. She couldn't take it anymore and her terror had built up into a tidal wave of raw emotions. Images flashed through her mind…
The boy with the mulberry birthmark smiling and waving as he was engulfed by a raging orange inferno…
The way that boy's body sounded as it made a sickening crack and his shattered glasses next to his bloodied face…
The boy with the sweetest smile and bluest eyes full of compassion and love crying out for mercy….
And the boy with the most perfect crooked smile, and tanned face, the way his hands felt…their perfect sunset…their first kiss…
Elise began to scream with every ounce of her being as she felt her tears fall steadily on her tanned and dirt legs. The hunter smiled as he sauntered towards her picking her up by her neck and squeezing with his massive hands. No, no, .no PLEASE! Elise's last thoughts as she faded out of consciousness and her world turned dark.